【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- ]0 P7 w5 Z3 E1 ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 ?7 V) a/ g' ^& lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 H" i# V% G3 \' m, YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- x9 x8 t7 G/ g0 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 ~# F9 t$ K. m2 x. L5 @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; J% |1 K! s/ e! w3 n. w0 W* ~* tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 d0 r: F8 n- o; FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ U4 ]* g0 I9 d$ PEvery other word you utter is love
/ S- X0 w  c) Y  iI really want to know just how much you love me
/ J- O1 U# d! h! G+ V' w; nI love you I love you with all my heart
% r' `0 C" m: a( o; r* ]1 u3 ~+ ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 E- p1 v6 C. `6 a6 K( DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 `0 w0 H4 n; t( x& B5 \" ]With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) E& r, C* V% R/ g4 R; l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 @8 T3 }* y- e; G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. A7 J, v/ K" K5 [5 X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; _% W/ K1 l. j2 p+ T4 V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& O) w  ^" X9 [! ~  ]1 @3 e0 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( ?# k$ v" r7 U# L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; V6 j  U! t$ A- ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- {; D. u, _/ A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: q6 z- b; W' ^* ]' p! V" u" i/ M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 [+ ]3 A. ~2 H* o9 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 [8 z" ~8 k0 o9 b& S<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* g4 U- f$ w1 V4 m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* u; X! f% ~8 Q, x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" Q6 {/ t' a/ o, G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* F# k+ U* c" u6 u( I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 g0 U: L: f1 `2 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* Y7 g# r8 o# v( a* o; m! s$ z: m/ m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 C8 ~5 g0 I, [9 O9 C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( _1 A$ B6 n( a' e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ Y$ ]9 ^1 L( O0 I- l! f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 ~, X; z6 l0 h, t; `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 d( O+ v" p2 B' |! B<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ T. m  k+ ~% K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ [  u, V: e0 G3 P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. l/ B9 Z. L  ?% P& t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 m8 i/ d. x( }$ C' H& r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 j. g7 u$ Y- h+ k( r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ D8 l% G" P. j* x1 y# b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. r% O+ f9 {( f4 v% d$ g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& e( r. ?- y% ~! g0 g8 Q: f1 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ P3 x0 i& E3 o# M7 ?+ F1 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>