【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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' Z5 G, A) `# c# {  E, A我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 @5 `% X9 O: C, P) A) ?From the first moment we met,
0 t! T4 D/ S$ @. ]) MI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ A% P$ C5 M$ D5 @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 L: U& C* R" L  m/ {8 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 I. L' D* o8 T" T6 }8 nCan I entrust it to you?
$ z- ^0 D8 n4 U& d: k% t1 MEntrust my love within your heart
5 \2 v0 m# }- O2 F# Z0 w, PLove… just the word love
( L' f% _$ [! c8 H# o& tWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- h( K( }, S: G1 f8 zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 i0 W, d4 X7 a3 l4 c. u* D0 iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 [$ |" q; g4 d) H- X4 F) [1 |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ a# |: g5 O6 J7 s" N7 ?) m7 mEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' y, \2 V. v4 o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" E4 q) D0 V( h' u<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; {9 v4 N% I/ K% {2 B<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, b5 v0 S9 M) I" @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 Z) r5 p) X& T% Y7 O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) k3 v) b8 ?0 m( g: q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; c' y) P* ~5 K2 Q9 ]<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, q. f( P$ X5 L- g: t8 k# K! g<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 J6 t9 h* q' Y: R( A, _/ f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# ]. Q# L6 `' u3 A% I6 A$ m4 r' F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 \, {0 ~1 c5 R<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 C* N: q4 g' \3 e7 t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* S+ e" |9 S4 O; e6 K( y5 J<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' J: ?, [: S5 i" D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 y* a- k) ^# a6 X6 \; W# N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 `8 u' X8 X- A! W) i2 A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# Z+ M8 ^/ t9 \8 S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 W) T3 B3 g( Y' b3 n! E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, z6 c# T4 X: j  Y$ i2 C$ X7 F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  ?& k8 C; w% O7 K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 K; B5 }2 c1 e6 X, T! n  }" W& D- n<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 A+ k. {! x6 C6 U! {' r+ g0 l<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. K$ b2 Z  g; @4 `8 |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ s/ `8 [$ k* _1 D" t- e5 s1 K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 s7 ]/ g3 I4 o- ?) s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! \1 w5 g" L( p* I! a- P7 w) O, d' I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! s6 ]9 I8 J2 a  V2 U4 |( V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( w! y+ w) ^, C) ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  I8 m; \, }4 ~7 M2 N9 A) g; ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 m- s: E( {! [/ x' z: L5 E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 o' A9 V4 c- U7 N% Q0 L0 J1 q6 E. q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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. P& \9 r8 P+ B# N' }<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ q; n" U, S- M  g" o9 g" T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>