【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
' k# \& o! `  u8 ]% vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! |& E7 ~+ ^9 _: x. B5 O  AThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
5 o2 V* K  B: u4 K4 b2 GI already loved you with all my heart
6 r7 {  C. t& X" K0 g; x7 pWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* B" j3 U! Q5 d+ \- ?9 y6 n) \If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 u+ y2 E. J& E6 Z$ \I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: U4 M# g0 p$ N7 u5 I, z1 mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% q2 n6 x+ ?) i, sCan I entrust it to you?
. t) M+ r5 x) D# U/ zEntrust my love within your heart
7 f7 z4 X5 }8 V/ m5 |Love… just the word love
( @. ^' P5 L$ t, ^Why is it so difficult to express?
/ o2 p0 Q+ b/ H( L/ w3 VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 i1 S# T4 R, I+ R" IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* ^! ~" A/ d; J1 zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" `' k& r! y5 R1 NEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' O4 U- h# _2 f+ R' B4 r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* S5 x6 G( j, i1 s: Z2 ~- r2 n6 Z) `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 x; k! z( b  {! r! R0 C: p: w<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! E" T8 ?1 T# X# E) R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! q  f" ]9 Q+ o" q' O4 _$ k, o- X<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 p% F$ \1 l+ y; ?6 N<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 J( [  ~! r/ K& T2 r1 s; Q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: I0 i8 `5 [4 w& }  Q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* }" _3 f. @/ d! a- T<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' [2 z1 A( @- V' G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 w- y1 ^4 c4 N3 a<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 l" ]; n, T9 L) F2 |<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& [, }+ }1 ?3 E3 `! k% X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# e7 H9 g5 P- B2 J2 `0 J1 }<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; [5 C! s3 o9 @* q# ?<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. d( z! @( K2 S% n& P! W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 O" n2 x0 S' |8 @! q+ Y% v: B) a5 c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" l+ M1 ?4 o3 y6 C7 L: |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" G1 d3 i1 }. F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ K% |3 r9 I% V' p! ]% A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* v0 F! }; Y& M) _0 q% `( A  F) q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; r8 l6 _  G& t1 N' s, f6 L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  {* n2 r# e- L$ x1 }<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 P, a6 Q8 p! {) L<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) J. E; X, j' X" b: r: H* B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ }7 P2 P' P; v% T3 q1 |<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, @( N4 F/ o& K* c2 ~<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; g  Y  B8 m/ F, N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; X3 l, W- `$ P# G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 V. P' ?5 q+ X6 Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ H9 O! M' R0 |- _3 V<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& j+ D2 N, ^% h; h. w; {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 u3 A5 [( c, |8 p, `( k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 X1 a7 B1 s" E  G$ H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>