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[公告] 【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告(参赛视频18、19楼)(比赛结果已公布~)

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发表于 2009-1-1 10:24 | 显示全部楼层
老大:感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作?期待!......
# V7 X$ Y. |1 ?7 y! T2 \xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

+ O. h8 I: K2 v4 V" o6 Z一个月前我译了一半,旅游回来再看,自己都看不过去,索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:25 | 显示全部楼层
哦呀,你们都贴在这里,偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大,谢谢提醒) W6 h# M0 y1 W( e/ Q4 ]
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20
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再贴到这里来呀。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲2:男女对唱( B7 R7 }. K& U  Z" v' ~$ }

. Q( L" ?% R2 w* l! X4 B5 T$ ~The moonlight is shining brightly, 8 `" {1 y1 k( m" c
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
6 c( ]( I2 y4 _: R: N) ZMaking the sky glitter like gold, / N' a4 M) J7 `
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
7 k/ W6 v: p6 X! {1 N5 W/ x6 W3 _& G; {5 ?; T6 H9 P9 n% X
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness % n$ B* g4 C$ Q5 O# r
凝视明月 我心欢畅
4 S9 h4 B; n& _+ k2 r( {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes . [( R+ z3 W/ Y8 q3 Q
月光闪烁 在我眼中6 j. v. w+ X, ?1 b6 X6 |# L( K
The sky is happy down to its soul
" g8 W9 Q9 ]. K' v  h+ P; O一片丹心 照耀夜空! P# I' W2 N. i2 p0 s

: ^9 R0 u+ v; X( VWith the moon kissing it every night
3 A9 O. {% r4 X$ u+ L! |看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空3 G3 p, A  o* C# n
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 W4 x  {6 `3 H- K2 b5 V* o5 M夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
+ Q9 l8 R2 ^1 H4 Q. \It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour 0 P8 I* l9 L7 ?1 W8 o  D
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
6 M6 ]/ U% {2 h, O# c* _You needn’t fear anything $ e& J0 ^& J6 Z# n
怕这怕那 又是何苦
/ e) ~8 X( R4 iMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* l  q& t3 q0 m; ~# U' I8 U我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢, ^) t, w0 k3 m1 h
Every other word you utter is love( j- c# o; o- z/ J1 P- h! S5 A
口口声声 说你爱我. F; D; M6 o7 j& ^1 d$ l
I really want to know just how much you love me 4 y1 g; R$ n& l; [& N# e
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤. h5 ^0 i4 w$ S3 e0 ?# a* ^
I love you I love you with all my heart
( ]" H$ D# t, `1 Q8 j# `! S$ C, O爱你爱你 全心全意
7 [7 S9 n5 ?. p4 h9 FNothing can compare to my love % |+ @3 B* N* F
世间万物  皆不能比  Z$ p0 ?( s1 J. t
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? 8 a+ H( d0 B! _6 @& x1 [
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥?8 }: d% y" [' a; l. b8 f+ Y
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 I5 i' E4 ]+ s; F整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
0 k; y, I# n' ~8 F7 K' ~8 kI want so much to see inside your heart
$ f  C8 ^8 E+ X1 ^7 }# {我真想看透你的心" B6 f. B8 ~* w8 ]( B
I invite you to rip it out
! }) r, t$ \( L# g7 p8 _你尽管把它掏去6 k* S2 w! R- c; Q1 x. q
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! Q6 Z6 S; R. k7 |8 Q$ Z若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜, X1 Y$ ?# {) L* C+ m: S$ \( H
I’m still filled with fear
) K5 N) e+ q- ]- E/ w8 @1 D可我依然满心忧虑' D# x) N1 |! {0 S8 t9 s) ?. L- G2 f
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ Y% \3 ~  @4 m# T你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张* \+ ]4 o; G: m
I regret not dying
4 y0 s6 ]8 M& r6 r: s真恨不能 以死明志: g: \7 o/ j7 n, ^# g3 b" j
I only have one tongue
  V2 d+ g% F/ C$ r我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张, g) h/ Z: i; J% I1 j' Y
It’s nothing close to 100,0002 x  Y* ]4 k$ x. G: m, L8 ^
也恨不得  多如千万, O/ ?$ V" y7 E) X8 }
With such a tongue as yours,
1 v  j' x- I0 Q5 y9 i你这张嘴 真真厉害
9 L( m" y$ g. r. {5 }5 d+ XYour speech can’t even keep up with it ) F* g- O7 ^/ h, D. I
能说会道 无以伦比- q# D/ r/ d) d& C+ q% g0 P' A
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things " @0 j. b8 ~  D; u, z3 d+ H
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
  n7 }/ ]9 W. g! N) Z1 l( rRambling on about a thousand words of love
+ g8 U$ L% _4 ?7 M3 o向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

