【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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( n6 Q6 j. g$ L7 t; k2 F我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 C8 C) j, N4 y! t) f/ MFrom the first moment we met,
% r. `. q7 `" l" H: Q7 H: l( WI already loved you with all my heart
! B7 `8 w: I) ^7 F# a( GWe meet and talk everyday,
7 D, T! F& g; C7 `# ?7 r5 sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 @# Q  [3 y1 N$ P- w: z9 {" L7 W" @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
6 A' _- b; t' D; j! p' c( SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 X3 t9 r4 ]2 W* Y: OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 K4 _" A: L7 f- }7 tIf today isn’t too late,
0 C9 `" @* t4 Q2 F# YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; ^% I* {' c- i8 ?) jEntrust my love within your heart
( |, W; W9 x' u6 d$ y8 OLove… just the word love
7 E3 E+ e) x3 ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ v5 d  i5 Y! y; U# L! _4 xI want to confess that I love you,
% S& S  d- a% P7 zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' b: d6 q  C% v# W$ P1 @If today isn’t too late,
8 k/ n# ]8 [, A: B0 y, ~3 qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: v' ?7 T) H, b( X  N7 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 F' G  Z0 \8 [* Z$ f/ r7 wCan I entrust it to you?
. B& R6 {" V3 b+ J+ uEntrust my love within your heart

7 D9 y& L+ U% h4 p) k" i[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" m! N+ H. s- P  d5 A$ }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- }4 H+ F& `  o; Y1 Z% ?' ^1 y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 w5 |) E1 g  \. `<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- p# Q+ `) h; F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, d- [$ |" U+ t+ V: X2 k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ N7 c, D  {8 w. `$ E% B: K<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 p& ?* e* H6 t3 q- ?6 S6 b( j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! N' @3 H; A0 t- n! }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: k- U% i' D( Q6 s: N( c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( Z) F% B% ?9 M<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 ^1 I7 s( n$ r) J5 P" ], T' Q; f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! `# r  M5 X5 C# O/ _/ ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% P$ _) d4 k" l, A" v7 o2 `<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# O5 n: g, e. Y/ M* t" M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* K; h  l0 a+ h1 ^& m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 V$ B8 z0 u8 h4 \<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# y* H2 _' c+ u; M, x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( O2 W3 o% W' T7 ^7 t- Y1 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: V8 M( `. \$ z9 ^0 {) D; H+ ^8 t7 g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 G8 j' l9 X" h% y9 s  n- B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; o, B0 P4 w0 v2 j6 M- v<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# c0 y2 Z5 e! e+ n! {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ \2 V; T# ?9 @$ V8 r<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
5 h+ U+ ]. Z4 O$ w8 @<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 P: f7 Q, p+ }3 ^* j( {8 n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& [- K" t4 I' s9 ^6 b% q8 @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; ?, g1 O6 u' _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* s8 F1 E5 [& r  A& _4 i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; a* k; G5 R1 D5 J5 E. ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 c) y# P8 e" O! ~2 I2 P) r. j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 Y' w" s5 t6 n' M; B* s. U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 N- [0 w* c; c" @: W+ i. x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 G/ t3 D6 ~/ s8 e' q# b' [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>