【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

& C/ H4 i& `  q# X一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

  y7 c) z" |- V4 l  o2 H; m" N再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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2 z/ L. R7 j; E: n1 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 W. ]$ t0 O( x* P4 n7 N3 g+ ]5 t皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
4 o2 I* |  }( g( }, w* F, k/ h% uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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. B2 R) B9 W" ~, y- z; f- Q8 NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ L0 c1 m' R2 @( w) o3 }凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
/ w1 j6 F4 `6 l) b/ eThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 l8 g: X9 G& b' _一片丹心 照耀夜空
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+ t( }* p% O; DWith the moon kissing it every night
% E, W5 e: m& C看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
% d7 D& I( x3 q1 {+ k% CSeeing the sky content with its love
8 {) F9 W, C) ?* ^! @3 h6 P夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
* D0 M: @; ]8 n; J. J1 H我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
1 p  n; t2 A$ f2 d) w怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 V! _! t0 j( O1 q3 t8 ?" ]3 v我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
4 ?" h" j/ H/ t% Q& G/ WEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
& C2 X0 d2 z# E4 GI really want to know just how much you love me
2 v0 z- o) j: }8 g真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
2 \1 j) d5 G; k: S  bI love you I love you with all my heart
0 S) P. F* m" q0 [爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
7 N: P  K5 `) S7 u* w/ nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 a4 L, T) \. o4 {整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
0 D  {+ n4 F$ h1 T- P2 u. p0 h2 AI want so much to see inside your heart
0 K& M$ |4 ^" {我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
; u1 o8 Z8 i6 d你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
5 {8 Q) ~' k4 o7 X# T% dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 I+ W  `# p" ~4 B1 d你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
0 L1 l# W. M2 T& Z/ Q* g0 o- ]I regret not dying
5 g* R9 C3 E8 F真恨不能 以死明志
$ o+ P1 E! `, y- E% ~" U! ^I only have one tongue
1 y& c' V0 x; \+ `3 Z) K8 ^我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
5 G2 N$ z9 s+ R4 UIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
* d2 t& I4 p; z+ m( g7 r你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% O5 |! Q9 e( F若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
' C; A- }/ ^$ g, Y' i% o# HRambling on about a thousand words of love
6 q( P: I0 ~* z: }! s向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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. n/ s$ [. u7 {4 \6 kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 a$ @9 m. n$ J2 H; Z  U! g3 a2 ^从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. G# r! x( v5 w( d! B7 L爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
  P! F2 u1 p% P对你一见倾心
( s( @9 E4 u' t$ ZI already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
8 p) I+ R7 B1 x$ l& |  [We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
' t5 R, D! J1 _( v/ Q3 q: JBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: {# ^; d* z  T3 Q' Z0 A4 @% t" V7 P奈何从未谈及内心
- ^! j/ u' w, @: ~  NIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' D6 E3 \/ L2 {8 Q, M+ `若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
% w! O+ o; H6 o: R1 }I would probably know how you feel
  `0 t6 `& c- h2 Y, a9 ^8 V; u或能知你心意
. n2 M! V4 x% @3 V$ q! ^& f- F$ v. rLove… just the word love
% ~7 @, n: `- m5 ]6 c6 ?0 w3 |爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
' I7 L; J7 J, @我多想向你表白
But I never did
# k1 P  N% i5 g* O却始终未曾出口
4 Q9 [! I0 l# S5 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 W$ v' H! f% P4 B; ]( R7 B2 `3 R只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
) r% }5 ~- H. b( h7 d1 D" z4 v6 yIf today isn’t too late,
( m3 }: @% N7 Z" i% K  Y假如还不太迟
7 J0 n# X" L; j1 `; CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 H5 [  p. `7 j0 M不愿这份爱 逝如流水
; t8 l; c4 Q' S2 cCan I entrust it to you?
7 h8 D. M% V7 l. ?可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 u  ~+ r2 `, s* H7 [- M" c9 ]从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

" k# G) ^: F5 E0 q+ M; RLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
% Z' ~* A8 n8 ~; m, k3 _我多想向你表白
- e: p1 g5 Z; v) Q. cBut I never did
& C! L, @1 x1 R9 C却始终未曾出口
" o# h, T$ i( L# x! d$ i% l9 c% SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
5 X7 Q" j3 t/ j. n+ H- Z) bIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
  ?  z" |3 v* z5 a1 u4 m( h5 d# GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
" [+ J% q! s) b  KCan I entrust it to you?
; H( R4 M  f8 R, e8 C/ u. v3 c  }可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
: S0 g  }, y( x从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

9 K0 U% i- U# C8 J9 I6 V& @- f  }! M5 }Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
" W! @' I: x. @' }; Z/ {从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
; I5 ^8 w1 j& J9 u$ e* \  V8 ?老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
( W0 N4 O% ?, B; e/ Q2 D( q刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
" U7 ^/ y7 b0 r老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
- b1 a1 L0 E& G1 Z0 c8 v- h8 ~vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

; d6 V7 m' [# V) L不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。