【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ L. R- A9 v, D. r. x5 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* t" y/ {9 m6 M8 O0 G4 w- v: SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 ]6 ~) ?1 }" Z: m3 v, BThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 I7 o! R& n- j+ f' z% [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 _; k( ]- o, Y2 {+ M& N, C: B& l2 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' F- k# `/ U: W, E/ ?/ r5 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 n% M# x$ _: Q/ R; aNothing can compare to my love
5 g) Q6 e! r$ I3 ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 ?/ N! h! p' o- p5 vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 W  R% l3 J& H8 J! [, d9 {I’m still filled with fear
5 Y; s& x& `/ _7 Q- j3 k- p: k; sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 A* B) _# z  e0 f$ kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 b' Z  S. m; q1 c/ R& QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& o1 I: ]3 T) R3 o# gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, f% g& E( m9 W  @" ^3 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) r; H. Z, j. b/ S' J6 P% k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 W+ _' P1 u4 M1 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; ~: `5 B) r8 `: i* E$ \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 b$ \( |% M9 J& r* a1 \- T3 O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' x3 G# h0 G5 k& G. \' C3 z! r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ V6 s+ X) @1 U* i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  @9 v% G, Q& C9 k+ Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' E+ L" p3 e6 i! K7 q8 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) O- _, D/ c8 O" r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ _, y7 j* s; L2 r0 F% H4 U- e$ t- C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& p& n0 N' P$ h: U<P>你无需担心</P>
) W- O" r/ t8 H, U" M# `/ Y4 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 F  ^7 o, y# [/ I- n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' k4 |! b6 Z. J7 a+ m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 B" ^9 p! N( f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 a0 x( X- j) {1 K- f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# \! Z9 c4 T3 P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: E5 x/ `3 P# R- h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) }; H. {- t  ~( k. l0 ?9 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 F' g1 |* [+ L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. `' P% C. Z2 ~/ c# W5 Y2 a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 W5 w7 N5 R2 g( @0 X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 E- X! ^0 C9 ]: |' ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! F2 E2 c. G1 l: Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ ?+ c1 ~- ~9 b& S0 |; T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 |( ]9 T& d% Z" U7 d* P& F7 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) _: q8 j4 t0 Z& b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: \9 c2 n; v% O: c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ s, _% a: f* f0 B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: [; M* |: O2 a9 L9 D0 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' D, i/ p& T' f+ v# W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 x3 I: x: [) N9 a0 @2 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! K& I0 K, m4 Y# Y4 p- b# d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: [+ b* A  r$ y: A* V8 r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>