【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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$ V: i0 g( k3 c- R0 i5 O4 v
/ m; {" U% g: e0 N我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: @$ C4 v% Q7 g2 \' ^7 FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
; M+ |" e5 O+ s# ^6 s3 M) w* O( sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 F/ m, V( }2 g8 q' K, a' ?Love… just the word love
4 z0 g( d5 B" DWhy is it so difficult to express?
, \/ k( L/ \. H) `$ AI want to confess that I love you,
% o% }# k+ {3 @( o$ }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 @' o3 ]7 r' D  xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% u( A4 m, M+ Z# v) a5 UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 x1 y& b- B& H" @5 X- [% v, E! {: OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 Y( [) d+ i9 KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 u: g: d5 a( I  p# \+ v& dIf today isn’t too late,
7 T, N7 e! z; g, c, W7 HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 o% y# i# p& \; d, ?Can I entrust it to you?
( v$ y" p7 f0 X  [) r+ x6 KEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ c+ u0 i9 S4 q7 F: m) _<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& p  l. q+ m( c7 Z9 U! D# |<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 ]" W+ ^9 l4 n+ a  t1 h<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) |" _6 W( V$ z6 K* ~( M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 q) ~1 w3 k2 E2 s+ B- N<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* O# h8 N& p) V& d1 Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) }$ ?: U7 U" L! Q* M1 f<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 U- E+ u3 X$ {  N! A* i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 W3 q7 h: x5 V5 A9 N0 k<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, F: Z( [. Q% [% o5 m0 C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 I# v$ J& O* Q) v<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 ^( K( V2 C9 K8 v  d<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 u0 N4 l$ a& {; Y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# l0 Q" r# `2 B<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ A* E/ P5 `, R& G/ `<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! v2 ^/ }, P4 g' x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 S+ n5 Z9 X+ w: u3 m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% j, H6 ]4 r9 N' }  w, p8 Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* Q2 @& X6 x2 l) m" _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* N& H- V; u& P) ?- D& f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ H5 W8 }& N. T, y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; L# g) w2 X6 Z- l<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 ]. k3 C4 g4 r' J% m5 ~<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 X. V, Y- F; F( M+ y" I7 {<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' S1 c7 _; S7 W7 I& T/ j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- \/ j$ y: F+ {- u0 U! p7 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 t3 p! _, B1 T! [2 b6 u; G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' y, T6 N) h4 v( ?7 _& {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- Z  v9 s) U' S. R; S* ^9 A" b% M0 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" g! o% U7 @* [) J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" T( L4 [* a  {+ D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' m; B5 M: ]1 I# Q# K<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 S( y  D7 g" ^: M  `2 N<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) H) e: b6 f: H# u& }4 _# o$ ?( B这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 q' b! K1 ~, L# y/ s6 M8 R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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- R% S, F4 ]2 ~6 [) m7 u/ c( B<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 [4 F$ a2 F1 W8 P* V, A, B# H! p+ @+ v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>