【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 @, \% g# S# V( Y7 U% L1 r$ VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  X; J1 G( C- J5 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 H2 }9 k3 H% C) CThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 j  V3 i6 |* DWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ m2 F0 K0 Q5 U) O6 T: v  T3 ~+ w6 [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& L" G2 z4 ~9 B1 L5 D' K$ uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! E' h4 ?2 n- @8 T  mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ o9 j: p2 e. L9 c5 sI love you I love you with all my heart
, G! g: O6 E  J# I; yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ u$ V) r- Z7 {4 s5 D9 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 k, `8 u1 K  z1 i# u1 L. dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* g6 P  ~7 f7 ]! ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 ?9 h9 L3 E* h' u# r. pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 ^! o+ P4 R, b$ ?- \! xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: \: N2 B+ F) A$ H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. |% d0 a* L# I; w2 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ T" Y( M, {" `- Y# R2 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* B) S2 _$ h8 J7 q* Y3 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( Y! v: ^" U8 b0 {; u, E+ Q, U$ T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# O0 ?+ v0 u( {7 C& j4 s3 S+ a5 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 E. U8 d, ?1 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, _1 X; R5 E1 m+ z: `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' R: U# {. ?0 L1 i1 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* w, c$ f7 }0 }! t+ p7 V% E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 s5 t# U! B9 B: ?; A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: x% M, f" X: D' @. F- O! I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. T. f+ F7 I' @: H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* [6 J, f8 b* [% l3 L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. u! @) a5 t2 ?1 c$ C/ @, E! x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, }+ Y1 E: s' N1 f" ?( R5 ^4 U6 o5 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* H/ b4 N' H4 @+ g* e0 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; k# H& }7 Q7 b+ u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 L% n% [% d9 B7 ~# u4 D) x  f: n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 Z0 m- M  o% U) Q! V( x  R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 D2 u4 T$ [( Z4 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 n9 Q4 L) P; }5 ]. m% D- ~' |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ F" {* ^2 J$ P$ ^! w% T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 E2 G0 |* j8 S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; t' z$ p& e3 K2 t3 N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 }6 i! ?- V5 A  ?; o5 f5 I( m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 A3 h+ X$ l2 V" ~2 C# z9 m! `# |7 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ h  `4 o, F% I# ^6 f9 I1 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, {' F) t- @8 x9 @8 f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) x3 h0 l0 m* @3 Y# D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* C! z, l& ~' O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: x; {- Q: w" K- \5 |9 J3 `" c. a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& P7 ?$ y( `) }3 z% I; @. Z+ P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
6 h$ E" i% V0 s- @- m1 Y5 e
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 I# M3 I( Y# b9 b9 j% W3 [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>