【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
% w7 D, N& L+ a, U2 w/ B3 @& txxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

$ [8 @% ?8 H7 W! [一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
9 g, n8 o( [$ S0 N$ h& N3 @vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ e# z! s9 y2 Y# N% v( y7 d凝视明月 我心欢畅
$ u8 T& N6 D) S0 y* }" b! dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
& D2 c" l) B8 K2 c2 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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3 \: F% m5 O- B& i% Y2 hWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
6 g6 k- U/ e" j, e9 YSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
: a0 K$ v4 @: \! E/ @* lYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ O! w4 }2 I) b0 C4 s我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
: F$ p1 j4 s4 m& FEvery other word you utter is love
! G" Q: N& B' e; E口口声声 说你爱我
1 k( A) h) S& D. Q( W, bI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
8 t: m1 l  k: K! b- @7 X7 u4 ]I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
4 U1 |* s) e- Q世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 x: c: _# E# J能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' R6 m8 \; O  g8 h, ^整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
5 N, m8 n- s& KI want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
- c; b, c7 A1 F+ }# k9 M! k你尽管把它掏去
4 }% n1 H. `+ v% A/ [To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 ~6 l' P& r) S. b2 M若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
! F. }1 x2 |6 B  m9 p0 H. qI’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
( l/ [. m: m9 A/ z1 WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 ^/ }7 T9 F+ x8 D+ d" x你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
8 f  o$ F! T! ]- {" G. o真恨不能 以死明志
0 K" @& j# Q5 B# P+ EI only have one tongue
+ x* w3 D: p& k5 v& E我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
" z7 A7 j" {0 K4 bIt’s nothing close to 100,000
: x0 ~. Z- E5 w5 u3 n也恨不得  多如千万
0 ?: B' |: ]3 r/ M9 }With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
' K  i0 n9 z8 f5 \6 I2 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
0 t0 b7 z6 a% W2 S6 ?" p. jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
. W+ m* x- q2 c8 L0 B. V9 URambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  X* Y/ B/ x( K+ X! Y% ?5 E爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
* e2 s0 P" H' q  H+ S" @对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
/ Z9 W) F0 C! C# v1 ]% t! XWe meet and talk everyday,
$ ?3 Y. `5 y  M" F5 O你我每天见面寒暄
* R6 j4 B' U7 t! XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. y+ z) M1 p* ~, n& h  _奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
% Y. y& @3 n/ s3 y! Q0 ]9 LI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
" k/ W) m3 x: M" a2 o2 [. D1 i/ jLove… just the word love
: X0 K) L- |  r& ?/ V1 W爱呀，爱就一个字
# P& [, v, b# I1 O2 B# v" ~Why is it so difficult to express?
7 u" @% o2 K9 X9 G为何如此难言？
/ c4 g6 K6 j. `3 {5 X  y  G3 E" pI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
  j9 H8 _) ^+ \6 _却始终未曾出口
( J& {! k3 W$ [- `' L* d) dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
  Z$ I9 g4 P& Y) D: H, XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 [& S, `$ a5 N; x今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
1 I8 W2 |) \6 aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 n; Z; V* V/ B* g1 K不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
" d8 H2 Z9 b, |+ B) ~: l7 f可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 _( U! M& O# q; c9 n8 }2 c9 Y从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

7 h# g* c6 L- x7 f" DLove… just the word love
4 n5 v8 @) }8 Z6 E爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
+ k- x5 i. F/ D0 f. k我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
" g, k/ n6 a6 S* j8 h- VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
0 Z6 ^, e& \  [$ f- s- F+ eIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
6 U" r  r& ?! b8 e* F# I) eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( i: Y6 D4 L# z$ J; n0 d  m今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ L( E: A( F; m  L3 H不愿这份爱 逝如流水
" c" c( `, _) I4 CCan I entrust it to you?
4 M5 I/ @+ r/ Y: T5 Z可否将它 托付于你？
. p; s' ~6 F/ |1 c: N# g& [! VEntrust my love within your heart
1 D9 j; L, X9 w6 @从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

4 L  k8 r0 s. G  q9 G6 @Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
) l. U* s7 C4 W% Z4 P- C4 q% h# rEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
. _5 o2 b# C6 D刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
! _, f& }  \/ b% T0 |1 E老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
9 F4 H& @- `+ k" t' ]& p9 A刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

, A0 y  y% G7 w不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。