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[公告] 【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告(参赛视频18、19楼)(比赛结果已公布~)

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发表于 2009-1-1 10:24 | 显示全部楼层
老大:感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作?期待!......+ X1 R! d& `. A( N* n% [. v* S
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

, N9 _" p1 _2 c一个月前我译了一半,旅游回来再看,自己都看不过去,索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:25 | 显示全部楼层
哦呀,你们都贴在这里,偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大,谢谢提醒
" X& ^$ s1 W  S( o4 W0 |7 J+ d9 lvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

' i! X( }7 b( Z6 a  [* Y1 M再贴到这里来呀。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲2:男女对唱
) b% M: N% f$ ]! }( O* e8 ]
; V, G+ j+ Y' k3 x, `The moonlight is shining brightly,
( V* V( L, K5 L( H, S+ [5 d皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
8 d' r: y7 W% P+ mMaking the sky glitter like gold, # E" x- \7 J: e# o
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂$ i! R) B# J% d5 ]6 E3 l

, [* L3 G' y) ^' D4 ~0 eWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness 9 R! W. O" h0 u8 C, {* X/ G
凝视明月 我心欢畅
; I, X' b1 V8 o0 i* @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes 5 r! g2 D6 a: ^  U. ^
月光闪烁 在我眼中
& V7 ]  P1 x5 w! x! {" }6 i: w2 VThe sky is happy down to its soul
- L& t8 B& p( B* k$ m* r: v! E一片丹心 照耀夜空
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0 M/ F* G2 \* PWith the moon kissing it every night 2 ?2 s7 O+ ]- \" A9 g0 k
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
. y7 I: }! R  o0 |Seeing the sky content with its love
$ |7 V5 G# @; W7 f) r8 L夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
3 C) x/ d2 t$ C7 x3 RIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
  ]+ {  `9 P# f3 Y* B2 L" ^! K9 k3 \我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
. j( v! T/ o. a8 y1 ]# l3 l# tYou needn’t fear anything 3 K* }# J  g5 J& g6 P5 W, f$ M! I
怕这怕那 又是何苦$ T5 W. m: v6 D3 n  s% l( v
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! Y9 R3 H# Z% y6 u6 ^( k我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢9 E7 ]. V' N# I) Y' I  N
Every other word you utter is love) u* y2 `' K2 a
口口声声 说你爱我- S. o- P' @& Z! C8 p( v, S
I really want to know just how much you love me
# ]+ h" m* b- F! F4 H$ O, Z& x真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤0 U2 K8 }! t% z  g: s- G2 ]
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ j  W: f! f7 f% G爱你爱你 全心全意( h- Z! y; ~+ O# l% h; w
Nothing can compare to my love
* k3 r( W! G" F$ I) ?9 Y5 n+ f" n世间万物  皆不能比1 I2 t% t+ b  _
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 _; ?9 W  y1 r) A% p. W  h9 _. a1 l能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥?* Z# N6 {* s* ^8 s
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; M8 {, Y) }  C( Q2 r# N整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
" P4 y) H" C6 N9 Z! [# {  F# NI want so much to see inside your heart
- s6 H9 \  T% L我真想看透你的心
- }  L6 Y2 Y- y/ U+ SI invite you to rip it out
4 V! B; v( J! `  {+ ?6 F( r& b你尽管把它掏去
% n# ?4 v" b3 H1 {To prove my love, I’m willing to die 7 D& I3 [, t) @
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜; ^* |  f/ g5 V5 w* u
I’m still filled with fear % a) @5 {7 o+ C9 o
可我依然满心忧虑
# Y! t$ _! {0 wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 V) {( B  x% [) T7 ^/ x你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
- y, f/ J9 R+ V+ d0 sI regret not dying
0 Y( |6 b# e0 K2 v% [( `- K" S真恨不能 以死明志
: m/ \% |3 Y; z  E/ T3 kI only have one tongue ! a- ^! B. B- A$ \- u
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张( w2 ^, P# ^7 }0 T- I& o
It’s nothing close to 100,000
) @0 V% N: ~! w. d也恨不得  多如千万
3 p+ ^/ W6 f- o7 P( X: SWith such a tongue as yours,
6 _2 _# n1 v( _1 I4 \1 D你这张嘴 真真厉害: Q% o/ o3 G  o! Y) q% _
Your speech can’t even keep up with it 7 H1 t( H  g1 e
能说会道 无以伦比
- ?: A0 M2 \) Q$ l& U/ q9 W( YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things $ ]. i/ l% ~% j+ }9 L
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
3 {" F3 n9 H3 e: c4 X+ P1 m1 Z) JRambling on about a thousand words of love
3 ~0 z7 J, M, G- n向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

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发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲一:主题曲  ]) l6 r2 p, |7 O2 R

