【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 C! ~9 X$ ^6 h* F& MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, C: Z% ]7 N# H- ]) `  DWe meet and talk everyday,
2 x# ~! T3 o2 A$ E0 l; }, vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 O8 ^7 z& U6 p+ {7 B3 E: f. GIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ M. f0 [: ]4 y( g: _, |Love… just the word love
; j8 h0 `' K+ K, |/ r  Z0 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 @; z7 m' z9 X2 o  i" bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# {5 K7 q9 ]: y3 Q  pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* A% k% x, n0 q+ ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' \/ |& y# V$ ^8 [  xWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( i3 h7 e  \  H9 N% iBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" S: R! u8 T0 Y6 F: }* U7 N$ uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# C# N. H6 `" p. SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 `# |0 Q$ _0 M% R+ _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

) j. T3 \- f6 G7 {4 r" Z* y3 R[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ y9 k) k! j7 m% a) d8 x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# U1 w# N) F' W1 l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) C$ r* Q8 K! O: d& y- \9 ~% P2 j<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 k4 S' g5 {7 ]2 J5 ~' [# C7 i5 Z. C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 y0 @! [/ ~1 `+ z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( n8 M/ z1 ^3 ^% |5 n4 X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- R% p/ e& [4 i7 F- M/ S2 n6 B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 b$ P) W& h. R; P6 d<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- Y9 E1 A9 y# Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: E9 w% z+ t9 _6 r! f& R6 T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 s: z1 K  \2 W# P* q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ y* ^0 E& o* u* t1 o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ R) V/ _8 J8 r4 g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# e' v4 b/ @' J7 {! L/ Z) D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 Z5 S2 k6 Z5 _& X/ a3 _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% @& J3 x  X; q6 y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ w& a8 q, S- d2 E6 k' T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 m4 s. q+ N3 f- r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) i! }' r9 L* E1 p  `<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* x  w, n+ p$ T6 q. X' E5 {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; ~  \6 u- ]+ ?9 a& {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" L+ b' s  N- K& q- c- s<P>But I never did </P>
" h. e/ @9 L& F<P>但我不会 </P>
, H: M0 u9 n+ h<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( c& r5 E( ?7 [$ ?. C. G<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 w/ |/ r2 d1 I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ ~  M. o9 p  Y2 t" `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. |+ N) v0 [6 \& D6 T8 O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% t) R( T) P, L7 S! G% O3 |$ u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 v% L9 M1 R+ o6 d4 U  Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) a0 m. H' {8 \) n! J<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 z+ W- v2 _1 c: \ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  P1 s" q" k% X, f5 \<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>