【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 l$ S% K: C8 s; e3 \5 S0 I歌词我附在后面。
7 B  g* x! Z2 c) T+ n8 WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: k( k- @5 f) X5 Z) KWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: q; C8 l! d/ [- P7 o& D5 WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  K( w- {4 O; d  sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ I/ u4 t6 B% [: h! d2 P$ AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 i0 ?6 @* o3 T1 j8 eEvery other word you utter is love
; \2 [# d( J6 gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# @& w  j: [! [, [( w7 o# i' sI want so much to see inside your heart
9 g4 U- H, b2 p3 ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 `. ^! z3 \; N$ P( V1 ?- \I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; s; D) _% ?  t2 B8 t: d0 g7 |With such a tongue as yours,
2 |9 x- E$ l  z+ e) Q7 ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) l1 e' A& O* ]# PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( X  W* L5 n5 [* F/ S5 ~* P( d  ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) [' ?4 ]$ w, O- D* ~+ A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 p" y* g0 b3 }/ V) X* A" o0 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 v8 H9 E2 r& B, S& s' |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) Y! [" ^2 G/ l9 @0 `! I7 n. K/ l& p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ T. k9 @# s7 W: I6 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- M. v2 K& Y# R* f; d! y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" V  F+ O% d. e" a& o" I6 n( T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) n# k1 E8 B/ z6 A0 y- j; _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  g" q% b6 x0 N7 f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. W7 \+ i2 X4 \8 t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; f$ s1 Z6 G6 E3 m+ Z) Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: p' \6 S4 }- ?/ Q9 n<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* N7 f/ S8 Z* F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& G, y8 p9 A2 R% p. e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& x4 s5 L1 ~6 X% X- S: i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- _! R& i6 E+ v* B$ J/ i7 ^5 r2 G; p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- F% t+ D6 i9 v5 E- ^5 I$ z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' }4 P% {6 V9 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) f, w2 y% S1 u! E, e$ j: s" E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! L7 T$ X+ V) I% j: R1 Q! f: x  Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; T+ n- }* b: N7 b' g<P>I regret not dying</P>
, ^) T, e' g& C5 ?/ `( |/ c; H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- B+ i9 X$ W" M- R3 B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 }; w6 Z( u# x8 Y, m. _  v; @& h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 m' d: n7 W3 t& o. n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" y1 x) }2 `( H, ]$ q) S0 _<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 U+ \# a4 f8 N5 S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
- X# y) H9 z+ {' m! e8 J" y& x
2 |8 t. V+ W# m( K我请你剖开它
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+ \  s; J3 d, l/ X: ?, F) ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ T( \, b% B7 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>