【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

; p; o  M3 t; Q. O( J+ n一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

" H% Z4 z! c3 ?3 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- [, E# f' z0 X3 e& B' G皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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0 B6 w+ O# ]  ]9 n6 E2 ~( AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
* H; O: h7 ?( a) Y5 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 Y/ G& i% f0 |! |5 r) e一片丹心 照耀夜空

9 p5 @; E6 \8 T* ]6 _) I2 x1 KWith the moon kissing it every night
$ n9 {# y7 _3 ?6 e$ O5 D看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
! R' }  f( s# Y, C) y' [Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
2 c: ~% r5 G3 w2 Z, N1 xIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
8 k- R& }+ P- A/ ^" Y, J; j2 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
2 a7 s2 Q4 P9 T- E5 f+ zEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
) `5 i; |1 T* y, S: p/ _5 GI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
- t. K: Z$ E  M% g$ V4 y爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

) M9 [& N  g# e  {* _6 ~7 xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 x4 \6 K* y; Q0 p1 r' ~能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
$ K& z" R4 B4 B$ L& r* p6 l$ }0 O: eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
+ j3 q1 h/ ^! V% p6 X$ RI want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
5 L; D" o1 g) J2 H# II invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" f' |. Q3 V* C3 A' m: Z. w若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
, _, I+ C1 j$ H8 k5 ~I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
+ F! }5 P3 i9 `8 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& h% j3 G3 u. Z( u/ o( m你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
' r1 Z$ s/ G3 C1 ?! c& s3 E真恨不能 以死明志
9 V/ g( G( ^/ ]6 {I only have one tongue
6 ~( p: T1 e; v! _4 m3 z我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
3 }1 ^& X! l4 S3 Y7 mIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
  R# b6 o7 n1 a# GWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
1 ]: D- x0 n; C! LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! v5 _% Y, t: j7 t能说会道 无以伦比
& D9 e3 }1 t2 }* v; x6 r! U8 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) G+ ?/ K) Z: s( N3 t6 j& K从未向你吐露衷情
+ v" r( D, Y2 q9 nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
; Z6 x6 C, B: w0 tFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
  Y% c& l) `8 o/ h/ o- S7 `I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
# b- d- x* d" z: F- ~$ R6 LWe meet and talk everyday,
0 [! j2 O# ?; w8 b6 I& l你我每天见面寒暄
8 d- ^' z2 K2 b' z& I" ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% t" s$ o1 Q& Q! r& Z7 w- F若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
: |6 M) g! s& I. D# n  TI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
+ }+ z- y# O  E4 {( [) ?9 GLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
$ I, |& Z% i6 F3 v9 y1 ^& VI want to confess that I love you,
9 p( B+ S! N3 t我多想向你表白
But I never did
  h$ W% u# g9 b- _0 m4 L* V' |却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 N" X; |9 f% \; h3 x/ s只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
3 |$ z! }  x" r4 T+ }If today isn’t too late,
0 J; p3 [" t1 K假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 k2 Q' W$ p& f" A2 p( m今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
6 `4 m: [: [0 `' v. NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
- G5 X8 Y, r7 y2 S& vCan I entrust it to you?
( c+ U/ Q0 D, {7 ]# X可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
- @" N6 H$ O( O6 j6 }- g- e从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 T; q* @& i* Y; C5 ?为何如何难言？
% h+ a+ ^( h# O, G( E/ TI want to confess that I love you,
/ [8 \; z! l$ P/ p  Z我多想向你表白
2 k% \: L) h) t1 }9 |7 dBut I never did
4 z0 B8 ^" m2 G7 U) ]却始终未曾出口
4 k  n! m' d) h7 xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ \8 c2 T0 Z' @2 w" \5 s只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
: b8 j+ o. X( h0 P5 HIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
) O7 \0 _* K. G6 r/ }7 I. V0 D* N; MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ n% |0 [# S" S' V1 b0 R今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
: w! M1 h; Y4 II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 P! s, }% U: d& j不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
/ E: K, }# L4 p! i4 T2 l& _可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
+ Y- N* S+ ?$ `. A6 B% [从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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4 f: r( y3 U8 {2 YCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
8 N/ a$ z. o: S+ uEntrust my love within your heart
/ G9 _' Z5 Q( d- B从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
  U$ U& ^& e$ m+ C" J5 q( p老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
# N) U. c% z2 Y4 ^老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
% f# j8 i0 n* X$ c. b. O" o) P" o" d刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
" N" |) Z$ u$ ^7 O3 Ivichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。