【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' v4 A7 R5 E" {  FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; C* U" ?0 K# _8 _- k5 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 T( C5 f5 n. W4 w! ]I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& i3 f% z6 M: V4 b, U  VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 g6 ]+ B# O5 T) {- I# i* VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( M3 |# i+ I* _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 C1 S+ [) j/ M$ h1 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* M$ n) \1 n, J: J. i# O# A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 }6 d1 S) Q' Z- p: {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% D( o  s! x7 L; v) n$ V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 ^+ P1 H% b! T4 L1 Q* }$ n1 f/ b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 B: U% v4 u6 |% X1 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 B3 B8 B0 Z' A# z1 V: z9 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; x0 m9 g" i2 {5 Q6 A& o' ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" M9 J6 {9 s. |  o- y: l; c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  [& B5 @2 _! E$ v0 _% K7 E1 x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 i+ N! m/ Y% k) u! S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) W* J! W9 h/ Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 L% F4 u2 a0 _! q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ w- s: h6 `' D6 p- x+ e( n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! i$ q7 w: B0 ]( C' v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; S7 `. }% R  g* c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: y! e  \: J/ o9 P2 ^+ i5 z3 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 v5 l' J8 y9 G) b3 m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% Z7 x, i- i+ y" v- {+ q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- Q; g: `! C# p7 i: B" k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, g" k& v$ M+ u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ E7 B( J( E$ |0 |6 T7 P( u7 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! f% {% f! c5 v5 D5 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 g& R% K& D! \5 D: Z1 Z: r+ H# j<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 x0 z  \8 o3 z9 ~. U8 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ T: S$ c  t, X4 s6 [, J! B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

1 X! B8 Q5 i' R3 K* K2 \5 u7 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>