【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' M3 }( R- _6 C- i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 G- j6 |( Q0 ^7 Q7 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* }4 V7 g+ G3 D* D# rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% `/ ^- w" h0 rWith the moon kissing it every night
6 A' h5 V% \$ }7 |Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. ?! i7 ~% v2 |6 u# dYou needn’t fear anything
; p* a' {# @  L/ G. ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* b' V& `) H3 w, AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 ]/ ?; U3 ~; C7 X2 j% hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 Y0 e$ T) P" a. M  {3 C+ [4 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 a2 Z- n- i9 dI’m still filled with fear
) w/ W; v- ?- r/ p7 u! }0 r- ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 ]4 c" q1 R  u- z: i' zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 R9 k9 A+ i5 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ P6 i8 O  K) Z9 ~5 c9 a0 T6 q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 V* [% G" q  Y+ g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ V* s. h, V8 S9 \2 |0 c3 A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 m" T1 e# @2 Z1 c) n9 l& C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: x8 Z. g1 a3 b* I, J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. D& u1 @" M7 _( r" x; g<P>你无需担心</P>
9 c. e) q( c* N7 L: D& c* ]2 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  p% ^9 q) Z! v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 ~& Y1 r$ U/ t2 t6 M7 g  g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" U1 T( v% ]! A3 A" K" ?2 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 {- O* X" K) G  l. J3 a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( D7 m' P9 ^7 q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ V' F7 q; ^+ {: U% P& r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' c7 ]- d2 x% z) K& ~$ a3 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! K; W: @: \/ f/ C% s7 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% C  a1 C# r4 k+ q- h8 K' T/ |6 z) X  L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 I/ D4 |9 N5 I  {( c& p& G; k# Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: O. t7 L7 r7 D! h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. _( {8 Q) f  k: f$ U- B; ]. s. F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 t2 |0 O: A5 D8 A/ m6 Q/ b5 _6 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; a- ^9 V+ V5 U( Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* z  f4 E: x0 |+ t' J, ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

# j( z7 Z: z$ S9 c' g% u) b  y/ g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 t3 |2 b9 \7 F& v1 p! I' B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>