【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 j7 X- O' x2 n. R8 U/ i我另将歌词附在此。
2 J  U3 S  ]! D3 M: Z0 }! pThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( q) ]3 X4 s- Q8 X% JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( c! ?* F* v! ^From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ s$ N4 ~; Z0 p: OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 G) g& k/ j( _1 t0 k' [$ II would probably know how you feel
/ S% P2 J5 Z2 o( f! y) P  U( \Love… just the word love
7 u; R, J/ Z! d4 a1 X5 J$ k4 R8 l6 DWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ ]7 ]: q: U: z# Y$ v3 l0 Y0 fI want to confess that I love you,
' O( x7 q6 G& _9 `5 B# IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! F" }" _$ Y5 o$ v0 J7 EIf today isn’t too late,
. z$ i7 G) M( n8 X. i4 ^# fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 G5 d% C' M, |! Y+ i: ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) K3 c: B6 U; h7 rLove… just the word love
0 ]( Y& d& b! R6 n+ Y+ R2 v! GWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ B* V1 `- {3 L! A4 k+ U% R. KIf today isn’t too late,
" D+ R# w) j- W( }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ D, D( C/ _& d6 s: PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# ?0 z" T6 k/ ?* r9 V& @4 x' JEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! G# _8 E. ]; z2 t5 }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ t5 F, X0 @: r) ^<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ C" R- ]. R# R" I$ X<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 }4 X, n0 x5 X& k( p2 W# k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 Q& f1 p+ s1 v7 p: j3 l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: c6 h* V/ H' t<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" Z2 B' q! @& A4 i<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 c$ @; V8 i9 K: r<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& {. g+ [2 J& v! T<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  m; k6 @& J# H, {, h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. ?) W7 b) O' P- X. f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  V1 S/ B, p! b<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 {: p8 u& L1 Z, R3 A( I$ J0 U<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) U" ?% J+ Y9 n<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* D. M: }9 e) b: I6 o; d& c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 {3 M$ z0 \7 i  `! H' Z5 _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( ]6 R/ y9 E8 B" U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- G1 a( K! p/ N; E: y# R7 k- B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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9 v; @+ O  Y9 ]' i; U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ ^. s& q. a% K; v6 u<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 g" {+ p  Y5 ]- K1 C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ S  N4 t0 t. r/ d8 S3 o2 h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ A9 d2 r! n6 c0 `( E9 n<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* j3 u8 i- E5 b1 F/ j<P>但我不会 </P>
, f& \' g" Q; c; ?9 G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 F  v% K' |% p' S' ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 {0 {$ C, {- Q7 h  i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 v( b, e/ S$ M; {4 ]% k4 S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 G2 s$ A! A$ V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 Z! e0 H% E# ^* P& @7 F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( G/ \; ]! A$ L7 S5 M2 x: _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. a( M$ z/ Q" a! X3 {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: C! W/ P! M* |+ V* h0 |) ~4 I这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>