【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
4 K, p$ s7 [4 z: F" eThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( _. j8 `; ?4 d; m! ^( h8 qFrom the first moment we met,
6 U! i3 Y* W& g/ nI already loved you with all my heart
. J' m5 V4 e0 ?4 J, E8 H" XWe meet and talk everyday,
9 s+ I, |! E+ }  X4 ~9 b( ~  L  L2 }But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
2 i8 Y1 Y, N) x  T( R( ^+ uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ T" F* U  q% }0 ]5 e& Q8 }But I never did
' ^( V" V$ {/ Y: sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. k0 ^/ e0 L  k% y9 o" m  BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 r2 y# J$ ~* J* rCan I entrust it to you?
( ^, j/ G% R- K, A5 Z  B) P- `Entrust my love within your heart
  _. P8 r( x, fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 |: K$ q: B! N0 OI want to confess that I love you,
3 ^8 R9 Q' H3 B! OBut I never did
" G7 N$ |) m: YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% A3 v  |  }( F" U2 k  `4 KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" X" i, `+ Q  O1 P0 A$ W9 h3 L- YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  u+ p" U- i0 {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. b$ E  b! D$ LCan I entrust it to you?
4 w: h  |& K7 ]4 M& u2 gEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ m- Q# e; \/ [% q8 _2 h+ Q& W<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 A. u  b' P  p' y" R2 ~<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 |6 r$ J/ b( B. N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: x: s, b+ L; S<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ t  ?9 m# E( |- A; k; E<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ j- N. f. m4 d0 ~( V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: r3 b$ h4 r; H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* T* ~' {( w' E& O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: U# c9 W' C! P( ?<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: U* S2 f/ g( a6 y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 k* R0 P/ j9 z' m<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  ]" m2 k1 b1 f' a/ T. o, C<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( R7 p. s4 H. n# K* A' |' [' h# x# p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ U, V  H$ T8 V  v<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 |% S/ k1 B! O1 P/ \8 |# B( D. P" p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 W1 h1 t' G* J# H; w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, F2 }/ z1 m- G+ R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 T. Q8 ]1 n4 }$ I" J( |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. j+ I) f* T! S: `9 ]; O4 g  J<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 d* }1 X7 q' z* j1 y8 b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ S6 ^$ l! i6 M% s. N/ B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 a! d7 J$ t/ v: e- S  y  \6 R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; s( I- w2 L: L3 v$ {  M<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 l# C  ^" R* }2 w( P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 N* x& @7 M7 N; v; R# w8 }" z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ {4 s8 i- h. H4 X! D! Y& T+ _<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( y3 v; o/ d5 w4 ?" ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, v  U+ E% J, |' H* @4 {8 }  V; c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 G  w9 c% Q" P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ `/ l' V" I8 U/ p+ }5 h7 m/ k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) D4 p( p2 F9 `: }1 n# g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, X) B) U6 J9 T7 N3 a; |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 D# x) P3 \1 a7 b  x8 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 G$ g6 C- ?6 q& S$ |% x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 Z2 F4 g# Q! ]+ N这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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$ m. e" ~4 x% C( v/ A: G% F<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ F* j, h0 z' z; f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>