9 y& }1 V: T% b0 PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ x1 g2 @+ ]% E2 _) j从未向你吐露衷情# j+ e' _( R* E) U/ _8 l
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* K7 X/ ]7 u9 ^爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密' v% j- G' h! A# V% b, w6 d
From the first moment we met,0 |2 l( B  z4 _3 I
对你一见倾心
0 x1 F& T+ K( A6 ~6 M/ Z3 y3 `I already loved you with all my heart
* {, [8 ^$ S6 q8 |7 V: F( K% Y. X从此别无他意; d! X9 P) f% P3 V: _: n
We meet and talk everyday,
$ |/ |2 R: e3 u4 J; f7 a& M+ o" b你我每天见面寒暄1 O  V# u' q( r# s
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 Q6 p0 M8 ]7 T/ t. F奈何从未谈及内心
9 R0 q, ]5 j  s: LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  P3 E; t5 c; V若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂8 w* d$ l9 L; J. e+ x4 ^# z
I would probably know how you feel
4 b0 _) Z' ~$ ]6 }或能知你心意4 k8 I2 Z) Z9 G+ k! A
Love… just the word love4 h4 r& C' Q0 T" Y% _3 |8 h
爱呀,爱就一个字
( \0 [  R, B6 w& f/ w. jWhy is it so difficult to express?+ O2 Q' R, t: u+ L
为何如此难言?, k9 x& Q8 W# V; m
I want to confess that I love you,. f8 |) b. j+ g% x6 R$ j
我多想向你表白
$ \; l! N$ z0 `! I. RBut I never did
/ t  N5 i2 W% f3 _3 @却始终未曾出口+ h. J! Q) R! [5 t* q  b. X
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ L" Q" \% ]" ?- r只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
6 W0 Z% @  N2 o% fIf today isn’t too late,# f- Y0 d1 Q: _) j# i9 r1 f/ I
假如还不太迟
5 o5 V- H2 ], Z4 V# m3 o4 O1 `3 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' s9 Y6 L( J; e今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思9 g0 F; s5 k  Q4 q
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away 0 B, ^" p; m4 N/ [
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
0 f: o7 j/ o; r) ]' ECan I entrust it to you?  s. x6 O8 I/ v5 o, l3 T- M* \
可否将它 托付于你?3 p! M" U' k9 x* G! Z2 w, l
Entrust my love within your heart$ p0 F. T- Z4 Q+ G9 k0 C
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love) l% F: h8 V' J3 o5 k: }: U
爱呀,爱就一个字+ S( s% S8 m( H8 y: b' n& }
Why is it so difficult to express?
) a: D) }: w' K4 }为何如何难言?
- c* O. X' `$ x: p6 zI want to confess that I love you,
" N+ j: k1 J% ]) k( h4 t我多想向你表白7 b% s8 ?0 }: m7 N
But I never did, ?, `, h$ W1 }) `
却始终未曾出口# }0 J3 Z# k' a- R: w3 y
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 e# \$ }& \0 V1 H& b: r4 d. ^9 ]0 Z只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走& e$ n" }& z$ t( ~$ l9 `2 H4 ]) B6 q
If today isn’t too late,
# E! z- B7 m! ^假如还不太迟
# U4 s# Z, x6 |& e/ FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess) }, T# }. E2 a2 Q9 T  P/ ^4 e% o
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思- O- O) t9 F# w
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  g) F% _9 b: d9 o& j, Z: {不愿这份爱 逝如流水
8 T* Y( z! F/ d' vCan I entrust it to you?
" Z* }1 m: C/ B9 c: e可否将它 托付于你?
4 u1 Q% p/ ?2 s+ uEntrust my love within your heart0 g2 M- L1 D1 m2 [; k
从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去
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# V% ^% j! z% x5 A( t/ L$ A* aCan I entrust it to you?
1 x2 x3 P! Y% ]  P  ^! t. z可否将它托付于你?7 o% |9 k1 Z* D3 M" a
Entrust my love within your heart, a0 r% O* u" N; H# ?
从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去
发表于 2009-1-1 10:38 | 显示全部楼层
41# 杏花疏影 ; w+ {; B, k2 y6 P) i+ c1 y
老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。8 g& i: S$ N. b2 t- s
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~
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发表于 2009-1-1 21:59 | 显示全部楼层
“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握,感觉韵似乎必须押,译词的长短也得基本合”,偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大,但是到了第二首,就很有看头了。
发表于 2009-1-1 22:01 | 显示全部楼层
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2 ~# s7 S9 D2 @& o7 ~老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。( f" b' V0 m; V7 g, B; ]
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~1 L" s# }0 I( p& S0 [* q
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

* V  X! x9 d% Y% c1 }! }  {2 ?不碍事,偶们表慢...
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-1-2 22:05 | 显示全部楼层
太好了,我旅游回来看到大家的译作,满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。
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