【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* x. }3 w2 q5 q3 l8 a) G+ {( i' r歌词我附在后面。
- E& L- p  F* KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- Y. V% M1 L% H8 c# ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 j2 c- J, s$ j! l$ Y! ]2 b0 \1 |When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 ^6 ?# @$ O- x, HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( o8 s" I0 {& }5 w5 N( b/ p  ESeeing the sky content with its love
1 O/ `) q6 C1 U$ f( |. D, R4 [It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! P+ e& G5 v, s! @- F+ E  LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( ~. J1 P2 N! d- M* r- KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( _: q' H+ I: B$ {& i! W9 q' mNothing can compare to my love
4 s! a  P/ L2 _5 O2 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. X2 a/ T4 _7 s# N, d$ GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 V& O- @6 {2 I0 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 D2 P) q8 |" xI regret not dying
4 T4 Q. T  E- i% c: [+ v5 UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& i' d7 {/ u2 O) V( C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ Y* \3 N  L# ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ L# M( C, c  p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( ^& |+ F! K2 O/ w3 u; d5 r# X% i* d  k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 L: A( w' d/ I' }3 a& n. X+ e7 F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% O5 o+ Z! Q/ \1 ?' A& J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! ?$ ?3 h7 f3 g! g8 o# t+ z6 L& L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 ?0 C* V, x& x* u# W4 F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  C+ C1 u! j  O; M& H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! N* j. S$ ^% a/ u. D9 D: q6 h+ F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- A4 o6 w8 }9 p9 ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& X3 w  c9 I; G2 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* C0 g: Q; ?2 L) B  T- v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- b' o' ?/ s2 Y/ e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. u! b3 d! a) m  D. K" J* k' r& o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 f8 h* G3 j/ P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# E$ Z7 P) z  n% t% F<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 o0 ?- J9 M' s0 t1 t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% N" q* t4 z5 H$ z" N4 F/ i9 G; x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  r  B1 l; U, Q! u0 g3 R3 L4 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 W, {- v9 D9 @3 h! P0 F& [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 J1 e% b4 k. D. J. K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 @. L* H( L) B1 c; y/ h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& P  }* i7 h( ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>