【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

. u* [* r/ i) v6 u2 x* _一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
6 ?# s" ^3 b5 f& K3 \! Pvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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; @( @! l# C( U6 U  W" M6 `* }The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
5 K% Z! A( k! L1 h" e/ EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* `1 p1 b: U7 u8 f0 ?$ k; ]' w4 n1 n凝视明月 我心欢畅
  N1 V4 s7 x$ S  BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
, I& k; T- l1 \The sky is happy down to its soul
3 a  P9 @! N  v& J+ a! J; ]) W一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
" N7 d9 x4 N+ w- D, N看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ p6 h! }2 w; a夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
. B2 m+ p9 M" vIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
( C, p  _; n0 i  _& I6 ~怕这怕那 又是何苦
5 z+ e8 F; p5 \' h7 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
6 @6 x1 m. n- A# H  W9 L$ K. g口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
* Q! D& a! F* L) |0 V1 P2 \爱你爱你 全心全意
8 M7 [6 e- n* |) P/ P% k7 oNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 B- ^% |- G# P. c能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
2 T/ x2 ~9 t# a& U; WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
* j' N" e: t  M* c. `+ Y/ z我真想看透你的心
! }/ K4 E6 m  A: {& l. g$ AI invite you to rip it out
5 z+ ]6 o- f) Y你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
5 X6 ]8 d$ q* F0 Q4 K可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 R: B# T0 I: [1 t& _0 T你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
% \% R2 [3 l* j' H* Q* e真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
. A) j8 m0 [$ F9 ]With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* O4 u# ~" i9 J: u- y. Y: d能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
8 ?# V  C( t) M- S) KRambling on about a thousand words of love
; Q) E$ A. N9 Y% u5 Q向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
2 \  W$ h, B' @: X0 wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( U' C- n% K% r! L. x& q爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
$ E4 s+ H9 F8 O# o* t# z2 \From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
+ D& n& {5 m/ U8 n4 @- CI already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
0 R( A3 F' [  o: n: W) P' h0 Z8 G3 ?We meet and talk everyday,
% m- q# `0 U& N* M% Y  v6 v你我每天见面寒暄
8 \/ V7 q5 V/ Z" e' aBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 @+ I% k4 S; z: J奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
' P- L" t* o( rI would probably know how you feel
# ]: g; j# x) S4 b4 G% c或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
5 M8 Y* O5 C  S爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
' i$ k; o6 K3 ^( m8 AI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
2 G* K$ e. G3 Q  H7 |  r! H  hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( r1 l9 G/ R4 b9 Y只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
1 }- w4 p$ ^" ?( }  ?9 oIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
% S& |8 J& n$ \/ u3 K/ ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
8 q# M+ F: [8 ^) x* }( [可否将它 托付于你?
2 ]; ]2 x) a+ b$ ?* K: J6 [/ IEntrust my love within your heart
2 t. Q% U- ~4 K( q! s从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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0 {0 g* S5 M/ \9 i* u! w1 b: vLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
, J! s5 V! O9 b( r6 `为何如何难言？
; v! H) P: i( I7 sI want to confess that I love you,
" g3 Z/ o5 p1 d8 E% }4 s4 l我多想向你表白
$ {' \9 j+ D, h. Y- xBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
0 H8 d4 R! x$ u4 P, x; GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
; T" K7 b. Y- H5 M- i假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ g1 b, L  {9 r# i5 V今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
# c$ `8 r" b5 i/ [& \) P- V" ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 o3 i8 y& r+ O; I4 T/ {" U不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
3 c+ V1 ]$ T+ a, Z0 b4 r可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
0 C2 `4 m) ?, K' C( Y  k; u. U从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
: v! D" Q, ~3 T* m9 l4 ^- v从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
0 ~! k8 h* G/ b0 D) m8 p/ l% {" q老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
" c1 g5 B% q; }: G, ?- `  b2 D, B刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。