【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

# ?% B' R0 S: E/ P& C一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

& A+ _% ~: B# K. B, w( S1 P& X再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 I' R- W5 {$ c, I皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
/ v2 y9 o4 d! S$ P) B  Y' s5 B! ^  AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ `* N" B" t) z夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

5 V9 U2 c! x& a' _8 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 y. c9 I0 W6 z, T凝视明月 我心欢畅
* x1 }" g3 p/ I+ p/ E. N7 n# NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
: o. k% X- H; OThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ A5 \& |: {7 f  L: z8 j( V; L夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
% F; h3 Q% k' pIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
; R. c: ]; W/ \+ a- o3 q0 f0 RYou needn’t fear anything
% J1 H. j- g) b8 d% r怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. c& m" J8 W, l: _8 w0 \- U1 D我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
6 R  e4 y: \  L; o7 [% O' A  kEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
, a+ b& P$ n) Z0 yI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ w5 @7 I6 O5 z; c, @( J" ^爱你爱你 全心全意
- T& S- S9 ]$ F3 T! [7 cNothing can compare to my love
1 l! W* ^" L8 D) c3 T% p世间万物  皆不能比

; W7 L. S$ r" S0 s0 A9 \( ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 j  F7 i* f  b0 x4 W0 U4 _能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
1 }& u6 X% I! h( F0 @: N4 p' z$ GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; g$ Y9 q- ~' T9 q9 P/ f整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
; d: D3 M* \. Y& C2 o7 H我真想看透你的心
0 R0 M+ r3 [$ |7 d, ~I invite you to rip it out
# z8 I7 m- f8 `% ^4 x4 K6 H9 p3 z你尽管把它掏去
# y8 d, o  y8 \To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 M. V' F7 w- l, r2 L& V你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
# M: N0 w2 W! K7 d9 ~/ v( YI regret not dying
" u1 d5 h# D. v0 y真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
! A  X( z1 o/ {4 N我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
: R/ J8 J+ s, g2 @9 R' |: b2 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# P1 ~" ]2 M0 M0 A0 q能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
7 v- P2 Q/ J. \/ o
- p! Y- k0 x+ RThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. g; W! I$ _, p* x2 o从未向你吐露衷情
) C& |* H+ W# Z0 c1 W; M7 EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 w$ e7 U  S0 u3 ^  j) x7 Y爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
4 m3 y% }# @# l) Y- y1 DFrom the first moment we met,
' j+ ~9 n8 u! [* Z& D2 z3 E4 ~对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 Z* w1 _3 K& \! p1 T5 [奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* {0 b% t, C% E! X$ p若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
; m: }! T- W+ Y1 d3 s& [2 n- rI would probably know how you feel
# k) c3 x* f6 ]4 o或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
5 X- h3 c) p' o5 E& u( o爱呀，爱就一个字
# o& E' O3 v& q* {: p$ KWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
0 t- s7 I  S% t' o) U8 `' XI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
9 m  k, F- |7 G  a! SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( c  x: S7 q7 V; }只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
9 m$ J+ C4 n/ e% a. }3 ZIf today isn’t too late,
1 t+ S* g+ b: Y- L4 e假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ B' Q4 m: M' i# g今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
1 P8 Z; i! d" T) r, t, PCan I entrust it to you?
% [0 d2 Q% |) Z: E# _可否将它 托付于你?
5 Z4 H  H. [2 g/ S0 [Entrust my love within your heart
6 z' A+ ~- p9 j" U$ W+ b$ I& \从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
- ~/ x2 x) P: J4 k( u! y3 ~& C爱呀，爱就一个字
3 g) w1 |, ]" }Why is it so difficult to express?
4 i2 U: f/ M! |! e" F$ v为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
9 d0 y2 i) T& f% ], W- W" u3 \6 Z7 T却始终未曾出口
2 _4 A' ]& j# c  F4 N4 e2 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
7 C. K, R7 \8 y0 hIf today isn’t too late,
, n' h/ M* [* c/ b* a5 ]/ r假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 O& F7 N( K- \9 i0 O2 D今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
0 s- N' \1 h0 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" ^" P8 m( _4 {6 L不愿这份爱 逝如流水
( n0 B6 v* T& f  fCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
7 a6 l  k. k* j6 x  Z$ {Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
, X& D$ z5 p# L) t* M
Can I entrust it to you?
1 F1 d- n9 |, ?7 K& b可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
1 T1 P2 A3 Y* c( _3 A4 h: A从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
  x* ~9 V" n- v. @! h2 T8 u6 N老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
: H$ R  e8 C" p: v! x3 L刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
: l% ~# v8 Z' t7 ^7 ]& c1 V, S刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
4 |4 e* b1 D7 d- @  Lvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。