【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  X7 x% H3 I/ ~& p: {歌词我附在后面。
% E, a3 b. d' l6 rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& W7 r8 ?7 ?) Y5 n: a" dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( k8 |0 k( ^- T' ^* qWith the moon kissing it every night
' v: U4 O8 v% n7 H! LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# ]* u, q7 Y' a# ]" j" O1 oYou needn’t fear anything
$ o; I4 P# B( HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' x- y  R4 [6 l$ C, \: KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# w% f! c* d) pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 _2 f% A& J3 Q; w7 ~; AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 k6 U7 d9 g* E& E+ [9 \With such a tongue as yours,
$ E9 I! D9 K" ~" w8 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. ^0 c& S# O) dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 w3 ?6 ^- X% M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ r& D* G6 R; l4 T/ o" D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: U8 Q, e8 ]) [5 ~9 S- r; D0 n" c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. k1 ~6 ?3 E5 @6 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 r2 i& [1 q8 W  s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" V2 N; Z( D, Y9 z! h9 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# ^% R. p: V7 h4 U' m- z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) w; p, C1 `: h- X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ v2 o( V+ Z0 J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ p+ D+ k2 W" T! w( I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 w; {0 G/ a# d5 G# @, ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ i& r+ c4 T) o+ G2 g( M2 ]5 V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 B5 M+ a1 S& _. ~6 L9 {5 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 g4 Y( t+ S! K9 `5 E0 ^5 f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( X! E3 ]8 |2 x8 c$ V* r! b; H" F8 p( p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 t' C+ ]: f% H0 ?2 X8 J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ M' O9 d5 ~$ v3 |) N0 {/ _! _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! y. N+ j, u3 V* ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* S" A3 h* q- r" {7 S$ b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( d$ n& t7 L9 p# R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( R4 T, l6 l# G; q( f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- Y, C, u$ D. S8 u8 m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 b: }$ t; h0 |, t6 N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 }; M" R( |6 {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 M5 E. h* p) u" o<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, Y3 b: b! `9 J* H" ?6 I- I0 ^% F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- M$ C4 U4 M& z2 {) i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ L3 ]- J/ f0 u8 K8 ?# S$ L<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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& V3 m" J0 `( ~' B- Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>