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[公告] 【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告(参赛视频18、19楼)(比赛结果已公布~)

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发表于 2009-1-1 10:24 | 显示全部楼层
老大:感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作?期待!......
- F  k3 _2 E. b  q/ f* A" Bxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

/ }  f" c2 r: W( f0 H# }一个月前我译了一半,旅游回来再看,自己都看不过去,索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:25 | 显示全部楼层
哦呀,你们都贴在这里,偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大,谢谢提醒
. l$ k: S- P5 \8 gvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20
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再贴到这里来呀。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲2:男女对唱  l: ~8 e, i9 b7 v5 P# w

) Y, U3 V2 q: @- CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& m7 m, ~# j2 m6 k, s皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
- v4 W* f5 }, K' ^7 A" wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 {7 A) b- b# }2 p' A夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness & j( H2 i0 Y/ f
凝视明月 我心欢畅. A& N# A+ j5 F8 z  a+ c, `4 N+ S
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes ' A5 p; W! G4 [  J
月光闪烁 在我眼中  M9 J% c3 v1 l5 A- {
The sky is happy down to its soul
  U1 U5 H8 l4 {% S, f! j' g3 {' c一片丹心 照耀夜空
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8 D  v! E# D! I- {; a) W  JWith the moon kissing it every night
* r; J& W9 f( z% g& [: X9 |3 X看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
# H2 u  l, a; @2 dSeeing the sky content with its love
2 E: }9 z% ^3 T: s夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中. {8 V4 }& Z1 L/ e6 m! p
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour   K, p. Z' D9 |; K/ N6 n
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味: v; S9 c7 {& p0 S
You needn’t fear anything
4 l- I$ m# X( h0 ^+ v$ \: K; H' L& W怕这怕那 又是何苦
+ }4 w9 a+ V. R' C1 @# rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( z" T% x2 q+ ]9 p  D' O5 V我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢" o: _: R6 Z8 k" Q
Every other word you utter is love
- [, G2 L6 I+ O( H3 S口口声声 说你爱我/ t0 m' Q: d# J, `
I really want to know just how much you love me   V, H. |# c7 }' i' I) [
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
0 D# o5 c0 d* i) KI love you I love you with all my heart
, _# z7 z5 V9 K" n爱你爱你 全心全意$ v5 L9 R1 ?7 \4 }2 o1 @/ ~
Nothing can compare to my love 6 j2 ]( n. l' i
世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? 0 r. N+ w1 K" f9 W
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥?% m/ |& o; v! z' c+ |# e! E
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love ; N* U9 I, E: O. j( J
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
6 d) J: C8 s6 @( ], l% ~5 \& NI want so much to see inside your heart . y4 ]* s  b2 U3 R
我真想看透你的心9 U& Y+ c3 U! X# S6 p4 ]- M, J
I invite you to rip it out
. E0 H- k" O, M* X" Z你尽管把它掏去
& m$ e+ M- ], M6 ]To prove my love, I’m willing to die 6 P' E4 D6 R. I/ p2 E
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜( T2 K5 R% I3 g' C: Q) O' O
I’m still filled with fear 1 \  m, |# c. r0 d" P
可我依然满心忧虑1 n% s3 ~7 q" A8 a" i" V! ^
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 `+ {4 s, k# s% L4 A# W, y你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张& a9 O! M7 N8 F; Q
I regret not dying
9 K, d" Q: E3 o真恨不能 以死明志
, M, C' n* S9 R. I- e( FI only have one tongue
+ |7 y8 r4 v% f6 o! Y+ B& `我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张0 F% r$ A1 w' D7 z  J
It’s nothing close to 100,0003 L0 {, E. |* X- d+ F
也恨不得  多如千万
  _1 D3 t( _6 iWith such a tongue as yours,
$ z1 W' `$ g; H6 h% L你这张嘴 真真厉害
6 ?, D3 W$ F1 Y  _) p+ g' H3 q) A6 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it & q. ?; [3 d- `
能说会道 无以伦比4 J1 `8 y4 i6 ~, g8 |
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 J9 G; C1 p( z若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
. L4 n0 ]0 p( W9 y, lRambling on about a thousand words of love( k) A! M9 u& S2 O- W
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发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲一:主题曲
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you! V7 t& ]: N& b& h
从未向你吐露衷情$ n2 v/ G# c5 {% k7 u$ T/ R
