【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
0 N4 ]+ E; f$ o% b) ]xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

9 G. B; X+ P! Y1 s" Q0 b" X一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
# {; M; A6 {7 Svichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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7 s6 H5 }9 V& i; J: vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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" m& U$ N" A; E# T5 k/ i- yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ `5 Q! ^& t/ S凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ M! w( x' h8 U' Q5 E月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
9 I; K, u6 v' Z( E3 l看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
' O' K9 l  E* _: QSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
- Z0 w& t0 {( }/ G% A$ p5 e我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
+ k5 d6 c# V' z- S% |/ b" z& h5 KYou needn’t fear anything
% c* Y, U1 u" X" j) G! @怕这怕那 又是何苦
7 R& u: D5 a5 [9 u1 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( Y. ?2 A8 b+ e1 ~; b" J我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
  Q& y; X$ n3 I# c) s, o口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
: i  n# P/ W5 c3 u" O爱你爱你 全心全意
2 ~( n+ l2 z& f# mNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
4 _" L: y$ B3 x, V, CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
. h3 W: _, t% _4 z: p( \I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
+ k& q# P0 ^9 z0 VTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- k1 e3 \7 v) o4 F# e你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
- _$ @  _& ^8 }I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
8 A- w' ]( l" u1 g1 {. X( ^  HI only have one tongue
; @4 ?! u9 z" E& s; a: F, q% ?我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
$ A3 F( v$ S9 n2 J5 j8 I" u1 wIt’s nothing close to 100,000
) P$ P9 S( e1 Y2 |8 R3 O也恨不得  多如千万
6 |7 X/ O6 B; v0 h( L+ T0 OWith such a tongue as yours,
* a& ~  \' d6 s- f! c你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* l( _# I; o/ H( f; u$ r7 l能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
8 P+ _- i1 c: i5 c' B% aRambling on about a thousand words of love
7 D3 y  K  s( E" V4 @7 R0 w( |% l向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

) c3 g* ~9 @2 SThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 T; p+ x/ C" n. ^+ S从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
6 ~, [' s2 U! A# A" d7 C对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
+ j- @- p- {; O2 h2 G- y0 v从此别无他意
4 ]. G8 q3 p; s3 V: X4 gWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
8 Y/ h( H# i+ V- i/ cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ G3 a* O! o% \+ k" u, b奈何从未谈及内心
6 M- c; E* S; RIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
+ ]; d3 k' v6 t; z/ k: V2 `$ ?6 P或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
; h. `7 B7 b. r* l4 ?Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
. C( y( t* z) R0 q2 X我多想向你表白
% w0 Y7 e7 X. X4 H. \9 B# JBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
3 ^; m9 p5 S" k$ [If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
- x$ M/ r$ G9 t* \3 l4 MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: n3 r8 \8 `% H- }3 u, H今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; X4 E0 y! @, t. V- q1 m9 |' W0 p& i7 ^! [不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
# S, K' F& U2 S可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

* [; l- \9 D. }) `Love… just the word love
& J1 Y' p+ I- N爱呀，爱就一个字
6 ?6 G5 w3 m* z! \Why is it so difficult to express?
; P1 j7 j- L) c3 C& V1 V7 f* G  A为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
% j# S" {+ D7 i. T& o; g8 R我多想向你表白
But I never did
$ m0 m% Y5 t9 q8 H- ]1 R. v8 y却始终未曾出口
: O1 n/ @$ b) `3 M. OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 U4 v) y; N5 Q; P只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
' A+ o4 _1 w2 f& F- K+ H8 ?If today isn’t too late,
4 e; Z' A. f$ m9 B; C0 o1 h假如还不太迟
$ o/ ^- @; a  C3 UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
5 _: J$ T/ V& E+ _0 f' t8 Y# ICan I entrust it to you?
6 Q4 ]( q0 g1 `; X可否将它 托付于你？
+ X9 j; L, @" |- ~( cEntrust my love within your heart
/ S" p' S: }& r/ {, C从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
5 k8 z, h8 M% g3 [可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
8 l: X( `6 _2 p" b' o从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
# L" b# W4 F/ x4 x7 x5 ^6 U老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
( T4 m* N8 _" O1 o' F+ x, X! o$ m老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
) V7 ^0 G8 Y- c$ B刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
$ r( s0 i/ p4 G3 j0 `  h, wvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。