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发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲一:主题曲
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) A& C" q% U8 z8 ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 h: x2 q2 P! j9 A- O) C7 F: t从未向你吐露衷情
' S1 I( Y! w  A' x2 z& VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you" j% C! A% \+ \$ ]
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密0 L$ E8 j% Q0 m. }. x* n
From the first moment we met,
% ]2 _! ]0 o6 y3 t/ n对你一见倾心7 q# f, k5 v" y& W) Q0 j
I already loved you with all my heart! t4 c. m, U* W3 Y3 v+ s& K
从此别无他意% X# j* h2 N+ Z8 D" O5 Z7 e& ]
We meet and talk everyday,8 W3 e( u5 F8 `3 g
你我每天见面寒暄
: k* p0 ~) Q- m% I- t0 HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- i( G0 y! @- j8 F: ?8 k! c( o奈何从未谈及内心
; A8 j# t% `" q  r0 m; dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,3 i- L7 ^3 ]0 |/ e9 H& z( ]
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
# D4 X7 X3 J( LI would probably know how you feel
& r2 i, b( h2 [8 Z4 w6 Q或能知你心意8 [) ]9 S" @+ O/ t1 p) H) ~
Love… just the word love% v% S  ~- {3 b3 r# |# Z# I
爱呀,爱就一个字, V6 `8 {6 d" o
Why is it so difficult to express?( \" c2 u' K6 f' M+ R8 A
为何如此难言?1 v9 j. b9 [; [
I want to confess that I love you,
  r3 g$ B: `7 t( i! F$ E我多想向你表白
, R8 ^+ C4 _9 ~, _But I never did
# F: e1 ]6 r, [! M/ x! h9 D; |- I" ~却始终未曾出口/ i# K0 J- `' z# [7 D2 m7 P  u
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers- S! Y" R, Q6 Z& N
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
3 T3 r) v! z* _% vIf today isn’t too late,9 E4 n' w+ z6 Z! `7 t
假如还不太迟
" m8 S- M3 P! X* r( FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess% @; T4 c+ e7 l% B; d) [
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思- K  ]2 ]. S3 U7 U# z& V; ?8 U3 r) u
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away 8 f# {# }1 t" [- h2 J( o  {
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
/ Z# p# A& Z; `Can I entrust it to you?
! t. H. {5 a2 F. b6 K: p8 m可否将它 托付于你?9 [% T/ a5 |# I" U% r
Entrust my love within your heart
6 j- T# A$ @  ]从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去2 q  p) m; k4 w

( A3 r2 E; {! ]& I6 C5 k8 uLove… just the word love
; j. f! f5 @( l' x爱呀,爱就一个字
& Z/ m# K+ a, B' T8 S( B% W0 GWhy is it so difficult to express?
& f( o: ~2 Z; s2 F为何如何难言?
, i3 I. M" V! _$ Z2 CI want to confess that I love you,$ \; Z+ a8 x# r+ O/ s. S
我多想向你表白
6 L( {0 m+ Q1 B5 X& P$ IBut I never did) z. [9 R% e# y; G
却始终未曾出口
: ~* P2 ~1 o5 v5 E) P6 s, C4 x$ _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; h7 E) g2 N/ W' d" }/ w8 \只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走+ S6 q- x- f) X; R! s5 ?
If today isn’t too late,. U& L- O: P( _. J3 s* Y; f' ~
假如还不太迟 8 w( {) J6 z' j; C) F
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess$ m4 `! p% C, W$ c9 ]; b7 U" c
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
3 u  U, H3 F; C) u- m. yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) H0 a5 |7 U( y4 f; ]不愿这份爱 逝如流水
4 a, o& j3 j% g' QCan I entrust it to you?  [4 @0 g$ Z' r; P+ U. O
可否将它 托付于你?
* f, ?5 X" ?1 y/ UEntrust my love within your heart
1 s$ [( t* i6 A从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去
, \6 k5 b" h: X5 B+ c: W# r
, J! I% H# N/ ^' @3 u5 N) m3 X: hCan I entrust it to you?
* t% {6 [6 O$ X" y+ {0 @& R4 C可否将它托付于你?
* e+ s9 g/ P  l2 W1 PEntrust my love within your heart- ?% y" a1 s+ z. o9 k: G
从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去
发表于 2009-1-1 10:38 | 显示全部楼层
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, Q& A) ~$ \: p9 {老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。7 A1 \' P0 o. K8 y
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~
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发表于 2009-1-1 21:59 | 显示全部楼层
“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握,感觉韵似乎必须押,译词的长短也得基本合”,偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大,但是到了第二首,就很有看头了。
发表于 2009-1-1 22:01 | 显示全部楼层
41# 杏花疏影  ' B3 J0 g: f; @) M2 x# c% r( a
老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。* p" I8 N0 i+ u
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~
1 i0 C9 x% F$ |" q' Tvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

( R/ i9 b6 @1 i9 l0 ~不碍事,偶们表慢...
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-1-2 22:05 | 显示全部楼层
太好了,我旅游回来看到大家的译作,满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。
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