【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
. {1 L2 q( x5 w0 k; V, dxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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: G% c% j7 m% b- E. p+ o+ aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
5 v. o0 [: V* u6 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- }* l, J( T0 x% P' R9 @" ^" I) l夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

" X( N, |. h% _- o# }3 iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 `% r7 s/ \- R6 C凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
  U; V# M$ z8 p* h' aThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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# o8 Y9 C/ h) N# G$ kWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
7 ]/ a8 Z0 ]- G" @Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
; L! l# b6 I! oEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
! H  C- e* [, Y' Y' B) }6 _. ~8 uI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
/ @  {* Q3 m4 U5 g8 EI love you I love you with all my heart
# N1 ?; \' \4 ^- O爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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$ K' g# _- q% }+ ^$ |2 V9 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 V4 f2 w2 A% W能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. p  f3 e6 S# P% ^- O整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
8 P, h' w' ]5 ]: A+ P8 h! XI invite you to rip it out
/ u& A/ N" R5 u6 \1 a' U, ^! W( n1 g你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 ^# F" n5 y/ G" c9 m" v若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
- i( V  Z, w( ~# e2 d* Z+ c% U: `I’m still filled with fear
& y0 H* |) D, T/ O$ t: J. }可我依然满心忧虑
' P$ C/ f/ z% J6 v' OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
" H* t. y# {5 L' z0 yI regret not dying
  `/ l7 N9 r! ]7 @5 _: ^真恨不能 以死明志
8 c% _# A7 d* t. k, hI only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
5 V5 h( f. d! _" C9 u5 Z. IIt’s nothing close to 100,000
! D, T4 G) u0 t  h也恨不得  多如千万
( g# z5 `) Q: R7 q% d: Y7 E8 ~With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
0 J- d! P4 @% p; {, {" {" c2 J5 S8 ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
5 x& a" T/ [1 q/ A3 c% GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

; [! `" z" z) J. EThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( F! N$ J* m5 g从未向你吐露衷情
) [, O% _  z$ t7 MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; @4 i* s& L; Z爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
: [! E% [; P& ?! u对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
8 P% K% d* f; U& |从此别无他意
0 z$ b9 M6 ?6 oWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
% A/ P% O, G* Z3 U* v7 ]# O) V( ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
6 V8 J4 D& S( P* {9 ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 F: F5 U$ X  v* q2 B2 R若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
5 I! \, X$ ?6 @: d/ p或能知你心意
* D/ n5 q' z2 q2 [) i5 TLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 |6 o3 i, W2 f6 _+ F为何如此难言？
7 _/ ]1 x- h$ m5 B& i. ^$ \I want to confess that I love you,
' |! y% [. ]0 }$ j" @$ T$ m我多想向你表白
But I never did
% G1 g/ W' _; i% H却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 E# z* z6 b8 [4 ]! z( R3 U只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
! G4 e& K# `/ L+ b" ?If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
. w. K# N: F; aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
" K' a0 H# S, C2 W0 iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
3 A# j' U. N; ~& A4 ~+ ACan I entrust it to you?
* K; y2 e( C7 O( J5 N可否将它 托付于你?
- D" E# T0 C; X0 @; DEntrust my love within your heart
' I7 ?5 l2 i. ^从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
- _6 [% G# d! M# u爱呀，爱就一个字
$ c- F( @( q$ ^* r! q1 z2 fWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
3 O$ U# L+ i8 W8 F  `6 y: i; C2 JI want to confess that I love you,
! z9 E2 [/ M2 M我多想向你表白
But I never did
2 B9 P. r+ _+ T/ B1 \* C/ S: Z8 L却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
. D8 O8 a2 G+ w4 J4 _4 ~假如还不太迟
0 H" P/ K& {7 r# pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 a: F" G" p" @; W7 I  U今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 Z# Z" K/ S/ D" W' P* ?/ k不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
& C0 @3 |" @9 z可否将它 托付于你？
$ c+ m; U- Y4 [' |Entrust my love within your heart
; i# y" ]& J7 z从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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0 D- Z" F) N3 K! d, _, E% TCan I entrust it to you?
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Entrust my love within your heart
- C2 T  L3 C3 o; n' y# }从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
2 [) o' F& E# g% S4 x老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
3 L, s  ~! {: N$ a刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
  A$ f4 v2 R% O! L! b, y4 zvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

6 s+ W/ p7 q! H不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。