【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( s* l! l( w) q4 kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' f6 @  c3 ^7 S3 }But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* f& h/ _6 Q: ?  k3 NBut I never did
2 b/ q2 Z5 v5 R3 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' w2 Z* w. o# R4 BIf today isn’t too late,
; I1 {. O2 I8 l6 MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! F. A' r) X: Z# Q$ r7 pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 q, Y; y1 k7 }  ]6 yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 |7 q3 {1 y3 g; Q) ~2 g  B" E8 `I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& L* m% L/ H9 a* o2 uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# F8 E% ], G( |: B3 lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) `) C$ R  e. w' E% VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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4 w! N0 X, l2 F- t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 e8 `' O; [) d5 q0 c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 w  Q" R8 M  s' A4 g* S2 V) X, E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( k8 o( B6 q- N: |) {5 f8 K0 E<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  r0 A! o  O) R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 ?4 I8 r% x9 q( u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( @5 _2 ^" c/ i! h<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 [5 V. H( j5 L2 P: s$ u/ l6 _<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 j9 ^& N* y$ [) L<P>但我不会</P>
! M2 G' \2 \8 d$ u5 i- v1 m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, p2 i& X6 d9 R+ h1 s- Z4 F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 Z" n0 }+ K8 k" e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 |9 ^3 q( d) }  O' C9 s, X1 q9 q: Y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. T3 g6 X3 O6 l% N2 N" v2 g( f- p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 B7 d8 O! F& B6 M; {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 {6 m+ {- C2 z' P, ]<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( T" ]' q7 J/ T* y! g. j<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# Z: L# k* }  V" [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# a6 C# f9 w( }/ I0 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 P% X4 z) g7 C- H! |; y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) d; I) a8 }) G1 j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ \  P/ @& _, E; C% A1 q1 \7 {! j" i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>