【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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9 ?7 W) F/ N& c7 W  v! t3 y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  x! l  o+ Q) ]" B, z/ @+ XFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 ~7 x: c( o* u( j7 v- s# \If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 R. Z6 z' u) q0 `. L/ x, hI would probably know how you feel
# D. k" M' ?4 H$ Q7 V8 W  G  X: U/ OLove… just the word love
' Y$ y' N" G2 ^* i9 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
- d: G* s1 F" y8 {, }. l2 w' vI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& F; }4 W7 a+ uIf today isn’t too late,
: c  R4 s. ?7 |# m/ JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 }  w" j5 e5 w. j; ]* |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 b1 {, S9 X  S5 F' rCan I entrust it to you?
. l8 g! q. X/ h9 L% `1 {Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
; \7 {. s. c0 W, _6 k+ i5 q9 VWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 [  v9 E7 M/ W& E+ z' OI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. b) p. u* `$ cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& X) X: i* i4 z& z8 c8 ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 e0 T+ A2 P3 a! `% yCan I entrust it to you?
; N  K8 @. m! P3 ?. oEntrust my love within your heart
8 e6 S- w$ C5 S& eCan I entrust it to you?
0 B- M, D$ d  t  _  @' a6 TEntrust my love within your heart

# Z( b2 f- r: j/ o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 F) p- s$ q4 J" Q& k, v0 x# H' l  X<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& q# ^6 y% F: b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 B8 m3 B/ g0 l  N<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 e# {) n$ S& |. E4 v1 G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& _6 [! L; Y9 e, E6 E; v7 J5 k<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- S0 j3 B# }3 B4 R$ [9 r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ o+ F4 |$ n- i) I, W. q8 Y. W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 k0 L+ s2 _% x0 J3 U9 a7 t0 ^6 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 w' ~7 `3 ?- I( {6 y# D  I2 M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 M1 z7 h( ]) ~" w: K% F7 y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 V( N7 Y+ U6 v! E# W4 V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; u. [% b. W0 a* n  G, O% r<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( f1 E4 L. A& w$ p# e7 N<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 l; t; p- J, A- C% s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, G! f' i: y4 R* D, \& Q3 w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ \5 C. `. |. E  K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 W1 @5 o6 ?5 E6 @4 h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 b+ I8 S& h+ [4 B& _8 Y6 v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ j. ^* a- R# R9 A* J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 Q1 \/ a; T4 x" K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, e) o* s# B3 Z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 U! y0 ^: w. u7 H( g3 i2 o. m<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* S& H" Q) M' C  p! G  s<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: Y  C8 E5 Y" [3 h$ v0 }9 u% \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; ]. ^5 E& R. v9 e& t0 ?: m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
, U) A1 C9 O* N% x# e<P>但我不会 </P>
& n3 D" z& P. k<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' f6 W% K. {' x  `& i9 Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% D' u( Q7 w. {' j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; y  k3 d6 e9 p# y: c+ C# \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 h( e8 E, p3 ?* E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) o0 E2 U5 n5 s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; r7 |; o, R% Q6 n5 ?- n* g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 U6 Z' j4 h" X! v4 ?% L; p" c. P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ Q. G. i. j4 Y) ^, B9 ~) B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) K; f( n: ~/ q7 F0 w" J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 |5 T# X; u/ Z/ ?这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 ^6 \+ c) Y8 J) @# c) Q% w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ M8 n6 i; E8 A/ O2 @<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>