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[公告] 【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告(参赛视频18、19楼)(比赛结果已公布~)

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发表于 2009-1-1 10:24 | 显示全部楼层
老大:感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作?期待!......
/ A) W2 t+ K+ @. l" U9 I% ixxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04
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一个月前我译了一半,旅游回来再看,自己都看不过去,索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:25 | 显示全部楼层
哦呀,你们都贴在这里,偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大,谢谢提醒; S# `  D8 X, {* ?( a
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

& ?8 k* P0 S5 S# R再贴到这里来呀。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲2:男女对唱. Q* g3 G5 d2 c6 L& n; r: u, ~$ g7 U) `
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ _  E( f4 u8 y% u( p$ G皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀+ i) U# j2 q5 a6 x
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" k- f$ m, [* o夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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) M: a( \5 M: Y7 Q* Q% o) S9 u$ XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness * f5 Z: U' V% h( M
凝视明月 我心欢畅
3 W8 b% F4 n4 {# ]' AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 |/ t1 x/ P, E6 f3 B1 F月光闪烁 在我眼中
2 I% f1 C7 ]* h% C4 v' bThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ P' K8 V' B# ?/ }一片丹心 照耀夜空7 V  E; g6 y  t* c' Z

9 P6 k3 J( t* r' I8 {  }7 wWith the moon kissing it every night
* q4 A7 _  Y2 U% j$ @9 T看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空- M6 o- L7 a& s; L+ |0 v! {1 O" g
Seeing the sky content with its love 9 C2 W6 U8 n7 J8 C) S/ t& [' |$ i
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中  c+ N+ M" q% w/ X/ R
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour $ J% o: r& `8 ^1 z1 [% H
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
" g" \4 L9 J3 A4 V- X! K$ }8 XYou needn’t fear anything
' r+ V* U* U  o9 z% R; p+ G怕这怕那 又是何苦
% o  D* l3 X7 D- M! j! z& {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily( B# J$ S5 M) q7 Y: ]( i
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
& E7 p- {/ n3 F7 b9 M0 l! CEvery other word you utter is love
2 K( l4 e- m. p6 c/ W0 g口口声声 说你爱我
( k0 K8 i- v- `" f; DI really want to know just how much you love me
/ e) q" y% R8 u0 g4 O$ u) I真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
4 n9 z7 I- Y8 q( D$ r: jI love you I love you with all my heart
) Q' t* X0 H9 p7 e- w, t爱你爱你 全心全意9 u) C( T+ F/ L$ g, e1 Y: B; A
Nothing can compare to my love
6 m8 o6 }4 \0 K世间万物  皆不能比$ e. H' M& b; w$ [. C  S
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? 5 h3 G$ S0 N! E( c( Y0 i* W  u
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥?) ~9 H! d$ d" A9 ]; n. B5 t/ [
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 w, \! ^* Z- w1 n8 U" P. v* p整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
5 p/ y+ ~! A! \I want so much to see inside your heart * ?0 C+ D8 m9 U
我真想看透你的心  u* n- K) w( ]  J! C
I invite you to rip it out
" q  ]% w7 e% S( W' W你尽管把它掏去
; `) \- @9 @- e, [To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ l% [. P, A1 \5 a5 ~若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜* I0 Z8 i) |, v2 N0 I( ~; G
I’m still filled with fear
5 |( S" r' G- z2 i可我依然满心忧虑7 J8 c! x7 G6 g( L6 V2 N
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues : M5 S0 w" C" Y- a2 Z$ P
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张0 }( K: N- l6 B# A1 T
I regret not dying
/ N" b! O: E3 ^- d真恨不能 以死明志8 Z2 H2 t2 [9 J& w5 X
I only have one tongue 5 [4 b" e6 y7 q( M4 g0 M
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张$ @- O1 H/ B0 T5 f; J- e/ l" J
It’s nothing close to 100,0005 V1 ~, L! S4 U+ e+ F* y
也恨不得  多如千万1 Z5 |' }' B# i0 e
With such a tongue as yours,
: ^5 `1 Q: H+ [/ }1 `5 ?- v你这张嘴 真真厉害
- b( u( T* I% h, [# s; cYour speech can’t even keep up with it 9 y4 Q& o8 A( z9 C6 N8 t* _& m
能说会道 无以伦比
. U8 m9 g3 a) A6 z# ^; p6 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things   C* h% X7 \" N6 y/ f. K2 o
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
- A1 Z& G1 Y, j+ r; lRambling on about a thousand words of love: W: X" j8 U7 Y: F
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发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲一:主题曲
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+ B+ ^& e1 P5 J& R$ bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) j; r! Y: m" C1 Z& r' X从未向你吐露衷情4 M% ?8 C; @* d' f/ Z/ z" k" v1 F( E
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  M1 R0 ?0 s+ u! d爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
( _) _: i- [' {* ?( hFrom the first moment we met,
) `! @0 ~# ^7 f! r' _- N对你一见倾心9 P6 I8 e% g- e3 E
I already loved you with all my heart6 O+ i* l* }. E
从此别无他意
/ j, b0 @3 q$ q- JWe meet and talk everyday,+ e4 \7 X( q4 u7 M- ^; q
你我每天见面寒暄
, D0 Q7 k* E. S  _& V( ~But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart! S1 }+ w9 I! H9 Z
奈何从未谈及内心
% ]% k& @& z9 a. `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,% T* d$ |3 ^% i! ~( I" x3 R3 H" J5 B
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
2 ?" w$ a8 \) z8 g4 \I would probably know how you feel. R4 F) |/ g* f( F  Y( t
或能知你心意& d( J( B, ]+ j. m9 v3 U) s# |/ O% T
Love… just the word love, `0 C0 F2 v  V; c& F- s; \9 ]0 [( q
爱呀,爱就一个字
. d; x+ e7 R1 S; p- Y9 A5 wWhy is it so difficult to express?" ^2 ^5 ?: a/ |
为何如此难言?
9 J8 J3 _0 W; o# k% jI want to confess that I love you,
3 h2 P, K0 R  q2 w2 T; o" Z; B我多想向你表白
8 k4 e2 z2 L$ y% v* Q, XBut I never did) {, x% s# R5 i1 B5 \6 X4 u2 X
却始终未曾出口
. t/ j( b# f  W9 i) f' HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers' @0 p# ^* X$ E
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
* O/ \2 u! a, g+ S6 M3 ^3 j2 JIf today isn’t too late,
# Z5 ?5 `; `/ R9 E# @: N1 g2 \! V假如还不太迟# Z6 J9 N! c$ [5 A2 o8 V
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 W& N$ Y# K- Z9 j, a' T* M今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思* o& h8 o+ ^6 w+ T5 a$ Z- ]: O& N& E
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  F: @$ ~6 ?1 ~' h  P4 t5 g. o不愿这份爱 逝如流水3 i0 W% E" q, \+ R: D
Can I entrust it to you?
% R- A, b5 `) d& ~1 C+ I& m可否将它 托付于你?
  }3 x2 Y$ E. h, BEntrust my love within your heart& G7 @  k- E  n$ J0 L/ o! O
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去! T# C( W# [& K% C

