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[公告] 【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告(参赛视频18、19楼)(比赛结果已公布~)

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发表于 2009-1-1 10:24 | 显示全部楼层
老大:感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作?期待!......3 b& ]+ O+ o# P$ Q4 ~, J- z* F
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

  ?4 `: _5 ^" B9 y% a一个月前我译了一半,旅游回来再看,自己都看不过去,索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:25 | 显示全部楼层
哦呀,你们都贴在这里,偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大,谢谢提醒
: X9 Y1 K! z. {& Qvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

4 I4 e# G3 ~1 F1 `* Y/ A9 `" O再贴到这里来呀。
发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲2:男女对唱. o' y6 |9 X/ K3 N, Z8 V
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ F6 N8 ~4 {0 J' ?6 t4 [  B皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
( e) X" }! l: J+ ?/ D: O& m  dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) S: k1 P7 }% `" y0 Q  f6 f/ \夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂, B2 l' u' U" t+ u1 r$ s
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When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 }2 ^( v( R8 q# y: J凝视明月 我心欢畅
, o  k( t8 t6 P) i3 Q2 mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes 0 M: @1 U+ u( S. o0 l6 `3 L6 Y
月光闪烁 在我眼中8 ]+ z* Z; C6 ^: X; g
The sky is happy down to its soul
' W+ H. j9 [; ?' u* {一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
1 |" ]5 h) l* X8 ^' M0 \看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
+ _; P" G3 W- V( ^* Q7 SSeeing the sky content with its love
" F# @4 o% X; V: K& P夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中0 I, a. \; w: P; h6 N4 \, N
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour % l+ w. a5 ^6 Q& Z5 e5 n
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
! J3 `6 ]1 O! a6 w1 U/ mYou needn’t fear anything 9 A* A# p0 W: \7 U, }4 l. X/ ~
怕这怕那 又是何苦
/ t- s0 @/ a1 T: n: ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily/ S8 ~# ?6 F9 ^
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢1 U6 \5 I8 ~- Y1 p1 _7 K& C+ t
Every other word you utter is love) \5 a; j1 p# }' E) m
口口声声 说你爱我
2 \8 ^+ M# a# pI really want to know just how much you love me
! Y  x" C% `: k  w: W" [真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
- A/ P! \% _# w' V: E" wI love you I love you with all my heart
! f3 @9 u: \, Z爱你爱你 全心全意
6 s% f9 m( B$ C) N& x; o9 r7 `" SNothing can compare to my love
8 E* e) J1 E0 ]4 s2 t世间万物  皆不能比) ]5 O) {" Q, `8 D' \
2 ~% ?# B$ x2 [% ~) m
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% W' v. d. ]& k1 I  J4 L能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥?4 Z+ @- D+ u+ p! Q4 A1 z7 I
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ W: X5 B* e7 i2 x0 \整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
- y, a0 z) x( |- w! iI want so much to see inside your heart
: s' L. b; S7 {, I9 {我真想看透你的心
5 w- X: [& o8 v/ s( X; q8 L% y. @I invite you to rip it out
6 W& A7 e  I. ~. v1 z* w* B( G你尽管把它掏去; {+ R# M( C2 d  Q; N0 M1 m) L% E
To prove my love, I’m willing to die   u7 G/ k1 m1 R' W4 Z( X" [
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
2 Z0 [' M3 Z- q- ~I’m still filled with fear
1 k$ R: M+ t" M9 |- w可我依然满心忧虑  d% s5 ?/ p# [3 b- q7 q
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 B+ |  N  S! ]7 j6 n你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
" s+ ]/ x/ u5 f/ s& V0 D7 DI regret not dying
- V+ N: }3 N6 j& X真恨不能 以死明志# m" y* b, m4 m6 Y, G# l* E5 e0 d
I only have one tongue . u5 I( t6 S6 R/ O' k3 S
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张+ j8 f! q7 v/ I8 S
It’s nothing close to 100,000
! ^  E- w8 F4 u& W% A4 v# f* {也恨不得  多如千万
0 ^9 I9 b$ i) F( T( F, \With such a tongue as yours, 0 e6 Y" I0 M+ {5 W* _
你这张嘴 真真厉害7 L) z! t- R7 |, w# b- q$ N
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' n4 ]$ q2 I& z6 n# T1 h能说会道 无以伦比7 g+ ?8 q' Z" Z$ u
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' s& E# V& @$ F5 F: S若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
( X  f- c- O' b5 h' o' d$ `) U5 YRambling on about a thousand words of love
/ V: x& Z; a1 Y% l: ~向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

