【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
! l2 n3 U- c, q; rxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
9 C0 ^" @# b( L6 r4 x1 T1 ]# b" Svichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 y. X9 P7 x, g8 a! X5 ]皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& U% d; k2 B) r' A, {  `$ u月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
4 I' L# I4 x. {6 H* R  w0 u看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
, @3 U; Y. ^. @! b" l& M夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
: G% J2 ]) m  i4 {  j- }You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
* M+ d& g8 X/ y" {, @  R( ]  BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
2 t. T) [: c, f5 _; n6 r口口声声 说你爱我
- {* }* ?* Z3 d! EI really want to know just how much you love me
' s8 E& x1 k5 ?' e0 H真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
  f  w7 a) F# zI love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
" O! M2 O+ i# S4 O& ?! }世间万物  皆不能比
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# O! o$ A) ?1 f. lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. S0 T, y% v  a3 @+ x5 `2 w能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
! }6 m, F* I& n5 E9 p, yTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
. x8 v- J5 y2 P) H' H7 |若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
$ U8 \! W  ^4 c$ AI’m still filled with fear
" Z* I% _/ c9 @9 L9 [: l8 i' h% Q可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
2 i+ S/ p; _% `, }/ O; bI only have one tongue
7 S7 I4 Q1 e! q: u我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
6 O7 Y* W) E* p3 _3 @It’s nothing close to 100,000
. @3 l. s; h' }- X6 Q也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 B0 X" x' I% r2 n% y1 C0 J5 T# i能说会道 无以伦比
( {$ J  R' ?& ?( V% \; g) hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 a. |: X# k, R7 W0 X+ a若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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. E0 u( N% T% r4 S) N4 SThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 x5 K0 M- J$ g" V, p8 p爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
2 i& \  }: S: H! v6 H5 a3 T从此别无他意
/ m9 d/ P. ~4 v! I' r& lWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
5 p2 C1 O# v1 h! rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
: k( E1 G* u1 p" s$ j, tIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 x# l' N# u- i# k若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
8 J# O6 l: D8 \) Q& |' Y# _I would probably know how you feel
  d" J; z" e4 L" ^9 i/ M# Q或能知你心意
$ I& x) i7 M" Q8 w! r% eLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
9 [' Q7 R9 I( ~; G1 HWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
* f% S8 F" w4 u9 L  SI want to confess that I love you,
2 u  O; i# {' k我多想向你表白
0 Q. x% ]5 P7 c: i% Q; ZBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
$ ?4 M; b  m( h0 POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. \/ u4 R& ~9 f2 a% _7 {( ^只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
3 j% X5 K) b0 t5 A: ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* o  i& R7 O2 h& @2 B今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 h, I  L$ F& ~8 Y9 l不愿这份爱 逝如流水
) g: A- M. V" _- B5 _0 i1 Y3 k/ C# TCan I entrust it to you?
- t! e. X+ z; i. Z) Y: d7 m5 g- `! q$ V可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
, O4 j6 X1 F7 @( M+ t; eBut I never did
2 q  R; O: `/ P# l$ H$ {3 o4 @0 N却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! L6 ]) G! y- t9 `% |" W2 m只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
3 B; ], y- A9 d  ZIf today isn’t too late,
1 ^& P  i8 `, H假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 Z1 |- X) E+ N. C今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
/ {/ C* B; Z; ?5 ~5 j1 c& ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  h8 c$ Q- ~/ I不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
) e  h4 t1 l  p1 K4 y" y6 H可否将它 托付于你？
% a) q! c, H, Y7 {3 aEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

Can I entrust it to you?
% V2 d) G4 o" y# H可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
8 I/ e* Z, \# a( ]/ f! l1 T0 m* L老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。