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[公告] 【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告(参赛视频18、19楼)(比赛结果已公布~)

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发表于 2009-1-1 10:24 | 显示全部楼层
老大:感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作?期待!......' u( R* m$ C* J8 B5 ^* S
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04
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一个月前我译了一半,旅游回来再看,自己都看不过去,索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:25 | 显示全部楼层
哦呀,你们都贴在这里,偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大,谢谢提醒: i& J6 k8 \5 u% K* N: T$ T
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20
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再贴到这里来呀。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲2:男女对唱
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9 k, j, ^2 S; KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 r- R0 q0 ?$ T. M& N2 ?0 z  {/ w- F皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
/ b. R: y, x7 Q) \9 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  K! ]7 I# _: ~夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂5 Z5 c$ @& j8 z* c* q( Q5 G# |8 _

' N( t- z$ W  JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) M! c" T/ B: P- e* I) [: ]( }凝视明月 我心欢畅. e) M! j" W; L
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes , [, `! @- k, u
月光闪烁 在我眼中
6 H, W# e# T) i- P( }9 w0 ]The sky is happy down to its soul
8 q5 C+ B2 d$ T9 b  B一片丹心 照耀夜空" M& P, p: Y, V2 ?  D" Z2 Q
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With the moon kissing it every night
5 i, W" m+ `* k9 K1 j3 ^看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空) r0 _# u$ ^% U. I5 x! d
Seeing the sky content with its love , z) t+ A4 d6 l' S
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中8 f# @" S' j, J, N1 E
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
& k7 r1 P4 i2 ^- u4 U我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
4 i6 F5 j& M0 y1 y6 H5 [- {1 z5 q& S! RYou needn’t fear anything : P# q7 F9 L7 F
怕这怕那 又是何苦, S/ |6 v. W6 E% y- s% x1 @4 o
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily& I. i5 s9 |* K$ ~1 k/ [
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢) C0 P: f" `5 O# J3 R6 P
Every other word you utter is love% {- Z2 [4 B4 {2 H% ]
口口声声 说你爱我  g3 Q3 [! o7 Z# T" r4 m* B, r2 c" K
I really want to know just how much you love me
# E0 _3 M; k; p: C6 [) ~真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤3 f2 K2 j! z9 d
I love you I love you with all my heart
" f- Y$ V$ [, j) J9 L9 n爱你爱你 全心全意
) A5 F& H: {. }  xNothing can compare to my love + b" e0 t* D/ D* R$ n# |8 W& Y) Q" Q6 G
世间万物  皆不能比+ f# M2 V9 X7 g0 f( C
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 F+ U6 M; d) v" e. s/ z9 J, s能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥?- S0 g7 T! n/ N
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love , U9 C) f9 T5 Z$ x$ @9 c
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情8 v3 r# Z& X2 G6 G8 R
I want so much to see inside your heart
- x! K$ I, Z$ \* R1 |6 T+ x我真想看透你的心
9 B$ ^) K, ^/ ?& H- V+ qI invite you to rip it out
! \& T/ Q4 R3 |+ l$ e你尽管把它掏去( z/ x* Q% ~5 I* u% l1 d  L9 N
To prove my love, I’m willing to die 4 \) {% s/ ]  D0 X0 @
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜$ L2 b5 U/ l! D9 ?) n* e% O
I’m still filled with fear 3 K  {. b, Q% Y& p6 m! ?0 @1 h
可我依然满心忧虑2 ]% Z  _+ |6 D$ h: S% x6 \
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues $ M, j1 ]* {; h# V% T5 q
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张) @- o. x3 j; d% |
I regret not dying
. V. [4 x- Z6 F: l真恨不能 以死明志
6 n; o3 A/ `3 \7 D; ?! W2 i/ nI only have one tongue : @- R+ B% r2 |3 P% p
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
; t8 V' Y" D# l) K6 i! }It’s nothing close to 100,000/ |. }$ u/ e' X
也恨不得  多如千万
# @" F7 d+ |# T% s% }With such a tongue as yours, 8 f* P% S0 D" X& u- s4 b  q
你这张嘴 真真厉害1 f! Y& k& A5 p8 i) m! q
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% L3 `! W0 I: J6 W/ \; T! `: E能说会道 无以伦比, P, O0 S# V  f3 Z5 l+ D1 p
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  X/ N0 v2 q9 }0 |, L若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
1 Z2 z6 f+ F7 vRambling on about a thousand words of love2 f  t# ?, n+ t6 V1 e! o& G6 d( ?
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发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲一:主题曲% e9 p* k! n% g0 _7 q" D* U