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发表于 2009-1-1 10:35 | 显示全部楼层
比赛歌曲一:主题曲4 K& r2 d( v& {; D6 E
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you3 [9 g$ p  f' h4 R2 d4 p
从未向你吐露衷情7 V0 E' P+ L1 n5 e, I+ q
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; ]/ t( {/ K9 r9 D+ p/ Y+ t爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密6 i* o$ z' Y+ a1 |% c9 L. W% y' F
From the first moment we met,
' {" d+ t- X7 o* n/ C0 H对你一见倾心/ G# C. B  a% C
I already loved you with all my heart4 R3 Y  R1 f- W$ V
从此别无他意
1 {% R0 I2 p- V: r7 w+ TWe meet and talk everyday,/ U7 x# ~1 a1 |7 d
你我每天见面寒暄
/ ^7 n3 g+ d' I" ?8 S: wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! w6 Y: E( |4 B3 W: N: X5 o, [, K' b: g奈何从未谈及内心6 }3 r! Z" U, E6 v/ m
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,' u, k3 b4 G+ r: ^0 f  `: Q, `9 c. r
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
3 \; u: H1 S! s4 zI would probably know how you feel5 |3 g8 N6 B0 c
或能知你心意
3 F7 i5 {8 \5 l' q. t. Y& i( uLove… just the word love
- F( Y% X* Y, i- Y: d爱呀,爱就一个字
9 p$ o" l4 Q8 R( [$ lWhy is it so difficult to express?! \& S5 K4 V$ _+ F" X0 O
为何如此难言?
  O7 O- n4 Y! q: gI want to confess that I love you,
0 u8 j* f' B8 a% Z我多想向你表白
5 s$ o  {* W3 Z& D3 _% f3 o8 IBut I never did) w7 r; y! Q+ k* ^6 O
却始终未曾出口
" u" s/ a# B8 B# y/ b4 H0 hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers& h' t: c4 v  C  h
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走+ H+ C! q( F7 `- z
If today isn’t too late,, @2 Y/ ]. m/ M% o+ p$ I+ h
假如还不太迟5 q$ Q7 @. L8 Z. F9 L( ^( b- B1 R% d, [
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess/ J% `; v. y3 b2 \
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
* ]" w* _; ~, w' K' ~' lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away 4 u$ K" `( Q+ H% _1 P5 ]( V
不愿这份爱 逝如流水" J% ^* T/ |- `) E) k
Can I entrust it to you?+ I8 e. l; O' N
可否将它 托付于你?6 Y* x. s) A4 I: F" ]
Entrust my love within your heart7 Y. I6 I" G3 ^
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去2 R/ l* d0 v; Q
! l; i3 e9 D# k1 T8 ?0 k$ ^
Love… just the word love
1 ^+ c+ ]: q+ P* e& [爱呀,爱就一个字
0 {% Z4 @+ U$ P5 a2 j/ u! qWhy is it so difficult to express?3 ?7 ?1 X, B% F$ z  w& J
为何如何难言?
2 d+ ]& ?7 f9 q$ q. ~$ X; [I want to confess that I love you,
) [/ x& w3 |# h我多想向你表白2 O7 U6 W6 ~9 D0 I! @5 V: Q( H1 ?( X  ]
But I never did
8 }1 j, ?1 a9 c( z  @1 K% E却始终未曾出口5 E8 y# }* U4 A4 Z% h. m& r
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 ?/ W: k) _  S8 u只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走9 G  X2 }& E2 b' k
If today isn’t too late,
7 z  q9 C+ C- D4 Y4 F8 _( p0 k假如还不太迟
) c- b& _- L: J, \% {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 p: X+ g6 D$ L# r' o  o4 M+ E. z今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思: o  c4 \# z, W; _: u# u& A; C
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away . q! @% L/ P1 [) g" E, D! e+ p' a
不愿这份爱 逝如流水& e8 m& \- q( U! h3 e- i
Can I entrust it to you?
$ k) z# R6 G* B可否将它 托付于你?
+ T! u: q. d5 ZEntrust my love within your heart9 B1 q- l1 T3 r2 c
从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去1 \6 C' t0 u% w8 ]! `+ f# t7 ]$ D
& l: i4 \! u* }% j) _+ @0 }
Can I entrust it to you?
" ^/ @. C. E+ X. a2 s可否将它托付于你?; i5 J+ E; t" i' f2 w' `
Entrust my love within your heart
. M4 p- Z! v1 t$ M从此安放在你心里,哪儿也不去
发表于 2009-1-1 10:38 | 显示全部楼层
41# 杏花疏影 3 ?, ]: L, r' V
老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。- [, r: i5 A5 |! ]8 C
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~
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发表于 2009-1-1 21:59 | 显示全部楼层
“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握,感觉韵似乎必须押,译词的长短也得基本合”,偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大,但是到了第二首,就很有看头了。
发表于 2009-1-1 22:01 | 显示全部楼层
41# 杏花疏影  
' u) K0 y4 W9 {4 z+ V5 b老大,你还是参与吧,别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习,翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
  N% d7 e! l0 m# v刚仔细看了一些比赛规则,要12月31日晚8点截至,偶们都好像过期了~~~
9 S: t& f% z" R/ D' H( g6 R; gvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

% i& X& Z, f$ ?4 p& `不碍事,偶们表慢...
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-1-2 22:05 | 显示全部楼层
太好了,我旅游回来看到大家的译作,满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。
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