【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

) e/ }- d: P: q3 K. C3 d一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
+ y7 E. D: u, s5 x2 H! b, Gvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

4 @, C& k; V+ q0 p$ I4 d! ?- U再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

7 P+ V; G5 m6 |! t3 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
' n3 I- ]7 `, @9 i9 R- u$ z皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
" X* \5 H: ]; ?0 vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- l! ^$ p4 U' J, J  N; m% V凝视明月 我心欢畅
& b: a" f( B9 J7 Q" oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
( [' G; E; Q# s! n( tThe sky is happy down to its soul
) ]. {( C. H4 _$ U一片丹心 照耀夜空

7 E: ^/ M! f0 D' {* H6 CWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
* I3 m' i6 s  l& n" a: sSeeing the sky content with its love
1 U2 x, u. g9 t- K夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
1 K/ [4 H. ~3 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
0 A& N: y4 x. [/ |( QEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
. n9 z: s# J4 u& U  L3 Z$ `3 y真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
/ w$ ?7 B. A) S" K: J8 r. L. {I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
+ c) P- ]) P+ e7 w& eNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 P4 ~8 ~* N. A  S% w8 V能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& W+ E: t% L) g% J( X整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
$ [: d3 e8 d+ {I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
- B& K9 U* p( X+ e5 a& ]I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
' I  w7 j( s! U0 C$ B3 d$ I5 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( F0 S# ?, E: K你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
* W' g6 m+ x; C, H- o4 yI regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
' C3 t4 j( g9 p; y也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
0 W" `) ^& ]: V1 ~你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! M$ r8 p- [" B! O* a能说会道 无以伦比
0 J7 p: }) D6 {; ]8 KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
% N( ?3 w; g* N3 c, |向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
+ N# Z; @( m5 y' r  B1 tThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
( K5 y% B9 a: TI already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
' t. @. W8 S& |; mWe meet and talk everyday,
3 F+ |& ~; h& o) D% X你我每天见面寒暄
! g7 h! @1 h0 [: s3 O% xBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ u4 v1 |- d& L( a" a奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
/ c6 c, W2 z+ q: W- [: D  l) ^I would probably know how you feel
. a' i0 O; a: T8 Q* R或能知你心意
$ N4 ^7 y. k- P$ E) S( ALove… just the word love
# N, V" L- }' G0 m- J爱呀，爱就一个字
1 M6 m5 u. M2 H2 SWhy is it so difficult to express?
. w6 g+ D; A# g) l9 m+ P为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
" a5 A# G" ^6 l% t; R! A8 p) U我多想向你表白
( f, `( H) X# n. YBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
* L3 S) g! x$ b4 G5 T, ~2 wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 J  N# U* n) q, }' n0 `只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
$ [# X+ H2 Z- z: I0 I) L假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" X% Z/ \: s8 R3 c8 _, B今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
( Q: ^2 W6 l0 e0 TEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
$ x. x5 w5 Y. M" c4 n- @爱呀，爱就一个字
* Y$ P$ g+ Q) [5 wWhy is it so difficult to express?
% S; o- }% @) y  H2 G$ M9 M为何如何难言？
$ }4 t, B7 ?% ~- U) d; M4 T  EI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
3 o/ z: Z+ z( U2 z6 yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ x8 z6 Q/ t- x3 }只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
8 h; y% d' ?7 O$ ]' Q5 PIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
1 O, N4 y( b% F+ R5 W" k; pCan I entrust it to you?
4 B6 O8 ^/ G4 L5 `, a% ~可否将它 托付于你？
. a/ k* W9 `  O! e) iEntrust my love within your heart
7 E* x& B+ _$ E" I, X. u从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

- G. C) U+ f; F# f1 F8 sCan I entrust it to you?
; y& {$ a7 w% B" _可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
! S  K5 B& W2 V从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
1 h- A  X5 d6 B0 k' J4 F) ^+ v3 ^- }老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
, f5 R, V5 q% A$ |' Z$ J刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
/ a* p" c% @2 Y# s, c, Q9 m+ Qvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。