【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
- _% S! [: ?& V4 l/ o% Wvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ g: |( A% i: o) U. [1 h皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

8 {5 o  ?( q. |9 g2 r" v- vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
3 W8 k7 R* ~( `0 k* BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
! q. H- }8 j" L+ xThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 q) x' p0 C3 D0 m$ l1 U; n一片丹心 照耀夜空

0 z$ S6 A5 Q' MWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
  a+ X- i' N* d9 K; rYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
- K& O9 \$ X6 H3 O( y7 `) u$ BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- z, ~3 ?3 ^1 m- C% c# Z我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
+ c; ]3 Q, P1 m口口声声 说你爱我
  |4 K/ f. {$ Q& D' J* ?3 W9 kI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
; S) |: ?! X) i: S) S- m. C世间万物  皆不能比

; i5 ^& S$ S4 x( YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
1 L! w5 B2 r# @! t8 t# r$ ]" tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
5 b1 m; q5 ?+ `6 |6 P# jI want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
% F' d) N/ w& V$ v/ g' R9 }你尽管把它掏去
' B: h: m* i, K1 y3 b. C! ITo prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 a6 S7 K7 _$ |5 U7 O2 l2 |若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
" e$ U+ l8 w7 X& E! r0 M: L8 v" m0 n真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
; s$ }# N' [* K5 W) ~' U. m8 T! \我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
2 D+ v0 d3 k; V0 OWith such a tongue as yours,
) j# l3 j/ ^1 i3 J4 m你这张嘴 真真厉害
! T$ v1 _3 z) a3 y/ V: z. hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% o! P3 L, ^2 [! l* V能说会道 无以伦比
6 y$ P0 V: T  g# Q3 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
8 ], T- i0 g" I/ A; O向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

3 p6 k9 R. b% e+ @4 t5 cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
0 k* F" P; j; o5 g/ U. E( ~That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
9 {( o/ X) T7 ?/ g: NFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
; G$ B  f! m  W0 z. J" |, Q9 T* W从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
* \- _' {8 ~! p, j& x4 a你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ m4 X, r: P3 K5 j- f4 C奈何从未谈及内心
( y/ {* w! {# W. ^' }& H! E( AIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! b, \5 ]5 B+ y9 [若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
. \" Y# X; s$ M6 s9 n或能知你心意
  e) w: p7 X7 L2 Y/ K. E5 N+ Q. t* ELove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
1 _* Y# v6 B9 \2 q6 b( ?0 h5 x8 C' UI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
/ z2 v5 f( V" g) J8 b! v% Z却始终未曾出口
5 x3 j! M* c3 `; B" x. m, JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
6 l# Y5 r) L- B: m/ WIf today isn’t too late,
1 v& T1 N2 k* e假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" m! V* w* p1 N8 A  R/ L# ]# W5 ]不愿这份爱 逝如流水
2 P1 U: {, P' q9 o* [Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
& ]8 L/ h# e; q1 X- }+ a从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
, v+ v% k8 j: U$ y# {爱呀，爱就一个字
% i1 b& k) I& O* c. K( Y9 s  XWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
, M/ M' x" r: u4 U+ O: h, i我多想向你表白
/ q9 v% A: A" N- [1 s+ ^3 B9 x. r! rBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
, x: P- Q. }$ j3 m, V$ C9 K# ~假如还不太迟
0 Q% H6 f* [6 T# ^+ R2 X( Q5 ?) _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
) x: Q# I$ p1 l" ?/ K" H9 \/ JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 y* o% w8 e4 ]3 V' S3 u8 q* \$ f不愿这份爱 逝如流水
% P4 F- t6 f. P7 Y1 b: JCan I entrust it to you?
/ p3 y+ t) f/ i: a可否将它 托付于你？
0 N4 Q+ L. s; p% F# N0 PEntrust my love within your heart
' Q0 X, M4 r3 a0 k* `从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
7 j& e- `9 f+ P* V可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
, p  F9 I" T4 Q% \# y- J刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
1 d9 o0 V  \3 x! x" S" F老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
& C- u" [! I- Q2 y- m2 q* evichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

$ T+ A1 {  v/ Z3 U- `# m& w不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。