【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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  O  A) A& {, j" [我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& q* z1 d: b3 p8 d: h; EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 O: e  {" M. U( W8 YI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- R4 X9 i" z4 G; D4 G  lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 i6 J& m. v% H& K! A1 D% WI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ p: `, f2 }* \' dWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ T5 R9 w& o+ WI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 v- a  D! e, x* @If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* l, ^/ H1 B, T5 [$ ICan I entrust it to you?
3 V. {3 g4 h! w: ~1 H  [+ ~! J( IEntrust my love within your heart
& T3 S; V2 [. QLove… just the word love
# {8 V  k# I6 s# g1 _0 ?- mWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 O% Y: V8 X0 D, n1 Y. c, PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 N- v$ `7 A* E+ ]0 g( g; iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ f7 V8 d0 \' S1 Y, i* fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ C3 p- ?0 g" Z# JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' j, ~1 ~9 ]7 B( W5 GCan I entrust it to you?
* _1 k  X9 g; t- g" H, nEntrust my love within your heart
9 x- N0 z* b: NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 S; @' v8 j  t- Z+ B( Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ e4 ~9 H2 t) A; l- O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 N" }: F( D* z6 ~! K6 I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, ~: E* v4 j; P! G<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, }, z8 F# x3 m% E* Q# K! q# A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; o# Y+ L4 h2 {; k' |" R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 H# V' o/ c7 p% T# ^<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# E/ ^/ g5 p9 O( S<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ V% R3 w$ t6 \# P1 I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 h# f% V$ k& G2 t$ k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; h$ w: _1 K4 t# e5 A<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( _# W& b$ [1 a) a) y# L, u( `3 `) S# U<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% x8 ^" U% {; Y4 I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 j& g6 F# ]/ _  u<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& ?( @& Z$ ]& f. s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 V6 |! C% `6 w: N8 i4 l* z9 j& p! C<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; W; I$ o" B8 g5 `1 e1 z. J* x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 {; @/ \0 v7 }- A<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 a2 L, w9 K: w3 @  ~1 C7 @# \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 w0 y8 A; C2 ?; Y2 f  H$ X2 ^& M0 |<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 F' U1 T2 ]* E+ r7 T: M' G4 A<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 j% {6 {& ~& R) m. C<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; [$ \) `& @$ A7 y2 y4 B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" L" Y/ a8 e- k- k- v: _0 g/ u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 K# O0 ]; D) \) Q$ t, H* u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ }7 ?) C3 I% O; y6 Z8 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- O( e, {  M: n, ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* |) ?; C/ s, A5 r. u- h- W0 c8 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 ?# r- W) l: n& Q! A3 b' P" b  q8 K<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& t9 w  I8 S2 y5 f2 b& l0 j/ D' p 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, ]# [( O. ~3 {1 I: D<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 g' G0 U% m( W/ `% ~+ K4 d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>