【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

" P: |' U9 g& L4 O$ U一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
8 V: T! u( y  w6 t, t$ e2 r+ G. Y7 ovichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 k/ E/ ^! f- c8 @1 c夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( G' m9 Q, q" a凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, C& H/ E6 g9 [, [) i+ U/ g月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

# g# k0 i: y- D9 \With the moon kissing it every night
: p: o+ A& `0 G( x/ s1 {5 _看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
* R' ], w8 E( m& S8 }Seeing the sky content with its love
8 S5 S( b" |: l7 f夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
6 c$ u7 v! g' z  s, }+ vIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
1 b6 k2 q% i+ w8 R% x" f8 U我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
# I6 v: ]8 x( J9 E3 J, Q' [9 DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 q" G6 I: E  V7 l真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 }# i) j/ M2 u1 [3 u3 i) t, m能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
; k& _# a0 |: s& {; f/ \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
% j  n5 b3 V9 X1 j8 P" T/ B我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
0 D, p) C6 V5 o' F. fTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 B4 g& a) z$ _若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
2 x: N6 R! i7 v2 G( f' V; }0 W可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
! D) @/ z6 f2 f真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
( r6 \/ M5 C' L1 H: L/ w我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
, s( k+ R8 [( Y也恨不得  多如千万
) O. ~/ x( z% s$ \: C5 |, a; YWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
6 G- M) q* o, s% m& ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love
2 `7 y! I5 L2 G; T向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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7 a1 s# y$ |8 B" p" d# XThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
- }5 Q! W  [% YFrom the first moment we met,
6 y: X, K+ x& f* @! u对你一见倾心
$ @/ H. G9 b3 x( iI already loved you with all my heart
3 K4 w  P' Y+ N, j- a从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
# I: D/ g6 h0 d, U你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
! Q+ }  T: k$ ]: b0 _If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& K8 q; z: Y/ o' v7 `5 T若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
3 I* `) b5 U7 j; q+ S+ h- e或能知你心意
9 B( P3 n& A. w  y$ o. X& dLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
  y7 j8 h/ v- Z. u% k9 B5 D; N# @I want to confess that I love you,
8 _$ u2 c, {% ?; H# @1 e我多想向你表白
9 b6 k2 J+ Q3 ~  ?But I never did
# _6 m0 `$ w2 S! d) t3 M却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, n" k5 o4 [4 S只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
! u8 r8 s" J; J7 H% LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  `: S1 j) @; V不愿这份爱 逝如流水
2 \8 M2 t/ y) Z( QCan I entrust it to you?
7 h$ E/ {0 Q# P( z, o, V可否将它 托付于你?
7 F$ f* c2 Q2 H! l  yEntrust my love within your heart
- S* Z: N" [4 I( W6 I# f3 g: i+ M从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

7 Z  I. g) \$ i' Y0 mLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
. V. p& w1 E4 L( t为何如何难言？
0 Z% ?8 B6 O1 u$ JI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- m+ {7 Q0 T# R+ s: }+ Z1 T只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
1 v0 e5 v' H1 O+ l; p! m1 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ B5 o- q* [9 P* W8 e% Q今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
/ x9 c3 b7 Q' g; {1 V3 }5 w4 AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; I% S$ H' O. H8 p: h2 G不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
8 ~6 a% r; n$ T# _& T5 G可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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9 V  k$ d1 a9 a( L& ]! z0 R8 bCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
9 o7 a; Y+ `) \$ fEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
* N5 w0 c% x- g老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
* T: B# V4 s* y刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

4 ~& @  k' o' _$ w4 |7 z不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。