【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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% L5 F/ @6 X5 i# ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- g- _4 x( r1 C% X6 H+ B. ~夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. T/ r* d0 u5 [, W8 _6 V月光闪烁 在我眼中
/ g( }# c% R  U, ~/ ^The sky is happy down to its soul
( [) ~3 L# n# Z+ q& ]7 v一片丹心 照耀夜空
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2 p1 ~" g6 w3 DWith the moon kissing it every night
9 J* ]8 K2 w7 f2 f看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
: i  r( K2 x9 ]7 m( R6 E  WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ f5 a/ y4 }9 t; }+ m2 I我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
: I( B; y. b; j" w; FEvery other word you utter is love
& S! D4 N3 X8 ]6 S. |, [口口声声 说你爱我
0 O, Z$ W, c5 X. v, F! t  pI really want to know just how much you love me
% {; r- k. O+ ]9 z5 y2 s真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
  }- b4 G7 m; o" ]7 xI love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
6 Z1 L) U: s/ `2 y) yNothing can compare to my love
8 w, B  a3 q3 d& F世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
/ S/ \6 b: D" c  B2 jI want so much to see inside your heart
( b* L6 A; _) P' w  g5 c! C我真想看透你的心
+ Y: P, E9 N5 R# j5 r# s" A/ SI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
% J# ?+ A$ h& a, L可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
) Q" ^% c0 M* z+ G6 W3 `- jI regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
# W" f9 z2 i! ^/ |3 lI only have one tongue
  ]5 G6 q; C- V: ?' K' _+ u7 d我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
7 T( W7 ]$ f! Z+ v2 n& {/ s% [) CIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
' ], x! s, E) Y# u0 e  n0 FWith such a tongue as yours,
& o; R. x6 d4 ^$ G& W* k9 E你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  |* t6 z. W$ S8 k5 A能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
) O( \( {, A! }4 r; [4 sRambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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$ d/ ]6 I! B: x  E5 k7 yThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
' f6 h- N' ~$ A3 U) vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
6 U& d# _+ ^# B  j/ h& vFrom the first moment we met,
/ g" Q) C/ L6 c  H. o% [% b对你一见倾心
! U/ K4 y* T5 v& C0 c" fI already loved you with all my heart
' d+ q/ s" Q/ Z1 L从此别无他意
$ Q( c: V  {: {+ m* {, NWe meet and talk everyday,
' Z$ y% W  {8 O9 u' o2 r你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
6 N7 U" G3 `3 r1 e8 i2 [If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 H8 A2 E/ @+ [2 l: c" b" [7 e若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
. i& X1 S$ S- P1 m% }5 }I would probably know how you feel
" n% {& p7 j" \" d1 s1 q或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
7 C: S2 m- ?! l/ A2 ^/ c/ g& m$ E爱呀，爱就一个字
5 p! f! o" J# v0 k3 J% @Why is it so difficult to express?
7 {6 l2 P" t$ g- z+ w为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
  v! @: d; {+ }( Y) C( w我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
5 N) I0 a# R% T8 d8 IIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
. m# k6 w5 L/ W/ KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 N" s- ^# n7 i8 U) D" g# W+ M% |今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
( S) q( V8 g* m6 w; P/ ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
- E# `6 R9 `- s$ y  N/ D可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 ?7 e$ H8 E- L6 |) W/ F9 a从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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, }& H3 s; d! x  q4 Z; L& |# kLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
5 f; J. X. g3 M. i/ p* U3 ?. m" J, NI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
" ~2 I4 c+ ~: E( z/ O0 a7 S% \( e- P却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 b  c, `- D3 v# I只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
# a5 N+ S+ R1 h* E* L& ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 F; C* \. K0 a1 K9 _4 p& t+ g5 R3 N今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
" u5 H; l% n4 F, f5 O' tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 ?( d( ?6 N! k不愿这份爱 逝如流水
" L/ N, j6 r- k' v1 LCan I entrust it to you?
+ [; r/ Z4 m6 r7 I7 A* W可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

3 r7 S! \& P6 U$ }9 v5 |Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
! O4 r' f$ P( j0 h0 I8 |从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
3 e+ [" J4 N4 w- l: e. O老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
6 D" d, w0 R9 I7 w3 W; z7 U! t) T刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
  p0 Q: L2 X( |5 l9 t' g/ n老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
* o, Y9 w' g  |2 n0 P刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

3 D' I1 N9 K1 v8 Y$ _2 {6 J" I不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。