【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 ^6 o+ `( |* C9 C1 w$ ?! ~我另将歌词附在此。
0 Q" A+ m& g/ W1 sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# u0 {" H) e) @( n! F' V0 uFrom the first moment we met,
% Y! z7 E; Q9 K* _7 v" [" [I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 K% ^; Q. v6 B. G2 jBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ I) `. m- E+ WI would probably know how you feel
1 ]" g$ h0 I5 }3 \) ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: s! p9 O" C' a' X7 [' s9 F1 B" Q8 ZBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 s! Q/ A2 B* k; P  U% F/ k1 LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 I. d9 @/ ~# E; @( aCan I entrust it to you?
+ ?; `, f, k8 Y) Z* y* M! KEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 v& X3 [0 @  J4 ?, X  ?I want to confess that I love you,
% ?% F+ h1 K, l; f4 Z6 _6 O! CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( ^; ?1 [8 t7 n- p+ t. `7 CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; _6 F, w4 n. s$ s9 |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 v  ~% `7 m) y4 |2 p4 }  K<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ F+ y+ M8 G0 c- t0 z) k<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: k) o% F0 U- {6 q& \/ S; j<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& ]/ T1 W8 o$ v4 K& Z1 h<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ I% D1 l# ]& R5 e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' O0 L' i, Q+ `<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" R9 s/ s! ^) Y& j* e- b/ P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 I4 V5 ?! W$ {/ C2 g1 J  E, F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: A# @* K0 U: k6 e" x0 d; p<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! ~8 U, b4 j( A2 \9 }<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  k2 |! u3 ]) C<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 |2 ?/ S+ j. n) \9 D<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% ^# }+ B+ ~" V4 t' f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 H% I9 {" w! U7 n& r' E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# ~/ H8 T4 k$ O* b( |<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! q# P8 I& ^- Y9 {' d$ G<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- N7 Y" i0 G5 a+ c5 t, }<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% s. ]/ d$ Z$ \; z, Q5 ^- G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ {6 k( G- I+ T7 q, `+ o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% r' N1 n. U1 h8 x: [, [  Z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! }. y8 R# \- Y: c, @/ s1 \- R& m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 u9 ]6 X" |3 B* R9 }# W: y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 }) Y- n! ?. W* P1 M<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ w3 c0 Z$ r# z: ~+ \  j6 q, Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# T- @" c0 y$ P3 B! T( w% r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% e1 L% g- G0 x4 A( W$ v: e  r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% V6 c; L8 ^8 k$ C9 u3 |& T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" Z: o: d' `1 O; M5 i) Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 y9 k& l4 F* \6 _, A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- w) n# k8 e+ x4 U% Q2 V8 R% {! [) v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 z$ g% A1 G% t2 O5 B$ @- E 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 H$ d3 _* H/ K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: p& W2 x' v  ]这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% c, {$ Y* T0 O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>