【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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, i* G" K. [. w4 [0 H4 H  U我另将歌词附在此。
& s  x! Q* u: `) Q# [) \5 zThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' P4 {  w* }: u- J+ JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
$ F: o0 s  N6 u- {! x2 SWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# q8 n6 Z9 \6 B1 II would probably know how you feel
+ B$ H9 c5 h5 d5 W4 o9 f% t, r* `Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  Y: h" G0 _4 i4 gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 J0 V7 }# n' W% X/ U3 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* x0 o& z6 P) v6 H$ j, bIf today isn’t too late,
2 j7 L' S4 o+ P# tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 ]3 C9 c) p8 L, \- j3 i/ c9 R" ^Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- c' z. U: j  x5 X) \$ ?- jWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 x( X- Z8 _2 K$ HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& ]+ S9 u+ ^* f% e0 y5 WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 U7 y( a/ ~1 c" ?+ ^9 z- I! G7 E( S) II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; j( C& A% W! l" I, t- @" ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' c% g; J8 h+ Z' U9 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

5 ]/ |' C) s3 y* j2 W3 Q0 h; E' N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

* v' N1 a8 B; H<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 O, C% |% K7 K6 b% _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* V' I/ N5 C; g3 e/ ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 j% ?+ M# ~% H: u2 ^5 \* y" H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 r7 b1 x  ^. r4 @: b1 V. G<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( T6 @( t1 @( h4 ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' Y6 E3 A5 ^8 X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' H& K7 t0 Q) h5 u( i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 |- L) k; }) n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ \2 F' h! ?2 U' i  j) Z6 F<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" H& A, h# \: z( v: t# h<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 i0 V. U" S; C0 m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ i) X4 Y3 K2 B- z5 z  Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* H  t" k0 L5 h. [8 O% O6 z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 J  h; D: v2 S: S- ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- L$ V' `5 j7 c) Q- r<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; _6 C7 E) v; ^, j+ C& L<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, c3 s5 e2 ?  c1 |) @' q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- E( k/ W; Q( u. M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" j" N  n: O/ U7 J( V( [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* d; y: q/ R/ n& T8 w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% N) c! w7 `/ L6 `! U: B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 a# V  q4 ?+ N- {* m2 |% E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* \5 Z7 i( v3 h+ y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 p1 G! O" M3 _( @% j+ U2 x" ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 Q4 J) d5 A4 G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# R0 W6 W; S" O, N) q0 I0 b$ {0 I<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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4 H' l7 ~9 F3 c: R$ ], _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>