【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
" I: ]9 o- V9 tvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

$ G' h7 M5 K; r+ X2 V4 c/ B再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

# ~- {; _, l4 b$ h9 \. C( |The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% _# _! Z% T* c% g夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, y' g1 p1 B* |' h' ^: ~6 K凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
. Z% n! Y4 |' A6 G3 W0 Z+ iSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
% h5 _4 ~, ?/ Y, }  e/ W我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
% S( ~0 w* M" A4 K8 q" x怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ W* h& O1 ?1 l% G我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
  L, X+ S  c$ `( K3 REvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
6 ~2 m$ w' g! j/ ^. RI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
& @) u5 z4 l+ `# B& e  W3 V世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 s( h0 Y3 m3 ^: L/ v2 @& C整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
2 B1 E* b$ @: g" V- U% kI invite you to rip it out
/ G" u" u6 ]0 F; s( R你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" {9 J7 k6 g3 d5 r若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
) @3 r, b& ~9 Y& D% \3 q( `I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
0 S/ n& Y7 V, SI only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
8 L* e' D+ B0 P, D" z! aIt’s nothing close to 100,000
0 u! V" t8 `$ @+ }  d也恨不得  多如千万
0 Y9 |/ F6 Z) [  w; U' C2 eWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
; @* }- k: @9 g8 H7 o+ mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 B- H9 C4 [5 Z" ]; f4 e* f能说会道 无以伦比
' R* j+ _" I0 oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' {4 q1 l0 R2 d: D" H/ B若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
7 b) D& C( p1 [0 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 b2 [+ c3 `  J7 m; W2 J" w爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
' s# |3 M0 o. X' e- bFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
( d# F/ t3 \! o, J* o8 M& wWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
* y7 i$ O% f, A: z9 X4 G$ F- LBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 l( m+ J- F/ t; j) z8 c- y$ O奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ d+ c3 N9 _* x若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
7 Y; K+ g6 D6 f- K- BI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
7 J* b1 M) R3 r( T3 }3 c* YBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: U4 e# B9 B1 M6 e; E9 s% |不愿这份爱 逝如流水
. p/ @9 a/ N, z" c# I4 L: kCan I entrust it to you?
( }: d, W. K" N- H" Y: n1 [可否将它 托付于你?
. K* N2 I! `% N( D* dEntrust my love within your heart
/ r' ?% R) i7 ^: w8 F" R. M0 R3 r从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

- D) j8 d0 d8 }9 `5 o. R0 |Love… just the word love
0 I' C; O) @% I4 c爱呀，爱就一个字
$ Q, n1 r  L* R: ^5 HWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
* X) L7 c) t4 d  P3 M* W! [  r/ uBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. u# K( o: \9 ?' `: {& _) c7 k只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
1 e  R9 p8 N, _2 y/ PIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
: A) |- N/ }5 t' gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
' V8 |6 O5 j) ~7 Z; {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ y$ K) M+ B" N不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
! G3 W- s7 h% R可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
' e- K( y; h8 \3 g% L" j" f* ~从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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# [2 _; E, T& K, L" c/ ]% ~Can I entrust it to you?
2 z1 S: t9 O- }- k: ]可否将它托付于你？
( f) c6 m" a2 `3 u0 E2 b6 Y9 l, g8 yEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
3 z; _, w  V% m老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
+ l& @8 d( \  ?) ?, q+ \刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
6 C0 f) K% h; k+ M老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
0 J8 r" B" N5 ^/ M( T* ^1 ?vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

4 |, T8 {. n; s& \" X不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。