【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
( S$ y& d1 N% d9 jxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

. Y# d( d6 P& c* b8 V: k8 {% t  z再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
& Q4 J4 X( T( ^- K6 {皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
; u0 X: \; n1 j; N) mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
5 m/ V: u7 s1 N$ qThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
' d  _- P8 i- F( O( l& \The sky is happy down to its soul
9 }' r( o. B1 x! J; s- _: i, a( K一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
! x3 i  a) ~! nIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
7 P; F4 Y9 Q8 O我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
1 D8 J5 b1 j* ^, K7 E0 `1 |8 ^0 @You needn’t fear anything
; I/ f8 }7 s+ k$ |9 g" q怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
/ J/ f' ?# C. [% p) {% m& k8 EEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
9 O5 n/ M3 ^! |0 T" t% n% WI really want to know just how much you love me
2 o3 q, \5 B' J* ?6 q: y0 ~2 V真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
  K9 L: N  K1 Y+ \# x; g5 R世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
/ D7 r4 D' `4 j3 E: y7 |+ lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: F5 Y( F* l) M, q$ S: `整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
. e- }6 M. F# `1 }% [$ WI want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
* l1 \* p$ o0 @0 e你尽管把它掏去
; T2 Q5 t' F+ P8 ]7 ~9 Q3 E, G6 bTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
. Q( H$ r% w! |若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
9 `% ]( W6 p8 NI’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 \1 G# X# n1 L0 u+ e$ R' v+ B你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
+ a* H5 w: {2 X. gI only have one tongue
% J6 s$ G, J, a我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
  }8 G6 O( e+ u$ E0 e2 {也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
! X/ @! h7 T3 ~' u5 c6 NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
6 J7 H" f7 G5 r  x9 d+ V" d能说会道 无以伦比
* M. P9 b' V: QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
, t" O2 n7 X- i% EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
1 J4 U2 F& e2 VFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
1 @/ f5 b8 [& n9 H( j9 X) \I already loved you with all my heart
% s9 z% V8 }9 G: m9 Z4 s4 y从此别无他意
/ x/ h* i+ x. j6 {' ^# bWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
0 C) h, a$ i* ^8 O6 |6 }But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
% Q- J- r. R7 b% e  L: cI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
- g% }1 p, [0 G+ i4 Y8 s5 w' u爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
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, E: v/ k. r( g: y" zI want to confess that I love you,
  {8 [2 {; \) n' Y我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
4 V7 N) h! Z* a3 g) |5 [' ]# I% |5 gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
; k, D7 \0 F0 e2 l) f/ IIf today isn’t too late,
) y$ g+ r* w/ ~- S% j" U假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: B! h/ Q( @) T" g6 `2 c7 V/ U今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
6 ~& O" e6 b, I" U0 ?3 P' aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' S6 c, W# `6 d' l' X) q不愿这份爱 逝如流水
9 z# ~) q3 b6 x+ VCan I entrust it to you?
1 _( q! b7 r9 ?/ G1 W可否将它 托付于你?
2 ^: `9 l! ?8 b6 m. WEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

. \( @1 A8 J% Z; v, |4 T; ^! ]3 dLove… just the word love
: y6 _9 R, y6 A6 H1 n- X1 a爱呀，爱就一个字
6 Z3 F% v4 Q6 W/ T( MWhy is it so difficult to express?
& R* s: k5 C, K7 }' f$ i为何如何难言？
- U/ K& r2 C+ u: ~I want to confess that I love you,
. j+ l' l' r  O7 m# h7 v, H2 X我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
: j$ H8 {6 `/ EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
/ Q' S& D, v- P7 R! c, K6 Q7 ^0 x* Z假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
( W9 ~- o: V! Y" U  n$ `$ [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 F3 d# A& V7 s& c  f不愿这份爱 逝如流水
! b/ f: T4 \3 m4 C0 {Can I entrust it to you?
8 c7 ^1 B4 n# d7 F可否将它 托付于你？
/ E6 b+ m, b  {. j& ?+ A4 BEntrust my love within your heart
- v+ T6 e' g7 u3 D从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

2 f0 h8 o) F- W5 |8 h  r% ]" ICan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
; `6 ^& _- a: n; V  C1 p从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
: D$ u$ U0 q  p( m( \- H$ x老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
7 t7 C4 M) Z: Z# {( zvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

0 f0 B8 P3 _# u- ]不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。