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 U4 e; V2 O% @% h# }1 g爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密; R  U# f. a; O4 a2 ?0 d# q
From the first moment we met,
0 \1 k) S6 p' x, E对你一见倾心% J. C4 [! s( [! K) N
I already loved you with all my heart
6 `0 R9 v& |( N6 x! Z8 D4 i从此别无他意9 S+ k8 R- Z' ]5 t% @
We meet and talk everyday,
9 w( ~3 L8 R" R你我每天见面寒暄
6 z' j  G) K  F- T. x5 PBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart5 q9 d* M7 _8 c6 [8 P
奈何从未谈及内心
" v$ U  F) x% S; G& I/ iIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* w  N, C+ ^% M1 j. {若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂/ }  s! d" V3 c! I
I would probably know how you feel7 V  t2 o) m1 i5 a& o/ h7 |7 d- \
或能知你心意
$ \0 m) v+ W: P( ?/ [Love… just the word love
, w2 o, ?/ v. ~+ ~( B爱呀,爱就一个字
* N+ x7 D' T7 m' n( o' g$ lWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 M& s1 W- Y9 m# ^* |为何如此难言?
  t; J. o# R% n/ o$ I! FI want to confess that I love you,% i! C& P+ r2 D) q" L
我多想向你表白
4 }+ X7 `- o3 f( C) KBut I never did3 a# p# ~4 W, v* I% T
却始终未曾出口. L6 O5 ]5 N4 X  X
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 [: D3 B) ^5 v6 Q/ q9 p6 |只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走9 ?$ h# w! S% a
If today isn’t too late,
4 b$ B6 w3 S/ s+ y! |假如还不太迟6 F9 ^5 N- V' m- h/ Z( o/ `  K
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess& [8 o; n' _# n; I# j; F
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思& W2 c; }, ], n7 d- x  b
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away 7 D. L5 b: R- v9 l" n0 O6 ^
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
( I, @3 H9 g3 u" S: {5 V& @Can I entrust it to you?
6 z2 P$ _5 \+ m9 `: |8 B" H9 M% z# J可否将它 托付于你?7 q+ F% ]% u. w5 w* G( g
Entrust my love within your heart
5 \( r  i# D& v6 D& L) i0 @1 i" z从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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* W/ w9 P, `) b4 P) CLove… just the word love
& m5 ~' A: A% R爱呀,爱就一个字
. G0 K' v' @- B& J; vWhy is it so difficult to express?+ }3 p4 v- ]5 Y! p# h
为何如何难言?
% o. [: Y' O$ ?$ TI want to confess that I love you,
4 K/ ~! Q, [, v+ J1 H我多想向你表白6 }2 Y" C5 V, j
But I never did9 K- i* g1 K; W# }6 P" K' l6 O
却始终未曾出口
3 T. m- Z8 ?) Q2 A* T( J0 kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers% H3 S' ~! y* g/ K0 i  ]
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
* r, t# ~% B& @9 kIf today isn’t too late,$ U" R# B/ u' k
假如还不太迟 1 U! X( q* w/ E" q6 Z* t
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. R7 T8 b& |5 w- O今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
* U, {- P* F' T$ t/ \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away , i; D3 V& e& t  v. i$ A6 Y
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
- y; q) M8 u; X- T* {% A& KCan I entrust it to you?
. g' B6 \3 a/ M  z  e9 u) i% u可否将它 托付于你?/ r0 r6 D$ T" H6 S. d' U) w
Entrust my love within your heart
# h7 C' Y8 d7 q" g/ Q+ C8 v从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去/ |7 y) e) Q4 l6 y( x

, H' X2 |$ A3 Q" y4 S$ ~  A. s0 iCan I entrust it to you?6 O# R7 g/ p5 o! }% p
可否将它托付于你?0 A- B4 ~+ j8 D8 Q9 V7 |/ s: r
Entrust my love within your heart) @/ \5 Y& P- @( M
从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去
发表于 2009-1-1 10:38 | 显示全部楼层
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& K- |: O. ]" l  X5 l, s( G$ k老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。) t2 }2 Q$ E5 h5 k4 ~2 h9 E% m
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~
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发表于 2009-1-1 21:59 | 显示全部楼层
“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握,感觉韵似乎必须押,译词的长短也得基本合”,偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大,但是到了第二首,就很有看头了。
发表于 2009-1-1 22:01 | 显示全部楼层
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老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。) K8 u8 L5 j4 [, F  g$ R
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~
5 b5 d+ u2 k7 h! {- Xvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38
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不碍事,偶们表慢...
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-1-2 22:05 | 显示全部楼层
太好了,我旅游回来看到大家的译作,满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。
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