7 e/ N* a, `! L# z; u& fThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you) {. P' Y- I- |( Q4 n4 c/ l9 g
从未向你吐露衷情" D& u/ u- @' Y& `0 }4 H
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you* W. U  M$ F4 w& `' T
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密9 A: k2 k' j5 s+ w
From the first moment we met,9 y" V/ u0 ]* }1 c- B, v
对你一见倾心* M8 S/ Z4 c, E; Q
I already loved you with all my heart6 k  ]( L8 [- @# X4 q" Y6 K; q
从此别无他意
( s8 \/ J: A+ @7 m& f$ `- U& c" Z6 |We meet and talk everyday,' N( ]% F: U+ f" f8 r0 k
你我每天见面寒暄
6 G3 t: |6 d. i% {7 d% }- MBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart0 O" R8 J5 r& \8 n
奈何从未谈及内心* ~% ]5 Z: w5 y! q$ K# y
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ q( u% ]1 h. c5 l. U# Z若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂, u3 F0 ?2 i9 ^* W
I would probably know how you feel
. V6 t% S2 E3 s, f# I7 ~4 |或能知你心意5 E, ?7 q/ M$ D- V
Love… just the word love
" ^) ^- O" a" n) k$ T$ \" [0 v爱呀,爱就一个字% _( i6 }7 _" {3 v7 G; i
Why is it so difficult to express?
. M" S4 T% g: }" x为何如此难言?+ u. L. s3 K) I: a
I want to confess that I love you,7 a6 Q7 `# o( f& M9 U1 _+ E# J
我多想向你表白8 A4 A' \+ M5 y7 t$ J
But I never did
7 @; a; {# U" z9 J6 v9 P* I却始终未曾出口
# t! ~9 O5 M/ A7 A+ k5 eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers. Z, f5 m( F" t% }6 Y
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走& T9 O9 y4 U+ [" e2 t! u+ ?. _
If today isn’t too late,9 ~" C( n! _; a1 S9 J
假如还不太迟# K  ~. Q! y9 o: z8 [
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess6 e5 ?$ S* v( q
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
8 x7 |; f8 j1 A6 q8 r; @! h( NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away + q9 Z5 p! m: \2 m  n
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
% b: L/ ]/ w/ s9 h. T2 M3 d% u$ ~Can I entrust it to you?
; `- A; y+ ]8 A) z可否将它 托付于你?$ r  z* p; d& L9 ?0 ~0 m) i
Entrust my love within your heart; `: C' ~. k# W& N, D, {; U
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
8 l% @; P9 v& M爱呀,爱就一个字# ]- R, L: \/ N; w
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ x8 s  p" N( N; g% z5 l  y- c为何如何难言?
! H4 t$ R( j8 v* o5 Z1 TI want to confess that I love you,
- I2 D, c; C. S6 P- @, n5 i我多想向你表白; c; @& h0 J3 M3 _$ }2 X
But I never did
" r: f. f" R8 ?+ U却始终未曾出口
5 O* H+ q. m) x. S6 ^- POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  B6 U/ E/ ]" C( R( H: q. \, V只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
& {9 A5 }6 u; c: S' @8 ^! GIf today isn’t too late,1 {: u  L# J  N" s
假如还不太迟 ! [* q* t* ?, l/ Z* w
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, r2 j: J( m' K! Q. [今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思5 p4 o, q7 L  ~% {$ X2 _
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 j0 @6 N" }* d8 y; W不愿这份爱 逝如流水; s9 x! A1 m3 w! H
Can I entrust it to you?% |  F8 K  H( \
可否将它 托付于你?  q5 [& Z, ~, A" R/ s! \
Entrust my love within your heart, O( Z1 @# r9 L4 ]+ W2 p( @) W0 H3 X
从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去% i( r* w7 b- a, q' \: t

9 M+ z4 D$ ]+ }. U8 N9 p. z2 a% FCan I entrust it to you?
1 M1 F5 _9 |* C: n" W; Q$ r) w. ]可否将它托付于你?
/ w& b- W' z) f! @) w; s0 NEntrust my love within your heart) a4 B( o* p/ C5 b3 q) S
从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去
发表于 2009-1-1 10:38 | 显示全部楼层
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老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
+ m: _8 |) T" r) H/ n$ B$ n刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~
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发表于 2009-1-1 21:59 | 显示全部楼层
“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握,感觉韵似乎必须押,译词的长短也得基本合”,偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大,但是到了第二首,就很有看头了。
发表于 2009-1-1 22:01 | 显示全部楼层
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3 G: r1 M' E$ _9 A$ b2 Q8 u老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。" N5 i5 e  H8 D
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~* K: _4 F& e: Q3 m8 B% l. Q
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

9 H4 S0 y- `/ S# R不碍事,偶们表慢...
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-1-2 22:05 | 显示全部楼层
太好了,我旅游回来看到大家的译作,满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。
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