【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

/ c) p# e4 H+ O% k! v一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

9 j( ]$ g% e) _9 S: v, i+ ~7 _再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
4 u1 `+ k- Z* Q; L6 Y: HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 A; X# n3 U: i. ]4 O% _夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

! Z$ u7 w4 A0 ]: _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# j6 ~, d, x/ W+ f/ a7 y凝视明月 我心欢畅
' z2 P, z2 q" g1 p4 zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; x0 E9 c0 U% M2 S# v8 s6 }月光闪烁 在我眼中
3 l3 S" Q- C4 [- \3 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
; L- J" C0 o' n) |Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
$ W+ a" ]0 W8 G, m% W1 K* SIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
& G! @8 B1 R3 y& @1 V7 t% ZYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
8 q; w7 f$ P: Z1 dEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
. C3 [; a* f- N; @5 x, [I really want to know just how much you love me
9 |. [' `( W1 Q7 p: o% ?3 E真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
4 p3 z0 z: S  s: r# n& @6 GI love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
! H7 V3 F" t2 j7 K$ n, ?Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) y. l+ k) }  ]% f) ]! p* N; `能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 L$ @" s7 p/ [3 N我真想看透你的心
4 w% x& J+ Z7 `: N* O! A$ {. _( \I invite you to rip it out
) N- C5 [6 Z+ R, e/ e) @你尽管把它掏去
2 r* K8 C* {( c6 fTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
+ \7 [# E# _- \' [4 yI’m still filled with fear
' E& E8 l- V6 S( N, u1 n3 F5 G可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ |. v4 N  X7 [7 Q% `- c9 L) H你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
2 ^" k7 j$ p3 M, G/ T' w7 ^我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
$ C$ B5 Z8 ]. yWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 Z8 b/ d' ^$ b4 _6 t3 g6 a& I3 h$ L$ l若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
/ Y1 X! `: E( O* Y5 `/ K/ j向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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' y% q1 Y* I5 K$ LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
4 [6 n8 _' a" R- I) S; c9 tFrom the first moment we met,
* L, ~& F+ |4 [6 r6 C: c8 Q0 U. E对你一见倾心
/ z3 Z$ I- k$ w, v6 TI already loved you with all my heart
4 P% A, j4 f1 {0 b+ M% J6 D3 U6 _从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
5 Z3 S2 @3 X3 s; ]! a你我每天见面寒暄
) z! d3 h4 |6 X( t0 n7 D  sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
/ F9 v, u' [3 f+ i+ w; B# kI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
0 Y4 ^* z' E' a! ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  {! j% @9 i2 q( ]. `" E- I  g1 j只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
7 ?  d  r/ g/ ]' e; F. d' A可否将它 托付于你?
  b3 N! Q" L! o; y* }4 }) EEntrust my love within your heart
, s- l+ h7 W0 E( r9 o5 }& g从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
  e1 u% E$ v5 ^& r+ T6 l5 e. H爱呀，爱就一个字
+ f: D# V& W# I0 B* u2 OWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
0 L$ N# j( y- o# j我多想向你表白
But I never did
: H) p. V% X! A3 e却始终未曾出口
) |/ ]/ e$ p% |$ ]; Q3 zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 E( f( F1 ?0 r, f) x* b今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
4 [3 V% g3 B  b3 D% f5 CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 U' D& h8 u  o; }不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
  i( y, M0 |' f" `可否将它 托付于你？
3 }0 w/ A& ^# c) O4 J% W0 |Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

  l4 T4 O* N# j8 Y! u6 j- h4 P+ sCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
* n" r% _. R, K- z5 m! U5 X! \. ?Entrust my love within your heart
/ c: t" l8 B9 k3 M' `9 \4 r# d从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
0 N7 Q  \! u! l+ B' U刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
. s, |% h" a+ t1 X# t6 Svichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。