【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
6 w- p- V( ~0 V( Lxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

0 Y, i6 g3 x. d0 }一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

; ~5 z- ^. n- v$ B; B6 G! ~2 Y再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
& ^4 Z$ a2 _4 ^4 H0 d& s' SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 n* e( N+ b1 E' j% o" h  i* a夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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) s% L' |, c# h* Y5 b7 Y9 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) @6 J: M; _7 t+ |. E月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
; _6 h. N" ]0 Q6 d1 f9 w一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
# j1 T% m5 A3 q2 J% w" R' r% S看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
) C8 X- p  [! {- d4 w+ w4 zSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
8 ]2 c% W4 \5 g& gYou needn’t fear anything
. _# n; {  H, `  ?$ F怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. G" w! S/ K2 p" \4 {% ^5 P我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
# R! ?! @6 U5 x  j7 |6 [! JEvery other word you utter is love
1 W: e* w3 P# p口口声声 说你爱我
. h2 X! @# n8 s# X  Q/ o5 r5 II really want to know just how much you love me
+ M3 x6 J- W2 K; W# u! T! E真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
  x2 S0 \2 z* E7 y) T# N爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
- E' z) M6 e( ^/ _! u" `世间万物  皆不能比
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' f, \8 Q) }+ t& N/ W* NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; x  A% k+ h1 c3 Y能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
2 r0 |( S7 H* a0 u6 Y0 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ O3 O( Q8 G- t* Q% C' H0 @整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
+ R4 h  g4 f- W* \I want so much to see inside your heart
$ q% m/ f5 [: T) _4 w) A3 h4 {, U我真想看透你的心
( p# t+ F' \4 l) X0 @$ B) pI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
5 d4 G; i$ z' A% K# }  J, jTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
5 S- B/ T6 f& g1 j9 M4 _可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
. |9 a6 x6 p$ i/ [; aI regret not dying
: G8 l  U+ {1 s% ?真恨不能 以死明志
2 _$ f6 _9 ^% E5 C7 D- q: N, vI only have one tongue
9 o6 r1 `; r# H- U# F$ h, M我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 X: a8 ~3 p- c( W6 }也恨不得  多如千万
) \% q$ ]( f% H- R) }With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& U/ B: S5 r# _能说会道 无以伦比
& t0 V3 n" L1 l, bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 |; l( }! ~+ b. H* `7 W5 E若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
% T/ y' t. A  K# U7 B% m( s$ _Rambling on about a thousand words of love
( C- l. o, c6 d/ ^" v. ~向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
. k5 R' c5 H$ }) r9 N5 JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
1 p+ ^$ |: t* ~We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
+ y3 d4 D0 |+ ]1 G  T5 A& N8 ^' i6 VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- U" z$ u0 F; U& X奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ T7 G! _7 T) m3 `若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
4 k  o8 a* _+ f3 b0 QI would probably know how you feel
" A$ |0 f1 r2 O! Y; \0 `或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
) ^: u' x; j/ y: K0 B为何如此难言？
* q4 J; K$ [; C) T. S. `I want to confess that I love you,
' ]- R9 n! h/ Q2 b5 j我多想向你表白
6 G; Y; d) @' t1 wBut I never did
/ _" s' W8 l# @/ J4 b- k* |却始终未曾出口
2 U, J3 p- M: K! y/ z+ oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
. M; R' [" h8 s1 _If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 s. }% {2 o. x/ N5 a2 e* ^今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
7 K% m0 p/ _8 C2 c5 ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ y; T7 \, n, g  Q+ }) q! D不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
8 j) U% [  I( C. O8 @7 o2 e" tEntrust my love within your heart
% h3 W1 f6 ]4 c  k! G/ q8 I0 y; v从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
( N" J  I& S, G) s, G! m爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 c4 a+ j1 V; j  A  p/ n; m为何如何难言？
6 z; c9 ]9 @: n+ dI want to confess that I love you,
* r1 L$ i0 d3 z, O我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
  g, G+ O9 p+ S* K4 i6 \7 c' ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 R2 ^' e8 x( w3 x- t4 N% i今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
2 n, u' K# T6 z" ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
+ |' P% f- o) p8 M1 N7 YEntrust my love within your heart
0 T# _! @2 Q/ N* F6 p, x" r从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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+ Y! a$ l8 |: n, aCan I entrust it to you?
7 M2 Q# V+ ]; A& G4 K6 g可否将它托付于你？
, Q( ?8 u  l2 Y6 ^3 l3 R$ @Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
; h" B$ `1 o- P! p( G( m2 q刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
' J% D9 |# }) V' Y1 L8 |" }2 [& nvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。