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[公告] 【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告(参赛视频18、19楼)(比赛结果已公布~)

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发表于 2009-1-1 10:24 | 显示全部楼层
老大:感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作?期待!......* t% x) @: p* r7 [7 C
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04
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一个月前我译了一半,旅游回来再看,自己都看不过去,索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:25 | 显示全部楼层
哦呀,你们都贴在这里,偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大,谢谢提醒) X7 U' Q+ [6 w) _/ x2 f" r
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20
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再贴到这里来呀。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲2:男女对唱) l' C0 R* x7 B2 y

( Q+ z5 Y0 P. z( U$ p+ rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- i, h% |2 M% a+ @皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
" z$ ~, t' o: G) M% n& M; w- SMaking the sky glitter like gold, 4 l* z& Q7 J* h! `% y5 X
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂  P" d5 a7 u; ^( @* X

& K5 S( h6 Y9 Z/ V* [When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 O  O$ R0 ]( ?& b- j凝视明月 我心欢畅
5 j* q4 M3 b( ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes 5 i- p- V. ]( V8 N
月光闪烁 在我眼中/ t2 j$ x, O8 @0 M+ q( c0 r
The sky is happy down to its soul 3 O3 l, ]( n, Q3 Q
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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! C/ D% E% B; ~With the moon kissing it every night
: H9 f2 T  Q) ~看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
( [/ }5 h0 w: }( xSeeing the sky content with its love
/ |, ?5 L* c& y5 E夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
- e" [5 B/ l* i5 b6 fIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
8 [' ]; P: k6 l& N我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
8 k" l3 S4 P+ F( U2 yYou needn’t fear anything $ E- N! y" `$ h0 D. D+ W6 t+ [# r
怕这怕那 又是何苦" S% S: r7 w" y) m! h+ Z7 G: p" _, l; V
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ J# O( m; b4 o% e0 e/ j5 b我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢8 ]7 z& z% ~* G5 j
Every other word you utter is love% [; e$ y8 C) B$ V; ^7 A4 n. R
口口声声 说你爱我8 k1 b: w, B' b/ }# @; q; O+ ~
I really want to know just how much you love me
. O! H! @. M; I真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
! t9 k7 M6 r. r7 c$ R( YI love you I love you with all my heart " [6 e+ A, n: L& F
爱你爱你 全心全意: `7 G# H+ w. e/ O( x! t. i  I+ G
Nothing can compare to my love
3 V1 B; p0 g" y- O. k3 I  d. t世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ a% S' q. V6 F% F' t/ k7 y能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥?
4 j$ h. e' k; W# V* O" _  |1 nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ X: S2 i4 h& j整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
: x2 Y- M9 G8 F; u1 dI want so much to see inside your heart
, o1 i6 r/ T1 L& r5 U: J我真想看透你的心; {: e6 r; I: \
I invite you to rip it out
! L2 |# ~  g2 \: p: }$ {! b你尽管把它掏去, a- X- P, W# q8 t; `
To prove my love, I’m willing to die 3 O/ x( _% S; ]- k$ F
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
. H8 N5 s* R$ f3 F8 J) q6 xI’m still filled with fear
8 f6 ~% j( L" ]+ a+ W0 n可我依然满心忧虑
5 ]$ B: d7 p& ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 a% _* _9 ^9 F& T# |" C9 X你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
" v, t6 ~9 }4 d& a! k! L8 yI regret not dying ; ~2 y2 r7 Y( |! Z& Q
真恨不能 以死明志) f; C$ A' l9 [& ^4 h2 F
I only have one tongue
" c9 `2 I/ T8 Y. p  F+ {我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
  ?; v( {, Q8 _. `It’s nothing close to 100,000
" H9 X, h9 G9 c. @/ X+ V也恨不得  多如千万
8 T! |( Z1 Q3 Q& y& b) m, kWith such a tongue as yours,
: I7 P6 z% A- i6 \$ p! @. z2 d你这张嘴 真真厉害: c: M+ {6 ?- g
Your speech can’t even keep up with it $ i" v4 s- _0 @5 X- \1 ]& }* y
能说会道 无以伦比
& m' g" q( C- @! N* w3 KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% Q" o) K4 u8 A6 `若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝) ~5 w- T0 G/ R' [" X
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
  m& Z0 w7 z; x5 `' F向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

