【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
: k. }, W+ Q' m. d/ u" W% B; p" @( Txxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 n/ f* z" M% F9 U4 d皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
% L; X0 i5 [. R& YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 }" Q" r+ l/ u- E& A月光闪烁 在我眼中
: @. \. t) J" _The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

- I$ Z  m+ ^6 U* s) n. i+ oWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
' I# ?1 P; O- p( X$ _Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
, [9 o# R, A1 T我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
9 V5 d' }9 O$ M) w$ [- eYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
9 W* _) w9 W2 ?6 A8 _4 ^& sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( y3 }6 F0 A% @4 [9 G- F我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
( y' t9 T1 C/ O! d6 b( }/ uEvery other word you utter is love
6 }, x* j( g6 q, V! w6 m- `口口声声 说你爱我
" P9 u, j4 p8 i3 q& G3 Y/ hI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ K7 @2 O1 F2 i. d% s1 \爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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. _1 o* x/ F0 v( v: j% oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 _/ I% y+ d+ {能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
6 x: G6 K3 w9 V# G5 i7 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, F- ~+ w4 O3 g2 P: C3 P1 L整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
! T# `9 _! d% u: l4 l) J0 p5 d你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 T3 A. k  \4 l! V& x, ~( i6 S若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
3 S4 H- v) ^, c可我依然满心忧虑
, I0 F- g* i" K) gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: K. z% f! N( e3 k: B你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
: P+ y, W. n! Y1 ?5 z真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 a# i# V* D3 e( I% c9 F2 J9 E也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
+ i7 @- _6 c, Q" r; T) @0 C3 zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# B: [( x3 f+ C, n. i能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
8 q; ~: `/ l$ B- L. C向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

5 J3 h4 }$ i- P1 [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
8 W  I0 f0 s% j; DFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
  c' s5 S) N0 f7 O( hWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
* j4 Q9 W$ ?6 `5 Z' d或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
- q. C5 A: w% {  s+ y9 n# yI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
% O9 |* i9 i5 M% q! c6 h( s- tBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
$ k3 o; N: b! M( b1 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
% I6 k8 d, v7 B) ^If today isn’t too late,
" ~+ ~1 G: E2 a# a9 x  p; T$ Q" x6 Z假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: _! B' C/ B8 P1 t9 v2 Z0 f$ u" u今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
8 E; f9 m" M( |! h3 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
/ k& T: H7 l4 F5 x, z可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
2 K6 T% W/ y8 |5 J! O8 j
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
0 A0 l$ n4 \8 a9 m; lWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 L* a; S0 Z+ S# i* S/ u8 F9 F) a为何如何难言？
9 g! P+ U) m9 }1 S8 bI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
, T' i$ [. n# J* [4 FBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
9 K$ k  U2 i# KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
7 ]+ z" k: e: u( V; EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
( R$ p% C% d, Y, i# J从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
9 i7 G- f7 s+ [( a/ \0 n刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
5 X" W1 A) f0 v" ?刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
3 Z6 ^  S! {5 n; l; K- m! U6 @vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。