【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

  C# n  [; [4 {+ K* [; }& n一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; [6 v* T" W9 m1 c: }/ C! Z7 w. {夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
% Z" `- [* a( ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& y$ Q8 w. _/ }6 a9 H月光闪烁 在我眼中
$ k% h. U# c. LThe sky is happy down to its soul
* E2 ^8 z  m. {# k3 b& s一片丹心 照耀夜空
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! A! ^# ]; }# i, b$ h; _With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
3 O4 K5 s$ R5 Z- q& a0 ^Seeing the sky content with its love
% U! ~4 t: r4 `/ J夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
6 e( g" T/ M$ R. ^5 zIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
0 F% l1 J4 P) p: v& x9 S我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
8 G6 s3 j2 k5 A2 M# E/ b7 l1 Y: H" UYou needn’t fear anything
9 W- }  |0 q+ j8 y- K5 P7 e怕这怕那 又是何苦
! ]0 U4 v6 w( \; BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
* Y" x' K# k3 M* V# a6 n8 N' x2 f口口声声 说你爱我
2 j  d4 i' c1 \! }  c5 }I really want to know just how much you love me
* E4 l. v! [1 m+ ^真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
* m1 N* ^  e9 J0 A) a( E* f3 II love you I love you with all my heart
6 `% {: ^. C1 C: K  K% `" y1 @爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
  h* u* c5 ~" v- ~7 i- b6 x世间万物  皆不能比
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+ b: l% O- N0 B7 _2 M1 @; \: Z9 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
7 ]: u  i% m- L+ O% vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
7 g; C# O) h& g: T* {I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
& x9 S/ }6 T+ T" G* QI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
+ O3 v% F3 t7 t" tTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
( P' t, j' y: g  F7 L可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ @& Z  B9 F; c2 A' g& ^你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 H6 k5 F5 ]+ U. `- q& m& [* Z也恨不得  多如千万
3 f$ T: E# S+ p' C9 J- xWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
  O: [2 b* I0 ^/ Q" x5 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
. y6 {! ^  X' ~, [7 OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

  b: B! l! d. O3 u1 t0 vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 W, ?% m8 V- V' ?8 D5 r! I从未向你吐露衷情
- h  ]& I% @  c' E$ ^* H: p& ?- ~That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  ~, p" x9 C# q4 y, ^/ N% S爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
4 I2 e9 \; J3 z- U1 ?) K/ yFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
; E1 a9 h( s. i+ v5 ZI already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
, I+ H1 v/ Z. l, qWe meet and talk everyday,
2 U. _% F) ~0 U* c. o0 k4 p( J你我每天见面寒暄
9 C0 T1 |" X. {: NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. h) d$ {( ^$ ~! N+ j7 i奈何从未谈及内心
; l( R1 R8 e+ ~6 ~4 eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
# C) J' k; ]) `+ TI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
- @2 t) z3 ]8 _  l3 m4 ELove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
' x( a7 s% s9 L+ X, r! PWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
3 Z0 I& |( G1 g5 ~4 ]( _% l( {+ ]I want to confess that I love you,
; H& G# o4 |+ ^5 n( J( l6 I+ [我多想向你表白
" m+ ^1 p" V, i- CBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 V. k6 w- f% H: q% Q只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
0 L3 z0 _7 s! C/ I6 ~  HIf today isn’t too late,
" h  O/ e! \! A+ q8 u假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# L" d$ {( E* ?. y1 ~今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
7 ?: F- H$ E# E! i' X8 `2 c7 b$ n9 VCan I entrust it to you?
& n- X9 |$ v$ Z, j  k( D, p可否将它 托付于你?
2 v; Y; s5 Z2 G( ^0 M( [# b+ R7 l3 Z& ~Entrust my love within your heart
. k3 K. K  ?& z从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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+ S0 |& x6 Q) M% y  D. a( S: zLove… just the word love
6 K; W1 U/ n# \3 s爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
, h3 F5 N, k6 e4 U为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
, P; z: T0 x: e& J- C  ^But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. m$ W  B$ g& b( M只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
* _9 [! O- m: Q- L1 }If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
$ g; L7 S1 o+ \+ X/ f- \7 xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ v9 K, e3 o* M& {  w7 q. T今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' D' ?" u, A0 a* I' ?7 Z' [4 O) p不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
) D- B" H. @/ U. A$ P+ ], d1 Z可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
" h0 z+ Y4 D4 i从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

6 F& X' d6 o! }1 Z/ X, ZCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
) P; t( T. _9 R4 B( N) \4 r/ X老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
, y4 p" a3 `& a/ @老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
( C, u5 X0 m% X7 D刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
: k4 i6 ]9 `/ r+ Svichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

, d0 ^1 E' G1 E6 L# f, P! a* r不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。