【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 e, R: `! k* i2 J我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. {) f# P6 y, j% VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 [/ u* V3 v) pFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, Y7 i9 _: }; ^- U+ B$ B" Q; }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% W# o' @0 h% y% I3 z; sI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
9 U9 t& k. X" T+ h% ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 X/ [  S- E+ q6 F  uIf today isn’t too late,
; j* ]/ I3 N  Q7 k4 `$ {& BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 a9 p( j2 w" @3 I7 X# ~Love… just the word love
& A+ a# Y- q3 F5 J$ jWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 Q  y5 n5 e/ `4 B5 h6 A4 H. l- j# xI want to confess that I love you,
4 a& _. s. p7 d4 q) DBut I never did
9 n- ^/ O4 z0 R4 S6 D7 j6 Q  SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 I7 o  k: q2 [. R% I0 t& r! t" {4 Y" kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- h! x8 t6 e0 |( D; ~) B4 n% NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, `2 L$ B9 ^# @. S% a- j" r4 bEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' P; w- ~, V  N+ n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 a  p3 W  K. ]# d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; p7 p5 x4 h& x0 i5 |: r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. ^$ u5 o+ R" \$ L: N3 l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. q) m( G- M0 C' y9 T! l<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 y5 W/ @0 [$ ?* }5 f8 |" T# C6 l* M4 A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) c* p: ]$ B1 I9 B; l$ D<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 v% e6 Z+ O, |+ D! L<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' V; o* n) Q* i4 `9 G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. q& Z; g6 Y/ s<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 Q- Q% C" ~2 ]( [% d3 `6 b) u+ T<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 i$ i4 Y8 J% r6 A+ q8 ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( P" N1 \4 A8 d4 z, Z7 E; m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( H0 Y- \3 N3 `" A5 S/ v<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 T7 _7 \" j0 C  c- ^5 G5 v7 L/ N0 V<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  y7 V( ], j: a4 ^  E+ }; V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( Z3 d1 h# Q. T$ U5 Z) T# s0 S  ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 G  ~! F; D/ w$ h+ @( ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 _) y; x; W2 \; h4 K, o1 [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: s  G! R/ S- ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ ]( R' K7 r" ^  d( D0 E<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ K# H: b7 A! c0 s0 l/ @- e5 H8 O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* X9 {' L1 t# d& A, z& ~2 D<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 K' n: l, l6 b<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* Y8 F9 D4 s0 I: ]# ?2 D5 s5 v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 Q! Q! p, w: A  Q4 v/ m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) S  e) f# m& z# B" s; v" |9 ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, F- S; x9 h3 e- {& V) f2 f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ t8 \( @; N3 |8 }+ r2 `! }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  K) W5 U- {- M, Z/ l1 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( P- }+ @0 b8 [: S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 p$ l, E0 W8 J3 Y/ o# R" d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 @; H% a. K: C, X% C$ ?$ D; i% `<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 K% ?% j7 Z: r  r/ M$ o7 p2 X( b: C' h 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 N1 `$ J# W' w* ~这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>