【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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4 e$ h  v: C, U2 D* ~& |我另将歌词附在此。
, W6 d5 \5 k; g8 r' Q, S! u! `5 PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( Y4 z5 z' O1 l' mI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" w1 s- j9 _" l- g# r7 iIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 x" V8 y, |* X- d8 dI want to confess that I love you,
- z" J8 q) b7 w: hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 ?6 n, M+ U: NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 Y0 ^5 v. L) fCan I entrust it to you?
: U& o# \8 c" ?7 kEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
% ^0 }. o8 U4 k: c" t( }# [Why is it so difficult to express?
4 G5 ]- Q$ m5 o, X  `I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) f2 Z: t1 i% _, II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 m0 P7 q9 P. U" a) XCan I entrust it to you?
3 ~0 i9 c. j) l) e2 A! P1 U6 @Entrust my love within your heart
) q5 R3 z, ^1 ^4 @Can I entrust it to you?
# P3 X: i3 _% T* d7 DEntrust my love within your heart

, F+ Y0 W- A  I3 y9 ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

6 A- \+ Y6 ?# N& f/ f2 r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* g- |& d% v7 Z4 [$ J/ x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  o; _4 L; X2 g8 d% A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ G" `) ?  Y7 J( ]1 x% ]<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( K3 }! K+ X; Z% J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! s$ d2 j) i4 u. e5 U. k% n% {% \<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; R8 C# A/ y# j: G<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 Z; `3 I# K  e; G% W3 F! R" j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 A4 r7 a( X# j& Y1 n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* q) G. x* O# g9 |<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 I! O% B! `- M/ q9 q) Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 E! j7 M; Z1 a! B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 D! n5 C0 c$ ]/ ^6 o' j  f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 d9 S( E% v: ~& }  e4 Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, i( D6 G% W, K2 Z3 Z' W<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# Z4 w0 f% I0 @* [: p" K7 p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# d: e7 R( {7 d" ~6 [& h) A<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 x7 J: G& P3 _* x/ G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" f- ^; l! {! ^9 E# \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 Y. i" A) l) L$ C1 r! y* j& w<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* f1 N' G4 k0 u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" R. u/ Q+ R  I8 _8 M! S+ |+ K( y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. x: c7 @  j" A  F4 }3 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 D2 c5 O3 p1 ?9 L5 i( H5 z! b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 n% ~' v; q9 T( \" g这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; s  W. L, r! m/ |" M& Q: e' s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>