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发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲一:主题曲
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you# H5 A; w( L* I' Z
从未向你吐露衷情+ R4 T3 w' d) ]0 |# C* w% E
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you3 L  ^1 }, d: N5 T
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
+ J. s7 H8 a% V. DFrom the first moment we met,
) @/ X" l. o; R: l对你一见倾心8 g+ s* ?; r6 g! r0 Q7 X, W, `6 D: S
I already loved you with all my heart
* f5 q* V9 l( w. ~从此别无他意3 `, D1 ^6 O/ d6 C8 S: V4 z
We meet and talk everyday,
) u7 T  R4 U( c你我每天见面寒暄8 d2 V* A6 Y9 k$ z3 J" l; ?
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) {, {/ p6 G' s" L' a' p" x奈何从未谈及内心* Z" e) c+ e3 A# ]+ p
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% Q& d+ [4 w  S2 N若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
: d6 n% a5 e( g% e$ K7 c! _I would probably know how you feel
% F% ?; p9 ^$ Q! a# q  N或能知你心意
9 k# h; ^) C% I) I( j+ d4 J* `Love… just the word love; L. k7 v8 B+ s" {. w$ o
爱呀,爱就一个字
4 s! Q' c* W- @3 P+ H  r* R9 WWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ ^( ~  F9 }: }$ ?9 r8 }* b为何如此难言?
7 _# H- U+ H" ~5 c3 b  xI want to confess that I love you,! D1 R0 l1 N0 U* ?/ \
我多想向你表白
8 h4 z$ R3 M* t2 E3 {But I never did
! p4 l6 e. E- U3 q+ D4 w: i' @9 R却始终未曾出口( \3 W8 f: c( E1 [% j( G
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers5 }' K" L3 g% i9 z8 D4 y, |  c
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走# z* P! L, t. C: w% R% k
If today isn’t too late,0 k" S1 ~' A$ b7 i: a, A! T. a' M+ R2 d! ]
假如还不太迟
8 l3 z/ [; i- PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 L$ B3 A% A7 x4 y' m* a1 L0 s今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思, _2 K4 P( y* p/ @% M* ~
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" L9 x9 k  d: k不愿这份爱 逝如流水
& A6 l6 ^# p4 }. h, DCan I entrust it to you?/ {3 ]) U+ G& C+ Q2 W) P% V- b3 A7 _5 n" N
可否将它 托付于你?
; F$ _7 d2 `- w, UEntrust my love within your heart" D$ O8 B4 _, r3 \% w
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love6 r' K- H" z/ b% P. O+ _
爱呀,爱就一个字
7 _4 C( G9 G) r' U4 W& tWhy is it so difficult to express?& T2 s3 ]5 m5 x: e
为何如何难言?
4 p$ D% b: c8 T% OI want to confess that I love you,
' K# L# x, \3 D& |/ U3 }1 E我多想向你表白; G$ J  ?, ?$ u" P3 m
But I never did, @" ^! M1 K6 i" j4 j
却始终未曾出口
& K! X; ^+ f2 j; P: h# TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers4 W7 j6 ~3 r: l1 G0 \
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走7 \; c" K) J  |9 E
If today isn’t too late,
" G, J: x* d( _假如还不太迟 - \" K& H! e: I1 }/ G. A! c+ K# m
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( @8 j, B$ U, r: T今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
6 W) [6 m8 x7 n3 [! f8 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away ) M9 `' Z4 P' x5 @+ A8 d6 S- H
不愿这份爱 逝如流水; z+ W: B/ g. ~4 E6 t9 O2 j  p4 F
Can I entrust it to you?
. t% A/ R3 B7 o3 |. L' v' K可否将它 托付于你?
( |) x, x% s& |3 m# cEntrust my love within your heart  M! N+ G7 u" j2 k, W% Q
从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去
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% k4 o, y* U7 c5 Y& p/ M" ^$ @Can I entrust it to you?$ R: h% z6 s9 c0 z/ A- U' E6 N( m1 T
可否将它托付于你?) O' e; e# Z* E* M* `  |
Entrust my love within your heart
1 u' ~( Q0 p3 @8 v$ F从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去
发表于 2009-1-1 10:38 | 显示全部楼层
41# 杏花疏影 ! Z$ f0 Y; j: q# L! |8 ^% G
老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
1 l+ C& w. a3 ?- C9 F# F4 S刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~
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发表于 2009-1-1 21:59 | 显示全部楼层
“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握,感觉韵似乎必须押,译词的长短也得基本合”,偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大,但是到了第二首,就很有看头了。
发表于 2009-1-1 22:01 | 显示全部楼层
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老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
5 `7 J3 |0 {$ t# _. u5 N刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~
" P- [  L) ?+ j1 K$ lvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38
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不碍事,偶们表慢...
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-1-2 22:05 | 显示全部楼层
太好了,我旅游回来看到大家的译作,满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。
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