【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
0 D9 j4 o( D, M. B& c3 Xvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

0 o% N( L) D: A5 R1 A( y2 I再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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2 [, s5 A2 ^$ e) g0 eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- O: W5 r* c" q8 D3 ~/ }1 L8 S皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
+ u) h8 X* l$ H2 m: Z9 JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( K' U/ C2 g" g+ P夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

! j! }- o4 C( }- LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
% O9 |) f+ S, {7 e2 r! ^( {8 h9 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
7 ~: J% N, h0 S' M' C. p7 w& wThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 l9 f/ n! T. y: C$ j4 [# b. O夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
& K5 J% V9 h* NIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
0 w0 P) w$ E9 d/ ~  X我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
( |# [$ C- f* J; h9 U% K4 j! YYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 Y! R. p. `7 ~6 V7 D; {, I1 z" E我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
1 f4 l' q, e0 q+ KEvery other word you utter is love
& y9 v$ ?& e3 T5 U2 X口口声声 说你爱我
: z- B3 i0 X- B3 a4 ]* UI really want to know just how much you love me
* i' A# n  \0 _+ ?5 j真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
# k6 L3 G) V4 w/ @+ dI love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
; `$ P5 I' F# r, {Nothing can compare to my love
& s2 A" r5 F4 a) q世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 E  |7 J' e' h2 S6 Y能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
: P* q3 Q4 C* I4 kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( b# r2 A; w$ F: R整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
$ G  a# [2 H( K: X2 f6 {, HI want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
9 x8 l. f6 m( ?; U6 g+ |6 C你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
3 U, J# G8 \2 E5 i8 XI’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 J0 O% ?/ Q6 _, ^3 [5 {. Q: a你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
! P+ ^6 I6 p7 C0 s( k' s( F6 ^I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
0 s/ @0 l3 \' _I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
9 p; T9 L3 x  \; P- b% PIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: }! \8 E. b9 i4 e9 v. T4 N8 J7 n& z若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
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  o( k  Z# e; v4 kI already loved you with all my heart
6 P* y! @1 b* i. A. r从此别无他意
1 ~* N/ X7 Q. y1 E) r, FWe meet and talk everyday,
, s( @- J+ Z; `- W" N+ j你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
, @9 W3 v% q+ V6 Q" |" [' {$ ?If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& i7 ?" A0 ^# Z若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
& Y1 Z# s: ~1 ]# E) x  mI would probably know how you feel
  s5 y* L3 V4 R/ |- ?/ D/ ~; e, u( T或能知你心意
% |7 n$ y$ g) z, k/ n4 ?  lLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
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9 o8 c" `% j+ x$ C9 m. t我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
! b1 p5 s: {+ Z9 _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
8 \/ {2 w4 s+ S+ t! hIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
2 D6 z. v. x. }6 hCan I entrust it to you?
+ V1 {: h1 S0 m, j可否将它 托付于你?
+ @( e* t2 }* [1 X. T7 n4 R, gEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
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Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
1 @2 |# j9 v7 E! z/ qI want to confess that I love you,
3 u# ^; b- T7 y* N3 z2 M" L3 f% ?我多想向你表白
' g) c9 }! K: ~But I never did
却始终未曾出口
9 ~! R3 k. w$ O$ z2 pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 o2 L/ a; j7 \! B4 O7 q/ D只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
0 P4 e+ R' A& H# k( F& jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) x. B8 J' }% o" R6 I今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
2 V  P* ?7 w( p0 NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
2 n1 V0 ~8 L* y+ cEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

5 T8 ~9 u( @3 v( FCan I entrust it to you?
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, Z1 P7 }; p0 D; D6 M- z4 ^& ~: fEntrust my love within your heart
, k$ {! ^* g2 a% h0 J6 Q从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
8 l8 G" H3 x2 Z6 M& `老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。