【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
% O5 b. J1 \& Y: \3 F4 {, |: Lxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

5 D! {6 e0 e$ l) {2 k$ y" x; J一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

7 L; O! I+ D+ A, ?再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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4 X) V; A: q+ n: A2 c; s* @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
, ]9 Z  I  D4 Y7 D" |, cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
) n; I5 v5 r+ R; A% n6 Q; \0 X! rThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

) z2 ?" f$ T  |3 U9 |With the moon kissing it every night
' s- ?  `+ q7 k. U# F看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
0 o& {! W& g. P1 f: w2 pSeeing the sky content with its love
6 h5 u* w; a9 [% I$ E' Y" h5 f7 s" ]夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
1 \' X0 L9 y+ U0 z0 v0 a5 b怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
6 v7 T6 B# }7 l  h+ x3 gEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
" I8 j$ A& \! R4 B2 e! v5 V1 c世间万物  皆不能比

. h# B, _! i7 F! H- GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
8 s! D) ^4 S, d+ u# G5 wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- v8 Y" \+ m* R7 z3 y# I( \整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
' z$ q' A; v, n- W) q, |/ |I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
) j0 ]4 {! Q! I' t9 j- p0 I8 }) fTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
% V- g+ p; ~2 U5 K% d若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
9 ~+ }5 j7 X! e& q9 |$ WI’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
9 t) e$ }  E* U5 P& n6 J1 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
# G$ k+ C" \8 GI regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
7 B3 H1 a- j& W* g7 x7 hIt’s nothing close to 100,000
7 H( g6 v) s) }! D+ p& K也恨不得  多如千万
- ~1 V- x: y3 r/ X# T1 aWith such a tongue as yours,
& G7 X$ U& e  @6 |4 Q; G你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: \" z" T: D' S) G1 i; A; x能说会道 无以伦比
( s: \$ \1 c/ `  B% xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
) w- i% h# B- d. h* b1 z向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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" F) q5 B# L. b5 P' c/ h+ y  CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, M# ?) d* h6 c  }7 K' P3 m1 @$ B从未向你吐露衷情
% j0 n1 [9 d5 {8 v1 O3 u% m* \That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
+ f# s% z' s1 W5 MFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
$ w: p6 |5 o3 K! m( r( eWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* n1 o  K1 {' K. ^: e奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
# l* F/ \- r& L7 E* JLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
" y4 T. v4 L: i' y- b& r为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
0 _5 `; e6 _$ {" M% ]/ k我多想向你表白
$ D  _% F  ^% ?2 W4 pBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
. C6 I4 I, f: d6 M3 l; e1 o" lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; K7 Y- E" {' A只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
( D( y; x- |7 E  }, L7 Z! tIf today isn’t too late,
& g6 }2 l1 w+ `假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' N  m! A& `% v2 M$ {+ r+ U6 p* b0 n今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
) A7 n4 z4 g3 _" {+ e可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
/ p/ D. O8 g, s% Q! C9 Y爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ n0 ?0 Z9 p; l! X2 y为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
7 x$ z. K2 d2 y  R3 [6 u4 [) nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( x; T' A6 Q2 S只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
) v  E! \; |7 Y' t* KIf today isn’t too late,
/ S5 i; E  ?) ]  o; T, A( V' k' U假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
0 M$ h1 Z: B, Q2 T/ n% @1 S: A* {2 w6 lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
) P! h. y* Z2 J- D6 a( C4 v3 d' |$ sCan I entrust it to you?
1 H2 C; v* y5 M  T% o可否将它 托付于你？
: A6 |- Z' h% W: D5 g. }Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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) A+ O( b! O9 n* T2 \6 RCan I entrust it to you?
' e3 F4 ~$ ?; _" b" X2 h, f2 y/ a可否将它托付于你？
6 }8 I# \5 r9 M! M$ KEntrust my love within your heart
7 I, l: ^2 c5 t8 D从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
- T2 o2 \: J; B( p1 y, `刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
+ I) W" M+ D8 Y3 x; ~老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
2 o: o4 ?) [% S2 b) C; _刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
( l8 |9 W. f# T& G8 U  \2 |vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。