【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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5 p4 {% ]9 h/ Q) i  ?: U  XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- T! E+ w8 @! \0 k6 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 ~+ f: l  P# t% z5 D/ `' p$ j: ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 M5 e& s' M2 j8 e0 G% nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* z9 ?6 ?. |. ~6 t# I* sYou needn’t fear anything
3 ^" T3 e/ d& D8 ?  JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( U7 l$ }. T3 e9 qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 @' L; g, Z# h! w4 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% o- _$ c7 q- b/ s0 _. W  [" y2 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ o% X2 M5 G# l+ rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! E7 z% }; L8 i, m' l; O8 E3 `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% s/ K! R2 ^8 @9 {' O0 S6 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 g6 Q" `8 Z5 d1 L" `4 ]$ {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 e1 U' \4 E: A* v# d; G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* ?2 V1 b  ?  F9 i' z) W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 h6 E& F) B* l- {  I) x+ z9 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 J  w% u! v" j* {% K4 P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! J( F, T; z9 P  o<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; k* `& j4 `+ ^7 X8 H) [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  K1 c9 g1 q8 i1 W3 k+ F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  ^4 Z, |: G8 R( L/ I. c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 c' A* k  J* r* F: J' ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! G1 L* k" w4 N9 V# g) D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 R- j- r2 i2 {( C' o4 A, ~* S- d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 X( ]4 l! \( ^8 `$ I% q& `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 |8 ^0 [) k& w& r" \3 a7 X/ A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; {6 f& H' h' P, p) V) K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 h  Z1 E+ d# c. L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# O: ~; ^, N9 b- g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 X; a! G; s& F% t+ W$ }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 s1 [# }5 Y# I6 y- _  Z; s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 e1 W' p: p- Y$ j, H2 r3 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, {+ W7 C# y  Y2 P1 `+ P4 j; t+ g- j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 y' t$ R' q1 |/ _- ], x9 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  ]1 i% p: }* \) ?我请你剖开它
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! v9 L7 {8 e( H- e; {6 ?& b" f- h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>