3 n% k4 z6 ~, {1 N. eLove… just the word love
7 V) r6 m  r) U/ P# M- l) I* y爱呀,爱就一个字+ T" U) W, H; a, L+ h; S
Why is it so difficult to express?# g! p: u  t* d! c
为何如何难言?
' Z! m7 l2 t8 J, p1 s: WI want to confess that I love you,, V+ g! B$ d0 {3 P6 U
我多想向你表白
3 C3 t- f( P, u. v5 MBut I never did' R" I% k: c% Z4 o
却始终未曾出口
3 [+ C9 ?4 p/ S7 G6 ^6 l7 e' eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers! b; {& @: \1 B; d1 v* S
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
; @9 r7 @4 v7 [! s! @, yIf today isn’t too late,
* B( ]; J; Q; |0 j6 O/ l假如还不太迟 4 f- }- B! o5 M
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" U1 s" f; t3 ^今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
& @% D; m; \4 F. k! Y: H) UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& Y" B! M' C- N" Q不愿这份爱 逝如流水4 h. u; d$ ~- h  X; p1 f  P
Can I entrust it to you?
# b' ?, ]; [- B  s可否将它 托付于你?
* B; ?  F7 h) m0 K8 H9 mEntrust my love within your heart& g' {! J  Y+ W3 }4 e; s4 U+ V  |
从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去1 u% ]: ?+ [& h6 b

7 f0 v- K7 D* G9 C3 XCan I entrust it to you?, _# ]2 ^0 d# J5 s2 G' s8 N
可否将它托付于你?9 z. j! f! D) X
Entrust my love within your heart7 b, i7 H( s: e+ j' w9 b3 C2 t' r
从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去
发表于 2009-1-1 10:38 | 显示全部楼层
41# 杏花疏影 & z2 w/ Q* W% G7 O
老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。; g! J' u# i! M: [* @0 \/ I
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~
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发表于 2009-1-1 21:59 | 显示全部楼层
“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握,感觉韵似乎必须押,译词的长短也得基本合”,偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大,但是到了第二首,就很有看头了。
发表于 2009-1-1 22:01 | 显示全部楼层
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老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
( a( w( O) I. s6 P; P刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~
( F  `0 b0 [; j" s+ ~6 q0 C. fvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

& e; A$ k" l, u& S/ i7 X% H$ z不碍事,偶们表慢...
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-1-2 22:05 | 显示全部楼层
太好了,我旅游回来看到大家的译作,满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。
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