【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

& W7 C2 l1 j  x) T一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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* L" K8 m- Q% h" IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 S2 A- Q2 b0 q9 H: m7 H; D: N皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
, p$ P$ ^2 E( t' R; tThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

* d; `0 E2 D7 \With the moon kissing it every night
, y% h+ ^% s5 {& {看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
# [5 n- _" Z0 v. v4 x$ V# V  QSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
! z9 e! ]- _( u( d2 eIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
  [3 R; M- x( t( x. d怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
0 `" Q" c4 w+ H1 D* jEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 M) q8 p: P* J3 Y真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
( s1 d* h5 Q" y6 s2 D2 G3 I爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
* C" U  h3 G: j- ?4 q3 J1 cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
3 y* ?% h, P- QI want so much to see inside your heart
% d% u+ B& Q5 t' V4 d* o3 y我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
: ?' n6 \- R8 |To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
  T2 }; ^* A' mI regret not dying
! J! [" ~0 y2 [. J# P* N1 w: B  P真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
- J  a6 h, m- m9 o& z4 Y, I* [It’s nothing close to 100,000
, p/ O- p, g$ H1 d6 D0 \也恨不得  多如千万
+ }$ J6 p5 _! T: V9 K2 ]" nWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
/ u- C) J- d$ j. \* H: T! AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
  o$ X( @1 q6 O0 E  }. fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
" ~7 ~( Z# n. F. S7 KRambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
( T, O% z" s2 g9 \$ i3 Y# a* uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
$ ]. \1 H7 k* F3 S你我每天见面寒暄
) d( [  L8 S! h" s0 o% fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) ]) H! _) I$ T8 k$ O若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
' X0 {: j& J3 A' `I would probably know how you feel
8 t( X0 K& {' H7 T" Q. b) a或能知你心意
: p' ^  P* x7 @, A9 KLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
6 S; X6 D# a$ u1 B9 b" q: YWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
$ k+ J* f' i, D9 g3 kI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! J# }6 o  p" a只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
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I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
# U9 Y9 o! D4 D( I/ FCan I entrust it to you?
0 X- Q8 S* Z, x, J可否将它 托付于你?
  j& H2 W" f3 e" {Entrust my love within your heart
  [2 O' \4 R# R" E+ i" F6 H从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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  L8 M2 ~9 j! M0 h/ W/ dLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
, l5 M4 m+ c5 R' jWhy is it so difficult to express?
( Y& ^8 E) S6 ?. u  G9 N* M4 [  C为何如何难言？
3 w) w* W. y" \+ G+ h# t8 EI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
% |- m6 M6 J8 ]8 }But I never did
) {: Z; t% v( V% [% @4 `却始终未曾出口
2 ?1 W( i& a+ m' T6 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
! b- D- b9 F4 x' w$ K( u假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 |% h( X! N4 x7 h$ V, n+ H今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
0 \+ s$ j, W% c! A3 gCan I entrust it to you?
5 n; P7 B1 S( R可否将它 托付于你？
' D# f0 Q: H& K+ Q* cEntrust my love within your heart
# k) |$ Z* s. e4 X8 Y从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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) w) E; S$ d7 E1 h8 bCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
4 [) \+ c9 x+ A$ yEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
) \0 z9 y* {# s5 `, K# W老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
. x, o/ q* f2 [0 V5 N+ v! x刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。