【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
9 O/ _( m. {3 ]& ?  x4 A$ C: r/ \xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
9 h8 Y& `+ A5 S+ @7 N  K! Gvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

. `7 b1 m% \. t: N再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
. K, B, i/ O: D- h3 k. L" H6 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
$ O+ `' r; W7 j: d; {0 h  lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
; G' s. D6 n* H4 o6 N8 [9 G" eThe sky is happy down to its soul
: m+ p5 w9 m9 C% j9 {9 i" ^一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
5 Q3 {1 |4 m& K看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
# n6 s1 L% A) t) g# O" M  TSeeing the sky content with its love
8 {! ~6 u; T7 L6 ^夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
6 a& \/ l; r! U8 Z! HIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
) `9 N, k1 J3 F, J$ |( K% ?! nYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
5 Z" ~/ j8 a9 k0 ^1 [Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
6 J! X& z' M: X  [$ A世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ u: Q% Z/ \0 J能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 K) b* _; E6 Q. c* @/ o2 s整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
# J8 w; A, m9 [" v8 F! f6 FI want so much to see inside your heart
2 ^8 ^# j( `; ~, f' O我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
2 a* s; i5 T6 T9 J+ j# _可我依然满心忧虑
9 T6 q1 E8 s! {% aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
8 Q+ k7 d3 Y; T/ b7 a( SI regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
1 @" n) H, ^3 Y5 lI only have one tongue
5 C- Q/ J9 R3 x9 D2 Z2 |0 L$ H我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
2 T& w8 K: u6 w; Z( XIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
" Y' Q( h' D2 y; oWith such a tongue as yours,
! S' L0 a+ w) o你这张嘴 真真厉害
2 Q3 {: J6 G" bYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, o  d4 A2 A) J" L能说会道 无以伦比
8 c5 ^* x$ L) y3 q( \: E3 n7 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- w6 c7 g8 e) E1 e若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
- y5 x! T% S+ i. N% z) RRambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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5 M" `% N! |2 i8 F  eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- _4 E+ a3 J" B4 y" d& t2 D爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
+ a& t9 w; X% \: x4 h- B从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
- j( s" }6 i, Z+ ^2 U. b爱呀，爱就一个字
  Q' t% q* ?" K9 O- \5 ?  pWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ ]! \8 \" j( X为何如此难言？
9 X. J3 ^+ W5 i- n1 f. \I want to confess that I love you,
4 P. ^5 M% t3 ^  f6 N1 k我多想向你表白
' K" f: r: P1 G8 ^0 K! V; dBut I never did
# Q8 v8 j" p% c( G却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 ^/ z0 {6 e1 k% @只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; t0 v5 {' g( a  m今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 R* C$ ?9 e9 ^4 D3 s1 K& Q# K% ]不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
) Z. `# y9 ]7 {; n# r7 A$ C从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
" W5 }3 u3 }  A4 J爱呀，爱就一个字
, B  {$ j2 a; N* o8 WWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
) ]& o1 L- B& ?7 E! yI want to confess that I love you,
2 A9 `7 c( c! X0 p6 U: M0 s/ \我多想向你表白
But I never did
1 a0 J) R5 A! F8 V( v% m& }- |却始终未曾出口
  |* l7 _" F# R# e; s) U, VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
3 K1 i' \6 e$ ?0 I2 W$ u; y8 H0 {假如还不太迟
# |4 H$ {+ R4 oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
% w2 E0 q& V, u! `) _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
% c! |. C0 {. dCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
# ]7 K1 u, [7 _Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
' A* M$ b  F' `. f: `+ ~2 {: Q可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
+ M8 [6 ?* c1 m# q) x# E老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
+ X2 O% R/ E4 P, i  w刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
6 K& H# }! Y: L" Q刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。