【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
. G. U: M, f% f7 v3 K- Vxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
- c- U) d" A# A% T* F) Svichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

+ e$ o/ n: ]% O7 m; |再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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; L3 t5 p0 R/ Y# K, xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) X6 E. s$ q' H0 e夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) f3 u" a: G$ V; |4 m月光闪烁 在我眼中
, n9 z- d/ e/ UThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

) Y* p1 m$ v1 s6 h$ T1 gWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
" A% _9 D! G7 O; M0 wSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; ?' _, N* o( v7 `% w4 v$ i我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
: \4 e4 Q/ _- C( v8 d4 `Every other word you utter is love
4 U( A8 n  j0 H+ u. E口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
& k; q0 @8 O% Q' n. W' FI love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
& V- t. N) j- L, O" e0 W/ O. p3 h世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  w. |+ b: d) @# N7 ~  B( P能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 o  t+ Z  W. j整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
3 O1 d- d# Q7 K1 zI invite you to rip it out
* B) d1 H/ W  Q+ }5 ~, m你尽管把它掏去
. N, t2 R% U- F4 xTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 {! F, H4 |5 u9 U8 t若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
% x8 c" @2 W8 x6 ~5 d8 S4 u, EI’m still filled with fear
; K) R2 O) v/ M" Q. q可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
5 a: T$ c$ G; b1 L) ~- r2 U真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
/ \' b  W% l2 T0 e  G) Q0 P) \我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
. b6 c5 d( W, R( g/ q% `你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
4 A2 d2 @9 I  ~5 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 l. ?" |9 q/ ]若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
6 P* m1 F1 V8 O* j2 F( HRambling on about a thousand words of love
+ T! i: b5 v' A: e; e% t向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
/ Y$ r* a7 P9 J$ w" E从此别无他意
  f! m- i& [$ J) `( _) |1 qWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 R, U1 h8 o5 g, U8 A5 z奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 p& l$ m4 H( C" f, k" W& r若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
) o/ y8 j9 K, f6 t% p8 Z9 B' z爱呀，爱就一个字
# ~; o" F3 v6 j4 k) a5 ?7 F! X, nWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ `, Z% _. z5 ]+ M/ p为何如此难言？
- {1 q. r5 x8 m  W/ }( CI want to confess that I love you,
4 Q! Q3 f1 R, R4 a; ?, P' E8 y我多想向你表白
$ @& S2 e; A0 kBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 J3 y. y; ?2 }" M只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
/ q( F( }0 X/ j( FIf today isn’t too late,
( q3 ^& h* Q, @5 Z! \9 R7 `* s假如还不太迟
( i4 V( W2 B: h& E% h' oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ S7 n7 k1 B) d' R7 g3 r今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
: Z. t1 t' n0 ^# Q* K5 V3 p1 oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
4 D3 i( F, j" G4 y! M4 CCan I entrust it to you?
6 j$ z- k2 J) [. z9 ~可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
: U/ z; n8 [  K3 ~) a+ j' s爱呀，爱就一个字
  X* e& u5 f/ d, [/ J  gWhy is it so difficult to express?
: l% @# O1 W/ W5 C& ~& S为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
: Q  y2 k. s1 N* U4 I/ O我多想向你表白
But I never did
3 }/ v6 x% ]+ B却始终未曾出口
1 u2 ~9 v$ P6 y3 V9 D! TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
- \3 v" h* q2 C& HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
% C( l* O4 J) v# CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
( s7 N7 ~. ~. W. [可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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8 I1 M$ z9 d1 G  zCan I entrust it to you?
/ b' Z4 {/ R4 a! B; z可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
( H3 L/ ~# J) @3 U从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
* P1 T4 n+ B% V; b" H刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

7 I6 U  [+ z7 q1 h不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。