【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 U# I: n8 O% ?) Z6 h" ^& Q: M我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 X8 ~  G+ v) `* _8 g5 SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
  ?5 j/ M; _0 d" |  L& kBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ q- s. o, U% SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" o( @% `5 B0 mI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( _3 A+ Y* t* E: G- _But I never did
: w/ n+ A& a1 L1 f' G  Y5 Q4 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: Y0 M. H# C  ^9 p, ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ I& ~! t9 W. a* l$ lEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: `! E3 ^: @  ~I want to confess that I love you,
: W1 a0 h/ I5 u4 j% IBut I never did
5 {- T* {) ?7 h$ P: H3 {4 ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; Y& j  E+ _& qIf today isn’t too late,
% d" C7 P/ O8 T; t% e/ K2 pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# A8 I7 c# f# [+ T" sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 f8 Q; m) {/ C8 D0 z5 [; ~; U) ^Entrust my love within your heart
6 T: z2 B' s  ~! A' Y+ UCan I entrust it to you?
# O, b" e- x5 l5 ?5 {Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( W2 H& _' h: N$ N; c" q8 |<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 ]/ S' D! O% @" @3 f  N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% @  F! G, ?! S2 g<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 _' ^& J# d+ C1 `8 _8 k<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ e: w8 h$ D) ^# l; N<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, Z8 C& {! p$ @% u% p4 P! c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# o* ~7 N* d! d( {7 v0 W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, J4 s- ~) R8 F% Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
" T  `/ D; p( ]! G9 M% T) }* C: p8 Z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( }' @# s* P3 e( o<P>但我不会</P>
2 Y9 }6 Q, @. `8 E# j" ]' p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& q# b+ F4 K' ]7 W' M<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  [7 l. g2 X5 s4 ]) E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; ~; g- T( X3 c1 j$ G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! P+ R, v2 U; r* c3 W7 I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. Q% X, ?6 x" l' u2 O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 B) k1 u) O5 c, j' t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% X/ H" N& i: l! A3 _, h; M- m7 \<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 }6 l) e4 H% o% R9 G+ N" s/ D<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ [9 S4 s: X) r5 O( W0 w1 y<P>但我不会 </P>
3 W$ I# D: I' k/ b$ D1 L<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. ^- ]( v, Z( M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: P4 [* S: E% X5 Y6 i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& r& O/ h3 o) Q: o- N1 c+ I, `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- B9 ^. }2 ?/ M, S4 U' b1 c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ o2 T6 Z5 o$ I  H: T" N+ `, x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 n4 j% G7 e  V# V1 }  b  r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# J. t7 W0 a% L4 x; d  G0 x5 H6 _这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>