【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
* D2 y, n1 P) F. Q% ?7 Gxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

: C; X2 d* z. ?& u* c& G* q再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
. c2 B4 k6 r( f& z2 d! _
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  ?3 {6 h* \: ^5 o7 @皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
" J8 c8 Y9 `5 y$ _. y4 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

0 n7 f0 E3 n2 `! DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% {3 c- I: i! X6 z9 d月光闪烁 在我眼中
/ b* b4 T. ]0 X1 d0 ?4 e. Q$ O: y- oThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

( }3 A( Y- @) V, @4 D1 s; tWith the moon kissing it every night
/ l& T& b6 Z6 D/ {$ M1 q. z( x  i看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
# }# g! c2 w( n0 r( \: HSeeing the sky content with its love
* q# J9 k6 G4 d4 _. {夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
' _, h( X3 r$ G. F' fIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
( U0 g! z+ j# o$ `: ?. E我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
  V( e$ W" [  |& L$ A怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
7 Y/ x# _8 y0 R3 l9 aI really want to know just how much you love me
3 `" c* h! y( c# B3 X6 |真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
7 i6 L2 }7 E( L/ {6 N" H% ^I love you I love you with all my heart
& h* p0 S4 ]7 R; Q# A0 O+ M7 N爱你爱你 全心全意
, u$ `! F4 g) X) K2 l$ M6 V( q" Y7 DNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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  V- U: l" z6 w: ~+ l5 }0 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 a! W. Z; ~5 J, G5 p整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
+ g! o' V3 f" k/ e( yTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
* }+ g# N) o0 MI’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 T  |# ]9 C; [1 s, A  k5 Y你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
; r) t) x" f3 m% N* ^! j/ d真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
) \+ B( |4 @/ N我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
* H4 F  B. ~% V也恨不得  多如千万
' b( I0 }' B: N/ p# {# HWith such a tongue as yours,
( `$ Q9 j3 ?) T! M6 E" w! B你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ J# q* M9 p7 F0 `能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
! w; p  p8 i; z6 ~$ }: pRambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

3 h2 m7 I! d% {The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ ]( U/ ?6 v- ^4 l* V' w从未向你吐露衷情
- ]. ?0 @3 q  w, V$ ?6 SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
1 D  b, {0 N3 ?+ Y5 i; BFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
1 @" k9 P7 c% p, |" UI already loved you with all my heart
* u. \; h: [/ E3 I, l' g从此别无他意
0 l8 Q( Y" ~3 |( z" r6 l! T& h  K( OWe meet and talk everyday,
) H5 }7 t% n* p$ i* T9 w你我每天见面寒暄
# G$ L# f# D$ r. u; R8 w' @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 i6 m$ s8 s' @" J' d9 j若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
4 d7 c! c- Q# m2 x5 k& w. F; b9 c或能知你心意
+ _7 U! V$ P  B8 h% wLove… just the word love
" C- i6 ?" k5 N: v( G. H爱呀，爱就一个字
8 ^" Y  S# x6 VWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
8 V! k6 i7 w" F2 ]' {I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
" b8 d8 z. u2 }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 n" L9 q7 m0 R只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
- ~6 Y# c1 J8 G- }3 e! n, UIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 w9 O1 @. e( i+ S8 d: ?3 Y今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
4 A. {+ R- H' y% p( ACan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
2 p# J" @$ A% t5 u/ S$ tEntrust my love within your heart
9 ~( e" i& b/ ^/ ?从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

6 Z6 N! Z0 m- p% u/ w& A1 iLove… just the word love
2 G9 Z$ x0 J2 y3 F) {  e7 O爱呀，爱就一个字
! e3 E- C0 |' q; g! h# pWhy is it so difficult to express?
- m, U3 {7 j% M& E' i' x6 |为何如何难言？
( X; o" u) @8 j7 n/ f6 [I want to confess that I love you,
' v: u4 O7 Z, t. S* x9 y& k我多想向你表白
2 o" t1 A) C1 k/ Y. m8 {  j8 wBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' l4 c  S; v9 M只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
, a# m* }( ^' z$ W  a. B' f7 f假如还不太迟
' @: M! n" m& L: @/ m4 |( ~2 dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 ?' `4 \% x1 v0 }& g0 A" P5 `今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) d6 B/ P- c7 ]: b* F1 O0 g不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

1 R( ^' |- O& U' Q9 |) J( C8 _Can I entrust it to you?
6 A6 ?8 q5 B8 A1 W) S# m可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
5 F8 y% R+ [7 B  n- G8 i+ p从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
, O0 H0 ]7 N  u- \' T老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
: W# \* i6 c( V$ O老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
! M; i& e! w9 l6 s( _vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。