【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
/ c' ?, [2 V+ N( a! Q7 H袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 w0 l7 E8 I4 ~  E8 n' ?( |9 WThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 r% s0 d, f4 O+ y3 F0 ^
* [# S! n2 i2 O+ j! |* [6 P我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  

$ O+ o4 m  @, _$ L0 SFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
1 p+ z5 Z+ @0 [% M! X  w你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

. T& ^* `4 I! G+ v" Z9 LWe meet and talk everyday,
4 N4 c, y$ f$ A: JBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ `# Q# R/ v- D/ d) M# U' M+ V# dI would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
' }! o* m# t8 G6 ^8 z7 S我也許就能了解
你的心情
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Love… just the word love
, o5 ^. T2 ?( x' g, [3 _6 _$ I! B9 oWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
. x; p! s0 }9 Z/ D為什麼
如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
; _+ `( ?! B3 ?% k& }7 q: p( c8 _But I never did

" e+ b. {" Q& W# m愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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: G3 b% J  [" k* }7 qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
' v+ u5 z. l3 `' H你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
2 j2 Z+ o0 z/ g1 q$ Y; {* _讓我向你表白
8 U' j. ?& p3 m) _7 V: B. l我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

* s6 V6 C; `! U  ]& Z  L/ @Can I entrust it to you?
2 a; ^' E3 X' P8 ~" [- oEntrust my love within your heart
, N0 Q4 Q+ O, T, Z8 u6 a; Z3 D+ h可否讓我托付給你?
8 h0 \5 j" z! a4 m! Z/ i9 R托付我的愛
' }7 q0 W1 K, l: |收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
, n, k; v# G9 c) T* Q8 i3 ^' uWhy is it so difficult to express?
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! c& a2 _/ i3 f6 M" z3 O3 h愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 我想要告訴你
) v% z$ H; V+ J卻還是說不出來

( ?+ K; r3 e9 ~7 P2 h( ^, ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

: A2 U5 U; J3 q+ \也許有一天
7 o% N6 {' z0 f9 f9 p你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
: ^1 [6 N/ Q7 h6 `" u$ @7 }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% O! V) y! |$ C( i8 F
, K' u; ~6 ?( h& h9 `5 V: r希望今天還不會太晚
& p/ b& q+ t( i讓我向你表白
5 I- c& d$ p! Z我心底的秘密

8 c) p- m! K2 P8 H% b1 M$ a& ], jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
$ k9 Y- B' }8 @; k* T4 Q+ U  XEntrust my love within your heart

+ o" F& _+ q; D4 V9 R+ a可否讓我托付給你?
- O( Y! N( F1 o& S( i( }4 {3 v' r7 m托付我的愛
, Q" S! |4 K! P- p. l% Q收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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对唱曲参赛译稿

# T. d9 E. k, d" ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

, B7 @6 L5 j# Z* W+ w皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
" V& u% C9 w/ l# g我心充滿快樂
2 |. d6 E; l. C- q
: K% Q9 n* H% h5 {4 C# lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" t8 Q8 _' r& k% bThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 j( `" `/ D( ~7 }( y- I! Q6 H' cSeeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
7 }' ?* t2 i- y- x$ E+ q月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
; a1 o5 y7 R1 H) z星空充滿著歡樂

It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
0 F, j8 \) J. e害怕我們的愛
終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
! v3 {! R$ Z6 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
% O" U. J0 U' W堅定不渝

( \  z' p. A% H/ o- {/ \2 [5 O0 {Every other word you utter is love
% s4 l3 X8 g, J! W1 J2 f  MI really want to know just how much you love me
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你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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  a3 d! i' y4 B; `I love you I love you with all my heart
4 ]/ v6 L9 I/ p6 q( D+ t7 U+ ]1 x" `5 zNothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
1 l0 j  }) I$ k) H# F( z% z1 c你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ v! ?& E5 Q' f; S7 j! o整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart
8 i# ~* i- Q0 \& _  d: F- q
我想看透你的心

I invite you to rip it out
: b: v! F/ M. L/ D% Z5 t, STo prove my love, I’m willing to die
& Z+ s) U9 w! Q; V+ M% {8 ]( S# w
! ]6 M+ T- k+ r1 b% W$ n7 G我歡迎你將它打開
2 o" G2 T7 M4 D我願意用生命
& Z* f5 [0 |( U來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
' u+ b4 _  h) p/ C你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

I regret not dying
$ d8 R8 Y0 H! L. M1 y  j# DI only have one tongue
6 r' A4 t) r) J/ b1 h$ H$ uIt’s nothing close to 100,000

可惜我未能以死證明
& f; }) r. m9 p& g; s4 K4 l/ N0 h我只有一張口
9 ~  F: r- C' k) h1 X遠遠不及千萬

! i1 h) H! K1 J0 bWith such a tongue as yours,
/ R, p% N9 Z7 {; bYour speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
0 ]# o# [9 Z$ |2 _你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: I5 D: C2 ^3 q9 Z; v如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
9 z6 u' u2 w( l! q, z+ @6 u) F' K千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love

, [3 t/ ], ?+ q' @6 o訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
+ h' ?) K9 ?0 T: V5 l( Zxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