【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 y  S( T4 }4 @' v' K) oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& L; @+ e  G, T3 k, CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 D3 K1 X  N' Z' y" P* X# k" @0 \Seeing the sky content with its love
" I( G- Q$ X$ u$ n; LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 V# @) K' W' XYou needn’t fear anything
* U4 _3 X! e$ G" g/ U4 J4 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 _% L4 D& N( J" c8 H$ kI love you I love you with all my heart
8 Q% I) {6 t( `* P( PNothing can compare to my love
- D+ T# J# z+ c4 G. I& hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ T) A* ^; f9 \/ e: O) o$ z' oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  L0 J# T; s' ]" qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 q9 @$ w& v8 |. c( RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ z3 I! p! y% MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% d4 P& F" x% a6 R  _! N0 JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, b" R$ B  d- X( `' C- n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ z& `) [1 p: K: a  r3 h5 f5 o! \% C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 s8 U, R) Z8 B1 B9 K, W( k* ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( H: W3 v8 A. M0 n6 a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 E- ~9 R+ [. U2 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ r, a+ ~1 b* t: }& |! E! E* v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* a% _( B& i6 g- J& `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 [6 a! Z3 u# T0 q# N; x* b8 C( l<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- n8 {# n8 C; V1 h) M$ l$ a9 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! d5 G0 R: l5 I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: S# Y# L0 k% ?) e; C8 f9 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 V/ y/ x9 `! G) M6 l4 \8 l$ |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# t* k& |8 Z# V: t0 X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 w7 [  g# t" L, A6 w7 @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ ~( Z4 R- q% Z, w: k* d. k  O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. q, _% Q! m8 D- D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 E8 W7 m3 {' Q. d; R# a6 i% A( F: {1 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! b1 J: L* F8 X) N" P$ D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 F6 ?% s; J6 O0 {+ e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! n& x4 z/ |4 u. ]: R6 N8 L0 O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  w: r& Y  z8 C# z- v, j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ e* k" m+ Y% Z5 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( q1 Y0 ]4 x  E# y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! F" Y4 R: k9 l6 O6 c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% ?! `& n% J! O+ a# u  W" O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  X; W+ F' a7 N7 w! G6 X- N# _1 H2 ]0 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 A. `. Q/ x/ v7 R( H4 [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 ?( f0 K/ E1 j1 W8 U# u0 P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ C7 O$ ]. i% K, f: D% x- r( p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, h4 s$ y* W: |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: n4 C% T0 O- ~' [( b' s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ s+ q7 [: U% m+ K1 ^+ O2 K0 u5 c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- S/ w2 f, g0 p& _) H* U7 A8 r4 O我请你剖开它

- h5 U0 `* R9 j2 f5 {& w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 L3 ?9 R, e6 t+ K* f<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>