【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
; g# H) {5 H4 |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) c4 X8 u) b: p1 D; }/ S. |& xThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
* @' h  X2 Z. e- x4 H) DI already loved you with all my heart
) v- G% E% D0 d9 p. D9 O! }We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 t/ H2 I, {4 J$ J( T9 ?1 J* ]  X, xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ e% e; g7 |' \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: C3 D7 v4 B3 \5 w7 w) {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ Y. J  O0 w4 Z: iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 M9 ~: ]3 _* }0 G" L  w4 bEntrust my love within your heart
7 s9 P  s  [# YLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ I) ^3 p+ q/ h6 s# FEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; \; p& P! A' j0 n# F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 C: {& Q1 a7 O) p9 Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  \/ X$ r8 H, l5 z7 z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 I" m9 c* @! f6 E2 t- [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, Y5 W$ V; s7 `: O" U. x<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 V6 L5 c1 l( ~8 a# O) @8 ?- V/ U: W9 t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 [# o" U. ^! S; ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 W* v( P3 _. j9 l+ V<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! T) N  F. Z# D3 k4 E<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; F# D+ {; ^. Y* W% ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 U( M4 |( {& j3 p5 ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 d/ A: [/ f: b0 Y0 T$ r; C8 H<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 E9 Z* k& ^( H+ g<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 y8 W& s, K4 B# h- M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% B% ~) o. h7 e8 Y8 k  }0 y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 f2 }) e+ _, y( g* M0 \( E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' Z& a' p1 R1 T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 b+ z) R$ I# }( S0 C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% u$ s7 v! ]  k* B1 P/ d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 z4 v' \: E' P6 t# x. ?, x2 f- g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 w: n- ~- C8 W7 l+ s- o6 `4 {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* V! T. K/ l9 X  q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; ?$ r9 |4 I" d9 Q! N* _1 \<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ c! d- z3 v& E2 t6 [. }8 A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 b3 b4 i* e# {* ], T( S  x" _<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: q( I' P6 g7 K4 _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ p# [5 c2 Q4 H) |9 b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* A: w* M* ]/ b) B, ^1 V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 b6 o6 R/ x! ~# U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

7 N2 R$ s( p4 I" F+ N这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 o3 n/ j: l2 X- g: h" \6 V% Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>