【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
, D2 P. d9 c( B, jThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 B8 a" s5 m' k& mFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' t3 k* d4 z8 T( mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 w* o% I" a# b: NI would probably know how you feel
. c9 a4 ~$ z; e$ I5 ELove… just the word love
3 K- u, B6 i- D5 {- jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 T8 q( o1 @+ s% L5 ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ G; K; j" b- p* w( yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: R+ c9 U* D: iWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 v+ G4 p  Q4 @/ |4 H$ ZI want to confess that I love you,
& Z3 t& B0 F$ g* N3 O+ z' p, q6 tBut I never did
# D/ g' }" j, sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, R+ C# K% B7 t) b5 lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 Z2 f* ]5 N/ o9 m+ D; ]- x% dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 x% l: A  \; Y1 XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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; n- @  ]5 f( O  [[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& l) f& E3 x" a1 |# k4 i5 ^
) X6 y9 t% z& U! E# p<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 ^% X1 P% ?9 P7 \$ a0 v0 \<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 C( A" a  f6 \# I0 Y! B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" A4 ^7 M# z* U. l* j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* s" k# h* {7 z8 k8 l9 z* D) A. S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* k4 X7 ~, }7 y* |: S( L. s6 K9 i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ B) F0 B) K  C3 A+ J- k<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- E9 @  s8 J" {9 ~, n: N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. |1 a, l6 @8 r+ u: F7 I. K- m& e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" J5 \! ~# w# D6 g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ z6 L- W3 ~1 E) A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 y& E" w, j- s# \7 v, p, g<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# `6 i0 i: b6 w( W! n! `<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( {( O1 V/ t$ L( b( U  {2 I, A) W<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) f3 O; v1 Z+ L6 |! V' X7 a<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# R: \- r9 ]2 F<P>但我不会</P>
4 _0 m% H" z" `" R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ z; \; x' T" d1 {1 t- B, `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 b3 p" G  n8 D& D% l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* ^8 F4 H* T0 H4 B; K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: H' X" d3 `3 |* {9 A, M' O. Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! w. \5 E. z8 b* T* f, H+ o' z. O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 ~' K# \) X. Q& B) `+ Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
6 |$ E" E2 x6 ^) V! a<P>但我不会 </P>
; k/ T1 }6 q8 A+ P4 i# p% q# g<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 @+ A& p: }4 B' j# e) C$ m<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 N/ m) z4 z* a2 D" s) \1 G) }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 ?. V1 V, k: m4 g* ~, l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) k2 \8 O2 t4 H# k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 _7 \& V+ u" b0 X. ^4 R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& w) Y$ L" f3 z% T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: S' [" c: w) h( ]; Q  J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' L7 g! `0 Z% I  U4 }' x) z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" t) z6 C: B6 ^- ^0 c<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 h5 o5 A# g9 n; B( Z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ p) {  b1 M$ D6 t  F5 }  |8 r, T0 z
! M. L4 W1 D! Q  y! Y- N+ M, q  P这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 g* E6 c. e$ D' Z% [9 ^, K; x- H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ l( v# D% q+ Y5 z2 M; e$ `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>