【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
7 R5 R  U8 Q. J' ]2 D! \& M/ sxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
! ?. ~& N0 ^! Y6 j& T$ \vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

$ A9 d' ]) r$ Z2 K" M: K- o6 w& t. P再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
  }1 j. G! M9 }6 x皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 G$ z) h7 f* g' ^" ~. P6 Z& x9 v$ z( o凝视明月 我心欢畅
0 G7 B  A: e" _' L- g: O& {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 G; v' F- x) p# W, \5 p月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
" O" y2 B% z$ t* a* E8 D( U- p8 qSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
) F2 A3 }. U& U6 h$ l+ j我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
/ q$ k3 L, _3 V" j, kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
; [- S" h5 _: YEvery other word you utter is love
# H( M, v. k$ P, _口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
+ z+ O% W. r8 c6 y$ vNothing can compare to my love
( Q% P7 {  x. D4 I$ r3 ~; Z世间万物  皆不能比
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& o2 n* e" J5 ^3 o# ?' y$ ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 F6 ]+ h" ?4 y) y) U5 r# y5 {+ R能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- g0 X* G+ z( D' I整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
  M9 ?9 K/ k6 k6 q; T  W) BI want so much to see inside your heart
5 x7 |1 j3 y* K5 a7 A( `( f2 p我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
* `: r2 F( G$ n7 k1 s你尽管把它掏去
! S$ i/ ]1 J/ P. w: P9 uTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
: D6 ]1 E: N0 |/ U若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
- \( m; c4 v# JI’m still filled with fear
* O/ i) Q% S- F- L3 U# C可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
" s- ?# ~% w; e, d/ O真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
9 n. }/ }2 f* X; O0 B+ \1 ?; R9 T" h1 w你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
" ~; g/ n& H9 S# A5 \( n8 _5 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
6 K5 P6 P1 ^3 C& wRambling on about a thousand words of love
( P: s5 m& |9 ?, j1 |0 e向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 S$ r9 E8 w$ S5 L: c3 N从未向你吐露衷情
9 I2 Q- q- j" @9 ?" M# b7 vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 a1 s: O/ C3 @) _' i爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
7 b0 l2 ]- c9 Y从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* N' n8 o+ A# Z) G奈何从未谈及内心
5 b) j" l  y) ~0 O/ ~/ J. CIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
& p. e$ Z) r) B+ D) g7 }' y- ~I would probably know how you feel
7 w8 e  U$ [& I/ a8 f或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
. N& R: ]. \( ]1 K8 d& S爱呀，爱就一个字
. O5 Q2 f7 ~' J3 W- ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
# f- t8 k% c) [5 o9 C我多想向你表白
But I never did
2 c. C( V$ ]; Q8 ^: J却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
/ Y0 V- [- {3 z) R/ nIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
+ |! o. w9 w6 H9 J, h: G/ ]  I" }) \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  I/ i5 _" m" i2 W3 ]今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
4 c% o' M5 R& T3 M( T2 rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! h$ `4 [% J  O. L不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
; T0 x! \' y0 d% [可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
, z9 C( B/ K3 k# q6 P( F# Y爱呀，爱就一个字
6 v, x7 q; R$ ^8 gWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
7 ]4 I3 B9 s. g( J7 h8 ~" O$ T0 PI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
0 Q; H. f/ J! ~. b( wBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 W& k. \2 i7 Z+ M; F& R# Q只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
7 k* H9 l( S3 R! @5 D# }假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 L; J1 C4 o6 g不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
1 u  C" D2 t/ I" t- aEntrust my love within your heart
! `- s( U' N! E, S  J: C- e- D从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
: S, K5 W. ^9 O0 L# t- ]  X从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

5 V9 T: r4 f8 ]/ f不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。