【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

/ U* E$ P+ A9 W) y7 l& I一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

1 T& j! v  r& U再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 }: L- P' K3 L' A) O% T皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
0 N$ P% K; C. ?6 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ O6 n+ [- v* I3 E. ^+ |夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
" ~& A% d# b, bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
& X! M2 @4 q' D; y8 ^看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
5 ?1 v7 b$ t1 VSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
0 I6 z. M+ `' L! F! ~It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
# d/ s0 A4 S& G$ C7 `; j我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
6 H: \' t) c/ G  o7 K6 D5 zYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ m$ k' f, }0 O! G我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
$ y" n, U7 E. k! k+ R% ]Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 P: F5 }4 y9 D2 r# F真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
  O4 T' S' E0 D# X- l% \' zI love you I love you with all my heart
3 x9 h$ h- Y! ^9 D  v; Q, T# H" X爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
& r+ N8 y' l* w7 p' f世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% t) x9 e8 C! a能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
$ F$ r3 Q% ]* P6 eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
2 G% R1 @; _4 T5 hI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
; S7 O) [, w6 R3 p3 L2 yTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# H+ u# _; H$ u9 {5 I7 [你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
# r! Y/ P- z: F# Q% O+ W. _$ }I regret not dying
# e/ ~1 `" `1 O' D真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
1 ~/ s4 C% ^, b2 z6 G2 }5 V我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
, j, K# g+ l5 \7 v/ q) M; f6 _" H/ DWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
) B3 |( t3 O$ _7 ]) L5 aYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- e2 E6 x3 C4 M1 M5 O/ v) ^能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 I' D% H) i& z# Q5 K- L+ H% \若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
$ R% w9 ^; ~; a- o3 pRambling on about a thousand words of love
7 _8 X: i' D% x$ Q向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

7 V6 _$ o9 u" Y) R- sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; f4 {- ]$ N$ a! n: v- s  i从未向你吐露衷情
: `& U4 [: e+ ^$ EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 A1 K& k: V; i. w: d: O爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
5 n7 T) P2 L% ?! h# ~I already loved you with all my heart
" p0 U: Z8 k) z& l. T% M) X3 R从此别无他意
  b8 [% o6 J6 j* g* O5 rWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
$ O0 W: f- X& k* _( TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 T% c  A' @( T奈何从未谈及内心
0 I7 H* _8 V. R/ t3 LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* }& }- B/ \: R若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
) g+ n9 G$ d3 N2 v: gI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
1 {! M# M6 P9 L$ [; U: \: R爱呀，爱就一个字
' z6 A- F% t. ]8 E5 r  i& d. o: _% O, |Why is it so difficult to express?
* [7 Z/ E9 F; @9 }为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
8 g* ~0 h5 c: n0 e4 bBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
7 d# r4 ~; W, u& M. G2 W( i- X. JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
  F& a& T; L* ZIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
+ d* O1 w% G1 u9 K4 l# Z# R; ^' ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; X$ V1 h+ y# J, e4 w- L$ r( J不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
5 H. ^; C4 [$ T7 z( _Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
4 d# R# A% Y) ~; ]5 l0 @" L爱呀，爱就一个字
9 T0 j  W3 @! gWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
! T4 ~, g0 [9 C( P0 A: E/ Y4 N, oI want to confess that I love you,
/ o& F1 f+ \* m, T( S我多想向你表白
But I never did
. d. K9 F! G' G: Z) |3 D6 Y却始终未曾出口
! j' T/ ^# q1 S$ T& A) Z5 _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 |2 F" O2 |* z: D只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
2 ~% s9 V+ q: x, u9 G9 @! @& m4 h假如还不太迟
; y  C7 @+ ^( p0 x; s! O, w' HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
% g% d5 j- m" BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
1 `' ~3 q' I- m, v5 U' A# D% iCan I entrust it to you?
+ X' D  ^$ J- \- Y' F可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

9 \; B+ A; [* @& D3 sCan I entrust it to you?
6 |/ `8 q2 J- f) S2 O0 d% Q可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
/ z, A6 c& W) i- n; d" \' l2 B从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
7 N- }7 `( J4 u1 J- Y刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
: R0 s+ c3 C2 f/ G老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。