【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 B# X& [& A0 t  YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 L1 p, s, X7 r: c0 f. pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* }1 g3 a8 E8 q, E, N0 P+ L/ nWith the moon kissing it every night
, m' n7 ^* n+ u# T* i7 FSeeing the sky content with its love
8 r2 h! b  l$ g- q0 L5 f4 Q4 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 f; X3 G) f6 [% bYou needn’t fear anything
1 s* ^$ u, H+ U$ G9 kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- U4 I. }3 J2 Z9 h: ~# _! hEvery other word you utter is love
* a9 k+ \. e; u/ |8 F5 S  \3 R$ eI really want to know just how much you love me
) N  o# Q! X  U) }1 t8 aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 N: _* A! g, v' w* OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) l) h- R# N+ Q! K1 k# F# i* p7 {5 [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! Z( n* e1 j! h6 s& B  AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 d9 O0 t3 r, L8 }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 b0 I$ `% G: z* T# Q1 s; Q& }( AWith such a tongue as yours,
3 i: u: X" u" J9 B8 W( RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, w" h2 q# j/ I* I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& I: }0 i8 U% ~# k+ Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* J) E+ s: V& g1 r/ A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% F0 b2 d) F/ B. Y1 f* r, C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 @! H! n" ~* {4 F0 `8 Y9 {. p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' y6 C0 Z2 `6 K+ T7 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! f, L7 U; C- j* ^- F1 Y- M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ w. a# q9 Z! O2 K! _: e  b" W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 Q& |+ l; a; D0 k* D<P>你无需担心</P>
  W# u1 L$ k" t! |; X+ J8 d) i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, B3 ~/ O' G) n1 E6 Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" Z  L4 g) t7 |; O2 C) e+ I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& ^% a) t9 k; c. ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( c1 r0 _' S7 y* d8 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 G- B9 @( h1 K  a0 y3 |! U7 G/ y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" g3 w& P$ k0 y( k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ T" w) Z1 {2 Y7 A' V. z' n1 B: v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( P8 X1 q) S6 v2 a5 E$ R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' j) ?' ^6 j$ C% z8 }& p3 M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ X- Z' `" L) g: [0 @5 U: N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  H8 R" {+ I9 S3 a/ N7 D7 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 ?  |; Z3 I- G" U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ Z2 R6 Q) h) t0 k! i% s/ e+ @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; Y! F/ j3 U7 ~, I: t2 i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 B, z. e* [. F- Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 J& \+ l$ d( B" M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* b- g' O& V9 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% P- R! L% N( v7 K  ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 u0 t* F0 n9 _+ G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. B8 ^" F$ E' \" m* l<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& C6 }3 o# r! Q7 a6 O, R. s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 \; }4 _7 k+ F- _% A, ^) Z1 r我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>