【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
4 s4 X# i$ w8 w) ~. ^* Kxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
# G1 G" P8 o7 q6 U2 _9 Nvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

1 g5 W/ _4 s* @1 m1 m再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

( T4 X* a2 |- [3 U0 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 ~1 s- [- }; p0 J! Q* A( o6 S. n5 v夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

1 _- H7 O8 u( I$ c( DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
& f( q' c' j( l+ P0 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
3 ~  F9 X+ F  b- jThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

With the moon kissing it every night
7 {7 o" l' t- r3 l) d6 `看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
8 U- U5 n$ E9 M' P- H# l0 }Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
. y/ I5 j) B' H我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
) d; O& U+ n+ o" \$ i( f0 G  k3 cYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# |- n; s; x: H7 g* f9 A1 a我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
7 e: L1 y: _. n9 mEvery other word you utter is love
6 y. G; v% @. @; B& p! \* V6 `口口声声 说你爱我
1 V; y' a8 F% D: V: O2 ]3 Z$ wI really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
! j; Y+ q. d+ t" z" X+ _1 pI love you I love you with all my heart
& [" V  B$ F( q6 _爱你爱你 全心全意
2 b$ m4 _( E2 d5 ]2 A2 }Nothing can compare to my love
8 j* A( Z' i) p7 p世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ d0 p6 R3 H: |8 {5 w) p! V. X: p能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
4 M7 a# G: o; H; d( M  ?+ aThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 d2 a, s6 u9 S) |9 ?. k8 s整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
; x  A. W+ \9 C3 Z  _' [+ x3 P5 G' [I want so much to see inside your heart
; v' \) e5 |- T8 H我真想看透你的心
1 l" Y. J2 w7 F1 CI invite you to rip it out
$ X* z2 m( X; x/ S# L- J' }8 h你尽管把它掏去
8 U0 E/ @5 e" a3 o( `9 h- ATo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
9 F- d" t/ m7 a/ l9 ~9 K% cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
; K% [- u9 G/ M% }4 t+ sI regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
" x4 x2 L6 {% X6 |2 A, L' Z. g9 z我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
; ]& S7 I3 L! N/ ]. D$ `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' G+ X% }& o+ u( S9 |$ c) ~. W4 y能说会道 无以伦比
9 m$ W: D6 ?. ]) k( l! {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
# M1 V# l' t8 c) h7 p向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
6 S4 @4 [3 }% l/ l, l2 s1 l. L3 o
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ C- c5 D7 g1 S1 w* y8 ^/ \1 k* X: @从未向你吐露衷情
9 G* d& t5 I6 v6 ?- ^4 TThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* z7 o& S, j% Y8 z爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
' A2 M: \; [6 \4 F对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
  D5 Z" z' B' B从此别无他意
! a" ~1 N8 q3 k8 i# d- XWe meet and talk everyday,
0 ~7 E( J' V6 i你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 s$ K  t' d0 A! Z奈何从未谈及内心
# x) f) A6 ^9 V5 u+ RIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
3 i" t4 o& S" UI would probably know how you feel
: @$ m; m) R8 s7 H0 q1 S或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
$ P: o3 T2 C- c2 l5 e爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
! u2 c: Z- M% U. v* T- |为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
5 S. Z5 s$ w3 V, d4 a# s4 ~& @我多想向你表白
0 J, @, h  _# V# d& mBut I never did
/ K4 t  p5 Q& N# ]却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ h: u1 r& T/ V# D' M只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
( Q" S5 H4 A4 DIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 Z3 `* N  W, r1 f% U今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
- }4 s, J; N/ r! o; rEntrust my love within your heart
) r5 `# ?/ ~; @" I从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
, K& v/ p( l+ \2 z* f为何如何难言？
! v: w+ w/ W3 r; B4 C) @1 A, sI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
9 \' ]" U" Z, @( R' l6 r+ WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 b( R' p  `5 d1 G; Y2 A只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
4 x) }* y& c% O9 \$ aIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
3 q+ e& z5 m1 _* ], T4 vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 q& `8 i! D. ~& T* H不愿这份爱 逝如流水
) o. Y2 S4 D; F* b9 CCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
8 T7 E7 W3 @% u# k! U. JEntrust my love within your heart
- V9 @1 t$ O; S' P; J; P5 n从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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. F/ U' k, k$ O+ {4 S& B+ C. Q' KCan I entrust it to you?
9 |7 h+ P! K" n  {. f; U  @可否将它托付于你？
6 `1 x/ w6 I6 x! ^) |5 |! MEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
& y5 n. s" l, t$ I) Q) ]# U老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
' i2 I) \/ K5 ]3 N9 M7 G1 p2 e# @刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

9 [$ E* v% x  M6 M5 U不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。