【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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& P* \" F2 u+ r9 l0 E$ c  o我另将歌词附在此。
/ V* g, ~( q+ z6 Z0 gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 x+ ^. D9 ], r7 UThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 q9 B- v0 u& t7 XI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 B! }$ R) g  D+ k; CIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* k: @* c. c6 R# ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ ]0 g: n5 ~7 k/ }" vI want to confess that I love you,
" a/ N7 i# _; h! K" s* HBut I never did
8 |' v7 B$ D/ h/ f! Q+ ^- i7 d4 {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  Q, p8 o$ @  b2 e- ?2 `  a! i- MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. j9 v' U2 E9 a. t" D- UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# \) M" b9 Z; V4 c: lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! L2 C$ x1 U6 d7 c+ Y* iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( C/ m4 H- i& t3 B4 c2 N- dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ q. ^% u7 Y+ c# R/ s+ y. {Can I entrust it to you?
0 f5 B/ ^( |3 \Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: q, U- w+ b5 E" K7 f. Z! T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- w5 R+ u7 R# t  G5 r9 \9 \& m' t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 W0 Q. ?* P# A! @/ l4 X3 W! @<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% P* y3 W) p' r1 I! v+ f<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; T/ s; U! X; L, Z2 u: Y% S. {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ G, p; P1 D7 ]( i0 n; Q6 x/ ?<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 U8 X- o. ^) I! `+ y+ P8 h' S5 c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ D+ D; _! ~9 S! v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: y3 \( n# W/ v8 m, m7 m& X<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% e5 W. N; P! ]- D% S; }<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 h  c3 S5 j; s0 _. Y" ?<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, ^% y9 h4 p1 D" O0 H$ K7 u# L<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 c+ ?" N. M2 b) }3 \0 N# F& J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 k0 n; ]% L* x: V( O1 Y! b( A' c<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- @2 m( N; \+ {+ V  B' V<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* y' A# B: D/ U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
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1 M4 ]) |0 k8 o+ o0 f7 C<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 D0 Y( d. N4 n3 G6 d<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 X& E/ n. g; s, h7 w" p' r5 p8 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 w/ |9 N% i; }2 T+ W7 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, }& w" @) H( B. }' z' Z; X2 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# h/ p; p" \4 X- u0 O& z" l2 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ U5 \+ ]/ T  Y! L% p! c; p8 |- W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 @( ?" m  e; Y; `4 G5 H5 I) X6 B3 V<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 w0 }5 ?6 F- f0 _) ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>