【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: X1 L' W' x' f: g1 P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. {$ x. Y/ t  j: {4 |2 oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, x6 {. A$ a0 q$ \: J2 M( kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ D; T* F* h4 s' Y6 P* i7 z; dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" S$ z6 S7 W" v( G4 A3 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 e; n: e8 b" m7 J( Q$ }Seeing the sky content with its love
$ N" ^. G8 }- R/ NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& b, I7 B  e* p* d5 qMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 p0 Q! H$ F% O- O' x1 a8 DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' o' f, |/ i, Q# x1 C+ {. VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 r8 }" Z0 ~/ o% n! ]2 {0 jI’m still filled with fear
3 n0 s7 Y4 c) _0 u' N. U8 hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 e" d+ O/ v6 |% y9 Q. II regret not dying
- P2 M  {4 N& o: i# F1 C& VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 F  \/ A+ T) \" h) ~8 ^- J7 ^With such a tongue as yours,
2 z2 ], m. S  q2 p. iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: |  N1 {3 ^& b" a/ HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, G  f- M2 h  D3 s! g9 A4 k& I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ g$ C) k: |9 c: q0 A0 B3 V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, D& `- f" m, F# V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# D+ b: ~+ Z2 T- ~6 q' W' @; B( V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& x" C  \+ F1 D2 `) x0 k1 Q- D, x/ B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( C6 N0 s% F' y& h3 }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 T2 a5 T& U) R/ c' `, v9 ]; e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ |" }# m5 d3 M# u. j+ \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 Y1 E) ~5 h' ]* F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 ^3 \+ d- n' S+ b! M9 _* s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# c- }0 G+ K4 B  s" V, K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 `( G+ B5 v$ ^# x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ ^. q0 p+ k+ z" q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% z; u. K3 G$ |0 d# l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ d: c3 P7 y+ {8 B. F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) l3 v4 p, w# ?0 T: ~6 N3 e* ?+ a8 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% v6 ]& C* H" K' F2 S. d  T# L; \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& u* M- t' z, s8 J; v: i0 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: K* Y) T. w4 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 S% J$ ~4 A/ n  J- y0 c; D! A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 L) g7 P3 Y$ @9 H; V' X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- m1 G# i  Y/ a3 v  r. X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 p: m7 P5 C6 o/ X( @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ x3 h- _$ t2 U0 _. X4 G3 z5 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; B# n) w4 R2 q2 s1 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 \5 K. g, {/ ^- T. o4 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- d2 V: u6 {0 z6 M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" P8 ]& [6 m+ x1 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 P- v( T& y& ?# w2 M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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. z: ~) O! T, ^1 t2 n& w9 D/ H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>