【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

' b: @( d- K$ c: z一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
) j5 j' Y  K" G- Avichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

# z. p& m8 y8 N. Q3 O再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
% i' ^5 A; ]- o8 t) @5 ~( b: s皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
9 A( {: J7 x# h( F4 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 n9 l" \4 ^8 j1 T6 b! W夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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; J% d9 a& s! r, A0 O1 F; `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 ]! K' O5 u! n- {! C凝视明月 我心欢畅
( `2 Y5 J( ]- s% x6 l* ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
" X) G6 m/ G" C. g1 [3 I' U一片丹心 照耀夜空
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$ w' `$ L$ v. GWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
  G) K& l1 A" }; ^Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
  m% N( N' O3 }( eYou needn’t fear anything
2 A! t( K& ~/ p怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 e" t4 c  W- `* t- E# q/ t我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
1 I! [* y' p1 j' f  |口口声声 说你爱我
! @, k$ }& m$ g& T7 F2 _* hI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
9 h! E+ y* V* M& X  VNothing can compare to my love
( D" ?* V- ~( D9 c* [世间万物  皆不能比

5 d9 Z' |' n' tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ p, e) M% `9 H# q能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 n9 U2 ?% A& B. S整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
. ^3 n% H) r. E, b  u9 XI want so much to see inside your heart
) c) l4 _' }5 D# \& c1 J( a9 _我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
; d2 z, n6 o6 a* B; _$ }2 {你尽管把它掏去
, N3 U- o  R1 K7 P% n& [To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
& J, O) m: n+ {& R6 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 h/ }; m. _+ O" [- |若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
/ }- ~' K8 Y" {, T8 A5 qRambling on about a thousand words of love
8 S; O- n% b  [5 X向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
: n" q- p1 J) w  Q7 T/ nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
, P; d/ v, c1 l3 X" TFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
3 W0 B. ]) Z" |你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
8 O& d6 P! s! h! g( }7 J! mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 S& m/ l# Z% w, E9 {' `若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
# V, [/ Q+ ~: f1 PI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
% S6 z/ Q& c, f, z1 u  y爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
3 \, }9 I, b2 A" y) eBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
: S# b+ ~2 ^5 d. n$ dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! o) d& E3 e+ I' \6 r* j! a1 h只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
' ?3 Y1 l$ O1 zIf today isn’t too late,
4 W+ C/ P1 D" |: ]2 v假如还不太迟
( X+ e( g+ x% G- d& j0 FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. w" {0 \9 z4 ]4 E今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
5 }; c! n% m. c) y0 R3 f/ ?" PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 ^4 n2 k0 g6 J8 J, p7 A% u不愿这份爱 逝如流水
4 n, F5 b* t0 P7 A/ ]3 a; WCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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! ^; |: l( d( M% V" p1 @5 NLove… just the word love
8 ?( V" z4 }+ ~9 K% \! l' v3 I爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
+ Q( g9 J, V: ^6 J3 o却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' E6 `7 d3 [* u只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
. Y0 ]+ g7 z1 n+ {/ IIf today isn’t too late,
' E3 G7 Y6 U: h- z9 |假如还不太迟
" [5 J. N- A, G& [5 w/ T/ dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
7 @4 r2 Z) O) e  M, o& yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
9 |( w, f8 Y# UCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
. p2 r! C7 {5 B. ]4 G9 F从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
* R! \) D5 I) B# v" w4 WEntrust my love within your heart
+ z  l9 {1 @4 f& j' Q从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
6 z( ~' a& s3 e( Z1 \老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
+ s& [# \3 `7 b3 tvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

0 ~, c! m1 @0 b& v' A6 G3 s不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。