【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
  H0 @" u1 \% O" X7 Gxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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  S  m3 Z. f9 [; l6 NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* t: e0 P+ o5 A* N" J& N, [  Y1 x皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
0 O# A+ R9 b. e2 ^; mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, x- d5 t6 D& n. q夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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! q# v( ^) ?. }" E) [: |: b1 wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ X9 I8 y; ^0 O( O) x1 ^: ^# H凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# s) B6 ^4 L, K6 d0 s7 A0 F: J月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 `2 G/ i; W+ X& T3 n+ ~一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
# Z% f$ H  v. p: s9 K3 _看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
+ y3 Q! @' d1 U5 iSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
. @8 B# b3 V$ T0 a; j- nIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
6 `# \# [$ }* _我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
5 T& W' A, m( G9 G7 A" A' HYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
; Y  l  a8 m, P9 v( u' kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 j9 I" Z. H- C% S8 ?我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
, [8 d$ W  Z! g0 I口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
! Z, g* p+ T! K0 H5 t% c. ~4 j真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
; t& }6 N$ p* A, RI love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
0 ]" [8 _8 y* i7 A+ i* `! H4 |9 ONothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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4 Z( Y. Q' r. E1 q9 A% HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
. [$ `  T$ n* \6 M& i& K& xI invite you to rip it out
5 V# _/ u* T* Z# }) a6 d8 ~你尽管把它掏去
+ f. T1 H" r5 F5 eTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ f$ @) h7 x+ l+ ]若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
, r, z8 l' S: u9 h可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! O% r2 Y1 |% `$ d$ }& n你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
5 k& v  q9 N: n. e, A' F真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
: ~6 R; R  [: o8 z3 \我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
- r7 K& N4 \6 h. x+ m+ `It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
4 Z& e: R) ?0 ?, @. PWith such a tongue as yours,
2 Q9 c) B0 t8 `% t" _! M你这张嘴 真真厉害
  Z4 D- Z/ n1 o! b  ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ c. ]) z! m+ s( E0 |; }若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
4 o  ^% _8 s! L7 a/ s! B5 G8 f4 Y5 C& a3 DRambling on about a thousand words of love
  u- I& F8 W% b( i7 J. v7 t向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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2 S. l" U- h, w3 @. ~The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
7 b; V' j2 ^) s/ M3 H+ ^That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( C. Y2 ?4 O6 h- F爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
' _+ p* T& L! L" E6 X: g0 K( L: x, kFrom the first moment we met,
& E: f9 d/ [" a# Y! J1 R对你一见倾心
$ N: \- o; k  J8 m5 jI already loved you with all my heart
8 i$ A" m8 {( j- ?+ W$ T从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
! k" ?; P, i* [7 w' a5 }, ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# v  {7 c5 A2 D8 F- x6 u" u" S( y* Q奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, u# M3 E, \: n% J若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
1 |6 k4 O( M+ A: ]( ^4 A1 oI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
! M" Y/ \( b0 s1 l# s- B; O( v+ @, iIf today isn’t too late,
1 T' w9 v. ?8 L+ z0 ^, c假如还不太迟
5 A$ G0 Z4 C0 q  KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
4 n$ K; K7 X: y可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
) @3 e! V. Q9 |/ n. Z为何如何难言？
* p% l& o$ x1 d* K# k5 TI want to confess that I love you,
* a: K! O' r0 l6 g我多想向你表白
  N5 q, C* _! m& B/ K: V# XBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
4 |5 ]& T7 O! X6 N0 x) P* \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
" C# Y2 w% H6 R; ?6 t; ^If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- T% ]1 K" A* d1 m# D( \1 Y$ T/ i今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
( z) {- S( z+ }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
, M4 ?) g5 G8 XEntrust my love within your heart
7 {7 g3 f  v" M从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
/ c3 ?" `3 N# N- K8 ^1 q( g4 G可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
  r' g; @6 Z: M! w, Z0 j老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
; l( }9 y2 G* z1 p- X4 T3 [刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
2 b/ a! P& r: T. C; O老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
* c/ P* U( W5 ^7 g2 E# Z7 q刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
' H" x9 u( Z3 e6 h8 Z$ w/ C( Z- g4 bvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。