【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

: D( z7 M7 P; b, d. c1 K$ Y一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
- Y4 Z! t: o2 C  ^5 z0 U* D8 Avichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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+ P: A! n* ]5 DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, A$ S$ m: U! a: ?3 y" r  X6 O# r$ R夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 |$ T$ O! p4 p4 g5 J' ^+ k5 Y) d凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" P. c. P% D5 Z1 H  z# `. a月光闪烁 在我眼中
, `# C4 e9 A* N) E- YThe sky is happy down to its soul
: \- S! ?/ d; E9 E一片丹心 照耀夜空
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$ V/ s, s& O+ w1 u" F8 h& W6 hWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
* @& A- b5 {" y$ x8 g* wSeeing the sky content with its love
9 \* N: Z7 z+ n0 N" A夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
4 @1 i! F$ V; e1 O* g% RIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
0 y- A1 V$ x) J2 S8 @$ S: DYou needn’t fear anything
$ z; s5 i7 [; z7 C8 \怕这怕那 又是何苦
) U# A8 k7 T; E! C! I! oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
3 v0 s2 \$ m) ]+ kI really want to know just how much you love me
& g8 @) K! x8 K5 z8 B) n! \! R真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
' m2 d* v" w3 p- z: s( U" x! W爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ S; U  C" A5 d4 q能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
7 N# r9 z: A; r! PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% r5 Y  l; ^8 |5 M: _' n% P- x1 e0 ~整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
* A: g/ P0 ^+ ?/ aI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
! Q) D  Q5 W# B8 O' ]I’m still filled with fear
$ R* F9 o( \' k. R% ^可我依然满心忧虑
5 Q; k' S) [' x5 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* {! Y! J  S5 R  r你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
( a9 s5 x3 n/ J7 q: V$ O+ n4 r真恨不能 以死明志
4 N' \" \8 o+ H3 vI only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
2 v1 b) s: ]/ q9 r0 ?, {6 DIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
  j2 h" A& E- s3 U  ?With such a tongue as yours,
# b2 Y! O& D) l( p你这张嘴 真真厉害
1 W. o  V, K5 I+ q3 d- d- O  E* mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# h( e5 F) G! i能说会道 无以伦比
5 P% `) `2 V9 H& ^; U4 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ U8 \" s0 G3 E3 T# k1 h8 x若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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9 Y! N3 a  D3 O  o0 HThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
/ U4 ?0 Q. K, m. F  t( pThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; i( U" a7 n% f; X6 p爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
/ }. f; h1 H9 }' V对你一见倾心
% i, V: q) ]/ [8 h/ d4 z! yI already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ r8 S( g- M) _) `- b奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ ?: o3 J& Y& m为何如此难言？
! O& z! ]  W/ d( \5 F1 V  q- c% U& `I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
6 V; H' S4 t* xBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
1 I) r: S6 T  m  D; E; uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
1 B) o% C' `7 }, ]; F) a. LIf today isn’t too late,
9 A% b( F) Y8 J; t0 h" \& S假如还不太迟
4 V5 V4 Y: y$ Q( @1 O9 V, ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 @/ j: |# N% Z  V" `" l! g今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
/ S9 T( N  j! w4 g9 @" h; `Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
- m# K. g* Z. h2 K5 P  g从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

' Y  q: C$ s: l. @2 y$ A; z8 VLove… just the word love
) h6 J9 R  W% [9 ^8 B, z" V3 D爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
( E* z; z$ N9 Z$ FI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
/ V9 g+ R! c: D' b; i1 c; jBut I never did
9 K  a6 {% j5 M+ _: K( w却始终未曾出口
4 l2 w( X( E) `+ Q  T( Y) mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, N& t* Z' `  |1 U( x0 t) m只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
1 B( F$ H0 [, Z  ]. G9 HIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
6 G: A! |, x) i) ~9 _, l3 h- F: I可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
6 [, `+ G6 v9 d# c' p+ O  m从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

5 m6 }9 r8 o! ?$ L' z/ ZCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
, A' q1 [) }& z9 ?5 L; P0 I从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
& H& Z( j+ G2 m' L5 b! ~9 {6 p老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
7 U( D) }7 B) _0 \刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

5 ^9 A- S. F  P不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。