【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
4 U$ M" F1 b' v  Y% M+ _4 n
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ u7 j/ k- Y3 {: N0 S皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
3 {' x2 i- t5 x4 |5 A+ l5 T; _Making the sky glitter like gold,
) p: j& v+ _& a+ V* c3 T/ }夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ A' E; f7 T  L. y0 g* \月光闪烁 在我眼中
- E) ]8 p: G: t, _+ e) j0 g0 c: wThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 L& n1 d! Y* L6 _' i. l一片丹心 照耀夜空
, D. h: q, Y* w2 U! _9 z. h
With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
: u; Z3 C& i0 n* ~/ MSeeing the sky content with its love
! o# f1 c( s! X# T+ ]  G  s2 Z' U% s夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
  {- g, k' G, ?# d% g! w我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
3 X9 ?7 p/ k, g& {* [+ xYou needn’t fear anything
/ A0 y0 e2 N: m5 `& Z怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! ~' A, l- q: f% c4 u% I7 @5 u我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
1 `  M, K: O8 C8 ~& Q# c. H" b, A/ {Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
  c& h3 ]6 s+ g; @# u& tI really want to know just how much you love me
, ]2 m+ Q8 O4 F2 |# U& j真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
3 {6 |' }) y4 \: i. O3 qI love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
# T0 o6 A6 ?6 q6 X2 o9 _$ rNothing can compare to my love
( z2 M7 n/ p9 A( G- o世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
6 K7 x2 V9 A% L; O" RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 P5 L# `8 O( d( [' Q  Y9 ^6 C- b整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
: t2 h! X  p: ~- O, h  D3 a7 n: P8 MI want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
* T- G4 Z! D) r& gI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
8 {, D( h" z8 ^I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
$ O' k. l! Z6 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
7 ^& K  o" }2 i8 \* tI regret not dying
1 S$ x/ i5 M/ G真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
- Y) g! k# r8 R- k0 I7 r你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 i/ x8 m% p9 W1 q能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
- }9 C* @; Q5 J  a0 NRambling on about a thousand words of love
8 g! @( v5 |$ x向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

, H8 {! [7 O  _4 _6 {) lThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 d8 h, _1 T! n. K爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
4 f  E& @* m! [From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
8 _; g8 @+ |) \0 _* d% B6 j" VI already loved you with all my heart
* Z2 Q% T# K& e( s从此别无他意
5 r5 e, s1 }6 ^5 F4 yWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 z& K5 I* W6 F- }* W- v奈何从未谈及内心
' c. y( ?) e1 E; yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! W& V) F5 ^' J若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
& O4 u$ d, E4 J, ~7 D; d6 H$ h" bI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
* ~4 H7 A( X9 G9 DLove… just the word love
( I% S; h2 ^6 Y5 p$ I, D" N爱呀，爱就一个字
, n1 [) f' v  w0 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
& k# ]; _; P2 ~( a为何如此难言？
: S: K: j! z) U, U2 |/ Y/ n: aI want to confess that I love you,
: B* o/ {. `' \6 }6 V5 o/ F- P4 z4 d我多想向你表白
. l; D3 F$ \% h' g' h0 k3 p/ eBut I never did
3 m$ ?) m" W- o% s5 Q. e+ c8 {却始终未曾出口
# M+ Q( N1 W, @4 e% sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 @2 V* L7 C$ S只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
4 r, G7 u  q% W4 d$ R5 i2 p1 N' l, U; sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ C! `7 O1 O$ W% f今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ e5 [$ [/ s+ E9 r7 a& _- ?不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
" y: k% M. x1 H. J8 b- M. ~可否将它 托付于你?
3 E; |6 h7 r0 c: EEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
' G4 n+ [$ @  t7 I' C3 P: W
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
) L4 s# c2 R. i& xWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 G, v& }$ s5 K! Q4 c7 E为何如何难言？
2 ?# T) H0 s% _( V. ^I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
+ ^8 K; Y3 X4 f+ Z7 ~2 y# oBut I never did
6 t' T( Z6 L# w& [却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" g5 m/ v$ z  X6 P/ Z4 t只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
" x8 q; [. A: I! ^3 Q! W$ YIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
0 ]- p. ^9 w0 p1 XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' T* h9 h3 t  B$ A6 W今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
+ ?+ y# t2 U) g% Z0 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
, i6 l( G# t: G8 n# [  F8 n$ YCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
+ K, A6 K, E, I4 ]Entrust my love within your heart
5 t6 R) R# b, l2 ]& J1 {1 \( ^: D从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
' o* C+ E: |# h& i
0 Z2 L3 C* T" `4 p: @Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
6 g& n! T5 M5 q4 [0 E0 ]. _  @老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
$ H- q' j% ?: D; G老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
& x% Q4 J  s  V/ [刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
- d/ m1 {% G- v5 P& g8 `$ Jvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。